Title: Chapter 8 Learning You All Over Again II

Julian really handled that well. I don't mind his mother's view on him marry Amaris. It's a popular opinion amongst closed-minded people. You're doing an excellent job with this fiction.

Reviewer: Peach Martini Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 07 2011 11:19 pm

Title: Chapter 8 Learning You All Over Again II

wow glad he made up with his family and that they are able to become a family agian and enjoy each other. tam is right danile need to work out thing before they move foward. thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2011 06:11 am

Title: Chapter 8 Learning You All Over Again II

Oh, I so happy the chapter ended on a happy note. I'm glad Julian reconciled with his family. Even his mom came around. Emotional chapter but sure was needed.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2011 04:37 pm

Title: Chapter 8 Learning You All Over Again II

i'm glad that they cleared the air with a lot of their issues. still a work in progress but at least it's in progress. umm i want to see how amaris' oldest sister acts when she finds out julian is a millionaire. i mean she already 'uses' amaris, or assumes amaris will fit the bill for things i wonder how this is going to go down.



Author's Response:

LOL  I'm really going to be 'over the top' when Amaris takes Julian home.   You'll going to be LYAO for sure! OMG!  Can you imagine him going to the projects and how they'll behave.  LOLOLOLOL!!  I think about the projects here and how some of my relatives act from time to time.  I'm going to enjoy that and it'll be comingup in the next chapter. (But I doubt if I get to it today because it's close here at work and I'm working 12 hours)

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2011 03:14 pm

Title: The Cast

LOL!  I can't wait I can't wait I can't wait. 

Daniel must have bumped his head to think that a strong blk woman would just bow down and let it go after he called her a whore and we don't react very well to the on your knees thing that is a sign of weakness in some aspects to a sista. LOL!

Happy writing and bring it missy!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2011 01:31 pm

Title: Chapter 8 Learning You All Over Again II

Cannot wait for the next update. I love this story.

Reviewer: blkamazon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2011 07:49 am

Title: Chapter 2 Leaving Your Comfort Zone

He put it on her in the car. :) Priceless

Reviewer: blkamazon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2011 06:44 am

Title: Chapter 8 Learning You All Over Again II

So Jean finally tells why she's against Julian & Amaris' relationship. They are not the first interracial couple to exist. There are always obstacles in every marraige but if you're truly committed you'll find a way to work thru them.

Reviewer: Caroline Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2011 05:43 am

Title: Chapter 8 Learning You All Over Again II

Sometimes a good cry is the best therapy. I'm glad that the healing process for Julian and his family has started.

Reviewer: Andreas Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 06 2011 05:35 am

Title: Chapter 8 Learning You All Over Again II

I get that Daniel needs therapy to get over his insecurites but how is Tamera dating other guys helping. It seems that she's just torturing him  out of spite. If she's so in love with Daniel why does she need to date other men? And she is going to do this for 2 months. Him accepting this is such a stretch from his alpha male ways. When did he lose manhood?



Author's Response:

LOL!  He really didn't agree with it.  He just didn't want to be thrown out of the apartment and truth be told, she doesn't really want anybody else.  She's just trying to push his buttons!   Manhood is still in tact.  He's going to regroup and make some plans of his own! LOL.  These two will butt heads and sparks are going to fly.  I feel sorry for the poor guy who will be a pawn caught in the middle.  Thanks for the review.  More to come soon! 

Reviewer: Wilifred Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 06 2011 05:01 am

Title: Chapter 8 Learning You All Over Again II

I love that Demaris is eager to defend Tamera and Daniel already sized him up and knows he can't beat him.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 06 2011 04:50 am

Title: Chapter 8 Learning You All Over Again II

I knew it was only a matter of time before Daniel went crawling back.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2011 04:39 am

Title: The Cast

This story is so awesome!!!  I cried when I read the part about Joseph because it's so relevant to my life in so many ways.  I have come from the pit to the PALACE because of God's faithfulness.  Genesis 50:20 says, you meant it for my evil, but God meant it for my good. You're writing is so inspirational and I know that you will keep up the good work.  After I read your story, I had to go on youtube to hear Dottie People's song, "Meant it for my Good."  Forgiveness is so important because you end up hurting yourself when you don't forgive others.  Thanks for the wonderful story!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  All of us have failed and need forgiveness sometimes.  Even though Julian was wronged, he knew that he would not be whole unless he forgave those who sought his forgiveness.  Seeing Julia for the first time brought it all home to him and he saw how his unforgiveness kept him from the niece that was his namesake.  More to come real soon!

Reviewer: Favor6 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 06 2011 04:25 am

Title: Chapter 8 Learning You All Over Again II

Great update as always. 

Tam is making Daniel work for her affection even with them still intact but he said some hurtful mess and needs to get counseling for his insecurities and the writing and telling her what was special about was a marvelous idea all on the table.  I don't really think Tam will be dating all that much though that was only to make Daniel sweat well that is imo she could see 1 or 2 men here and there just to keep him in check plus she thinks she may be pregnant so we don't want the insecure jerk to think even for a second that she was cheating sexually with someone else and got pregnant but then again that is where the trust would have to kick in again and hoping counselling will help him not to jump to conclusion which got him into the trouble in the first place.  Yes, we do need the Alpha to come back into play to cause this wimpy Daniel is not doing me any good and definitely no good for my girl Tam.

