You are good...I bypassed this story many times and was like "meh.." @ the summary/character pics but finally decided to give it a chance and was not disappointed. Love the main characters and their passionate freakiness but I also love the lessons. Chapter 6 was so heartbreaking (holding a grudge/resentment is never good...neither is guilt) but chapter 7 was so freaking delightful. Want to say this: I need Daniel to have more trust in his woman that he's "always loved."
Author's Response:
Daniel does have a lot of issues to work out. Even though he knows that she hasn't cheated before, he still can't believe that of all the men that she's been involved with, that she wants just HIM. He feels that he may not be measuring up to the other men she's had in the past and he's afraid to talk to her about his insecurities. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]Date: September 04 2011 09:37 am
Loved the update. Poor Tam!! Daniel gots lots of begging to do.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: September 04 2011 07:42 am
Daniel is such an ass. He claims his relationship was over with Tamera yet he texting Julian about Amaris' family, trying to verify if Tamera is telling the truth. He jumps to conclusions before asking questions.
What's he going to do when Julian confirms the info, crawl back to Tamera begging for forgiveness? After his refusal to listen to her, practically calling her a liar and calling her a whore, I hope she doesn't forgive to readily. He needs to deal with his issues or he'll never trust her.
As for her baby, both parents don't have to be together for someone to have a healthly childhood.
Author's Response:
True, both parents don't have to be there to raise a well adjusted child. The sad part is Daniel wants a wife and family. He loves Tam, but he is very insecure about their relationship. It's hard for him to believe that he coulld measure up to the men in her past. He feels that she has more "experience" than he does in the bedroom and that bothers him even though as far as Tam is concerned, he's the best she's ever had. He needs to talk about his insecurites. Thanks for the review. More to come soon.
Reviewer: Flavia Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 04 2011 05:09 am
Damn if Marri didn't channel my girl, Tam. LMAO
Tam is learning the hard way that your reputation is something to be guarded. Daniel needs to dial it back a little. It's obvious he doesn't trust her and how can they have a real relationship if he's always going to question her honesty. They do need to maybe take it slower to see if they can get over this. meanwhile, she's got a pork bun in the oven. ;)
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: September 04 2011 05:02 am
How trifling is Amaris' sister to send her son long distance on a bus without money or calling first? I she expects Amaris to pay to send him back home. Could she be that selfish or is she delusional?
Author's Response:
Amaris has always been the "golden goose" in her family, doing for them, sending them money, etc. Seleah is very immature even though she is the older sister. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Ceece Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 04 2011 04:39 am
whoo amari and julian were setting the sheets on fire loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: September 04 2011 04:38 am
Daniel is going to regret those words, and Tamera would well be in her rights never forgive him or take him back. That is except for the baby that she maybe carrying. It wouldn't be right for her not to tell the Daniel. Selah is an *itch!!! How could you send your child away with no money and no place to live? Just becasue you're family it doesn't mean that you can take advantage of them. I don't like her sisters or mother!! They make my teeth itch!!
Author's Response:
Seleah is very self centered. Amaris steps in a lot of times because she loves her nephews! Daniel has a lot of making up to do and Tam will not take him back that easily! Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 04 2011 04:35 am
Daniel is a major idiot. Eventhough she loves him, Tamera is better off without him, his insecurities and name calling.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 04 2011 04:33 am
Did they just agree to get married? I think that they're still high from the afterglow (of sex). Crazy kids!
Reviewer: Novak Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 04 2011 03:44 am
Who knew Amaris had it in her to talk dirty? She's such a freak.
Author's Response:
LOL Yes she is!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 04 2011 03:39 am
I know Amaris is new at this but what's with these people having unprotected sex? How could Julian forget his glove?
Author's Response:
Julian did use a condom I just failed to mention it in the story. Sorry. Amaris made sure that he did because Tam had given her some before she left home. LOL. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Sloane Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 04 2011 03:35 am
wow so they made love and hot dam was it hot hot hot. I see julian can handle his business and daniel he need to stop acting like a five year old and either trust tam or walk away. thank for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: September 04 2011 03:34 am
hmm i'm giving daniel the side eye. he needs to get his thoughts together. i highly doubt tam is going to want someone who brings up her past and calls her a whore at the drop of a dime over a misunderstanding. and dang if amaris's sister isn't a piece of work
Author's Response:
Julian has created a monster! LOL! She's going to wear him out for sure! More to come soon!
