Title: Chapter 6 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me II

Well you definitely took me for a loop on the reverse responses.

Stanley was cool with Amaris and just happy to have his son back and at home but Jean she was a great disappointment to me she is a bigot and does not like or approve of Jules choice for his woman and future wifey cause he wants 2 marry her....Ahhhh that is so sweet.

Jules' destress just broke my heart yes, a lot of time has been wasted and gone by but it's not too late.  It can still be mended.

Again disappointed in Jean and don't know what to say about ole girl....hopefully she will come around and get her head out of her behind. Though I don't think that Jules would put his mom on igg mode plus Amaris wouldn't allow that anyway Jules would more then likely choose Ameris first but that is just imo.

I hope that Jules is able to help and bond with his family he has a nice and she sounds cute as a button and has another niece or nephew on the ways.

Daniel has Tam's nose wide open and she loves him to pieces yes he needs to talk to her about THEIR future marriage and babies she already thinks she is pregnant after a couple of intense sessions without protection but a woman knows her body and even some men can tell when their seed has taken root.

What's with the sour puss face at the resturant with Daniel's dad and ahhhh he doesn't trust Tam it's going to take a bit to get that full trust from him considering her background but like he said she has never lied to him and has always been up front about all and has not cheated. Daniel you don't have to worry about her getting tired of you...boo boo you stuck with her :D

Thank you for sharing.

Happy writing,



Author's Response:

Thundakat:  I love reading your analysis that you give.  It's always in depth and on point.  Thanks so much for sharing.  More is coming cuz we got a long weekend!  LOL

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2011 06:35 am

Title: Chapter 6 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me II

Awh, what a heart renching reunion. I felt like crying for them all. Hope Julian can help them if they allow him. Now Jean needs to get her act together or she's gonna ruin her relationship with Julian.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2011 05:52 am

Title: Chapter 6 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me II

This was a dramatic chapter... I hope that Julian and his family work things out and become a family again... and Jean better be careful b6 she loses Juilan again.

Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2011 03:17 am

Title: Chapter 6 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me II

well dang, that was a loaded chapter. wow!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2011 12:10 am

Title: Chapter 6 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me II

Powerful emotions here... you never know what someone is thinking, doing, being until you face them - there's a lesson here about judgement, revenge and love - thank you for this Chapter... hope they mend their hearts soon and his mum gets that wrench up her backside yanked out lol...

Reviewer: Mary P Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2011 11:58 pm

Title: Chapter 6 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me II

Wow, that was soooo good! I hope Julian can mend the broken fences and reconnect with his family. But, his momma!!

Reviewer: Buddha Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 01 2011 10:55 pm

Title: Chapter 6 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me II

oh my he went home to a broken family i feel for him!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2011 10:10 pm

Title: Chapter 6 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me II

Unforgiveness is something else. I feel for Julian! Justin found the Lord, so we know all is good for him, Joseph took a big step by not drinking anymore at dinner. 

Jean is jealous because she doesn't want to share Juliam (I could be wrong LOL!)

Great update. I really enjoy your stories!

Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2011 10:04 pm

Title: Chapter 6 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me II

This was a sad ending, but I did lol by the way Julian described his family when Amaris said they were "nice".

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2011 08:12 pm

Title: The Cast

I feel bad for Julian, he is feeling guilty.  His brother's made choices, he can't take on their problems.  He had to get to the point where he could forgive them of their treatment of them.  I am shocked at his mom, who knew that she was bigot!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2011 08:04 pm

Title: Chapter 6 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me II

So good....keep up the good work

 

Update soon

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2011 07:43 pm

Title: Chapter 6 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me II

I am enjoying this story very much.  You have did a good job in developing the characters and telling their stories.   Nice  change up with Mom.

Reviewer: Luv2Read Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 01 2011 07:37 pm

Title: Chapter 6 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me II

Excellent update! I'm glad Julian made peace with his past. His niece sounds adorable. It's nice that Amaris took negative comments in stride, she is such a class act. Hopefully he can build some bridges with his family and even get them to take some help from him. I really enjoy every update.

Reviewer: Peach Martini Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 01 2011 07:29 pm

Title: Chapter 6 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me II

OMG! I cannot wait for the next chapter. I am glad Julian went to see his family. I love your chapters; they are nice and long and I am still greedy for more, lol.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2011 07:05 pm

Title: Chapter 6 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me II

damn it you kill it, i mean you are so good to writin, im speechless, bravo, what an amazing chapter, i was so much pain, you describe that so real, & redemption is really something they need. i guess you are a christian because you always talk about GOD & it's good, continue your work the ony point that i can complain, is im addicted now so all i think is update lol. thanx for ur work



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.  Yes, I am a Christian and we know that we have to forgive for ourselves as well as for others.  Julian and his family will come to terms with their past.

Reviewer: mdpierrette Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2011 07:05 pm

Title: Chapter 6 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me II

Wow well I hope he work out things with his brothers to heal and move foward in their lives. It like God says you have to forgive people because other wise you will have a very cold heart. I think once he talks to both of his brothers and start to bond again things will work out. thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2011 06:39 pm

Title: The Cast

Excellent chapter... Julian and Amaris love 'em... can't wait for the next chapter...hope to see Amaris family soon...

Reviewer: IRlover Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 01 2011 06:05 pm

Title: The Cast

Addicting story. Need another fix soon.

Reviewer: Christy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2011 08:10 am

Title: Chapter 5 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me

Jules and Amaris have opened up to each other in regards to their falling in love and already being in love with each other.  Great! Jules wants Maris to meet his family I wonder the reception to that introduction I don't think it will be that bad and if his father has negative words we all know how Jules can put him on igg mode in a minute and keep it in affect until he comes around.

Well lookie lookie here who would have though Daniel the patient and low key had it in him but when he gets fired up look out. We only saw a glimpse of it when he told Jules off but when it comes to his woman talking to another man while in his home all bets are off and that possessive aggressive and jealous side of Daniel comes out all force.  I bet Tam has that number changed though.  Daniel is so good for Tam.

Thank u 4 the update and sharing.

Happy writing

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2011 08:14 pm

Title: Chapter 5 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me

Whoops, pregnancy on the horizon. Amaris needs to let go of her fears and just feel. Julian isn't going to have to wait much longer. I'm not sure I like how jealous and possesive Daniel is. Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Daniel was a bit insecure about his relationship with Tam.  He's jealous, but he'snot violent.  Thanks for the review.  More to come soon!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2011 04:48 pm

Title: Chapter 5 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me

I don't think I'll look at a jar of chocolate the same way again. :)

Julian is going home and taking Mari with him. That says a lot. My hope is that he and his father will resolve things between them. On some level, I think Mari is picking up on this tension and that may play into her fears.

Tam and Daniel, wow! Daniel is all Alpha. Tam has more than met her match. Who would've thunk. I really like how raw their relationship is.

Great chapters, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2011 11:18 am

Title: Chapter 5 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me

Loved the update.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2011 07:57 am

Title: Chapter 5 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me

Holy crap these two couples are hot! I hope to read more of them soon! :)

Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31 2011 07:04 am

Title: Chapter 5 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me

Sooooo GOOD!!!!!!! More chocolate swirl pleassseee......

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2011 04:53 am

Title: Chapter 5 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me

Amaris revealing her insecurities is a step in the right direction. I'm glad Julian and her admitted their feelings for each other.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 31 2011 04:50 am



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