Demaris is too cute taking up for his Aunt Tam.

Ahhhhh! It's so sweet the Arrington men have made amends it's a start not perfect but definitely a start.  Julia is too cute too she don't want her mama kissing and hugging nobody but her daddy.  Justin talking about talking it over with Cathy about the house idea she didn't give him a chance to get it out his mouth good before she was thanking him....LOL!  Jean has been watching too much television and stuck in the 60s.  Yes people still stare but like Amaris said Jules is a big boy he can take care of himself but it's understandable for mom to worry that's what we do worry for our babies.

I can't wait til Jules meets the crew on Amaris side. Is Ms. Wilmington and Amaris still close?

More please....

Thank you for sharing...

Happy writing



Author's Response:

Hey Thunderkat:  You hit it right on the head.  The Alpha male is still alive.  He just had to regroup and plan his strategy, but he is not happy about her seeing other men. He really thought that if he got on his knees she'd just forgive him right off. It didn't work Daniel!  Tam really doesn't want to see anyone else and she has a few "friends" in her contacts that are just that, friends that just happen to be male.  LOL

I already have several scenes in mind when Daniel sees her out with someone else.  Then you are going to see the Alpha Male at full blast!  LOL.  She's not being mean.  She does love him, but she wants him to deal with his issues. 

Yes, Jean watches too much of reality televison.  She's seen those dating shows where the white guy is trying to date the black girl and he gets disrespected by the black men.  She's only heard and seen the drama of interracial relationships on tv and so she's worried about her baby.  It really wasn't about Amaris.  Now when Julian meets her family...OMG!  Talk about a culture shock!  LOL~

Thanks for your reviews.  Keep them coming.

Brenda

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2011 03:05 am

Title: Chapter 8 Learning You All Over Again II

Ahhhh lovely, just lovely.

Great message and update. Your writing is inspirational.

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2011 03:02 am

Title: Chapter 8 Learning You All Over Again II

Daniel got down on his knees to beg for forgiveness, awesome.  Tamera gave him the tools to win her back, I sure that he takes it and runs with it.    This story is so awesome.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2011 01:59 am

Title: Chapter 8 Learning You All Over Again II

Glad things worked out for Julian and his family. Also glad Tam gave Daniel a second chance.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2011 01:26 am

Title: Chapter 8 Learning You All Over Again II

Another excellent update julian is such a loving and wonderful person!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2011 12:57 am

Title: Additional Cast Pictures

awwwwwww I was so looking forward to the story... otherwise, lovely pics

Reviewer: Mary P Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2011 12:25 am

Title: Additional Cast Pictures

love the pics of amaris and julian family memebers!!!!!!!!!!!11

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2011 12:06 am

Title: Additional Cast Pictures

I was so happy when I saw a new chapter only to find it was just more cast pics. Stop teasinng us.

Reviewer: Noah Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2011 10:29 pm

Title: Additional Cast Pictures

Dag nabit!! I thought it was another update...but the pic of baby Julia is beautiful!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2011 07:14 pm

Title: The Cast

Yeahhhhh! I can't wait til the next chapter keeping my eye out for it :D and Daniel deserves to have to do a little crawkiung nakes akk the better LOL!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2011 08:44 pm

Title: Chapter 7 Learning You All Over Again

Tsk! Come on Daniel now you just need to get a grip. She already told you she did not cheat and if she wanted someone else you would have been gone a long time ago after she got the sexual satisfaction you so think she needs from every tom dick and harry.  You so insecure that you are not evening setting back and listening NOT HEARING but listening to what she has to say. Daniel is beginning to work my nerves if he is not man enough to love, respect and cherish Tam then she is right he does not deserve her or the baby but if she is pregnant she needs to tell him and let the chip fall where they may but not 4 only the child should he try to be with her out of obligation but because he loves her and can trust her and hell himself for that matter.  IMO when Daniel finds out the truth about Damaris...Tam should make his ass work for getting her back like he made her fall in love with him b4 he gave her the loving.

Well Jean is going to tip a cow when she finds out that Jules asked Marri to marry him and she accepted but hey she will definitely get over it.  I wonder how Mari will feel though when and if she finds out that Jules had her investigated.  Now Jules needs to meet her family.  Sheleah has some nerves though and sounds like a selfish twit how she going to send her child to a city that he knows nothing about penniless and hungry.  They too had the opprotunity to make something of themself but chose to have babies and now that Mari is making it and has the means they are milking it like she is a cash cow well from what I see of Sheleah anyway.

Okay sorry, I am going to cut it off right here. I said I was not going to right a book this review but it would seem as usual I have gotten carried away. :(

Thank you for the update and sharing I need more.

Happy writing!



Author's Response:

Thundakat:  I love your reviews!  They inspire me.  I'm going to deal withJean in the next chapter and yes Julian is going to the projects and meet some of those ghetto fabulous relatives of hers.  LOL.

Daniel, well he'll have to fess up to his insecurities and yes he is going to have to do some serious crawling back before she takes him back again.  

 

More to come soon!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2011 05:30 pm

Title: Chapter 7 Learning You All Over Again

Daniel needs to grow up...he's going do more than apologize.

Great update can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response:

Yes, he will be begging for a while.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2011 11:27 am



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