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: September 04 2011 03:29 am
Great Chapter!! Keep up the good work. More please.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 03 2011 08:17 pm
A very therapeutic chapter for Julian. He was able to release some of the anguish he has carried all his life. It comes as no surprise that it came with a good cry. It's good that Amaris was there with him for this release.
Great Chapter!!!
Reviewer: Gael Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 03 2011 09:48 am
If Justin is too proud to accept help from Julian, what more can do?
Author's Response:
Justin is still feeling guilty about the way they treated Julian. He doesn't know if Julian has really forgiven him. He doesn't want to be more indebted to him than he already is. thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 03 2011 01:35 am
Julian needs to go easy on himself. He is not the cause of his brothers short coming. He grew up in a family being rediculed by a father who wanted nothing to do with him and brothers who taunted and embarrassed as often as possible. As for his mother, eventhough she tried to stand up for him he was still (emotionally) abused by the male members of his family.
Author's Response:
This is true, yet Julian's deepest desire to to be loved and accepted by his family. His brothers want Julian's forgiveness but feel that it is an impossible task. They can't believe that Julian could actually forgive them so they continue to feel guilty. Stanley just wants whatever crumbs of forgiveness Julian is willing to throw his way because he realizes that he was more responsible than the others. Now his mother feels that she has always supported Julian so now she has the right to show her disapproval of Amaris because she feels that she was the only one that loved him and she knows what's best for him and it's not Amaris! thanks for the review. More to come soon!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 03 2011 01:32 am
I love Tamera and Amaris friendship is so strong that they can talk about anything. Great dialog.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 03 2011 01:22 am
Fantastic!!
I think that Julian has finally learnt what love is.
How can you be happy when your family is hurting!
can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: Janetbd Signed [Report This]Date: September 02 2011 03:54 pm
Awwww, Julian! I bet Tam and Daniel are having a baby. :P
Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]Date: September 02 2011 03:37 pm
i like the positive message in this story. Wonderful update. I am glad Julian sees the errors in his ways.
Reviewer: 100%fan Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 02 2011 01:38 pm
I want to see how Julian relationship with his mother will be affected now that she know about him and Amaris. Who would have thought that Stanley would be Amaris' stronger supporter? How does Joseph pay his bills if he's high or drunk all day?
Author's Response:
Joseph is not drunk all the time. He is very self destructive and alcoholics can function when they have to. LOL. Stanley will try to do whatever to make amends to his son. He could care less who he's with as long as he can be in his life. Now Mom has always had Julian's love, but she's testing the limits right now.
More to come soon!
Reviewer: Roger Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 02 2011 01:24 pm
Justin stated that he wanted them to be a real family again but Julian has never been part of a real family. A real family does not emotionally torture a child or sibling. Julian is emotionally starved.
I hope that he can accept their apologies and built a better relationship with them.
Author's Response:
Justin and Joseph have been carrying ten years of guilt about Julian. Julian is emotionally starved. He wants his father's love so bad, but he's afraid of being hurt again. He wants his family, but doesn't know how they are going to be able to work through all the mess. He sees hope in Julia and plans to build from that. More to come soon!
Reviewer: Wilifred Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 02 2011 01:18 pm
Jun is good at bringing out Daniel's insecurities. He knew Daniel has trust issues and he's using them to try and seperate him and Tamera.
Author's Response:
Jun is worried that Daniel will be hurt. He feels that Daniel is somewhat soft like his mother. He doesn't know about Daniel's quiet strength. Daniel does have some insecurites about his relationship and his father picked up on that and voiced them. Daniel is still hurting over the phone call Tam received after they had made love. A part of him is afraid that she will leave him like she's left other men before. Thanks for the review. MOre to come soon.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 02 2011 01:02 pm
So good to see Amaris and Tamera confiding in each other. Tam being pregnant will be awkward because Daniel still does not trust her.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 02 2011 12:58 pm