Title: Chapter 5 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me

Damn that was good!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31 2011 04:37 am

Title: Chapter 5 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me

I'm glad Stanley was able to apologize to Julian. I know Julian needs to let go of the anger to enjoy a healthly life or he'll forever have those issues. The dialog between them was really good.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2011 04:37 am

Title: Chapter 5 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me


Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2011 04:34 am

Title: Chapter 5 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me

Daniel is such an alpha male. His confrontation with Tam was a little physical in the beginning but then turned. I'm glad it didn't excalate to more physical fight.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 31 2011 04:26 am

Title: Chapter 5 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me

That was super HAWWWWT! I can't wait to read when Amaris and Julian get together. I wonder what his folks are going to say.

Tam is not in control anymore LOL!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON. :)

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2011 04:22 am

Title: Chapter 5 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me

nice update

Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31 2011 04:17 am

Title: Chapter 5 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me

Aww S**t!!! Daniel and Tam...he's a feisty one ain't he,lol!! Poor Julian he gonna end up looking like that bulldog on Van Wilder. My boy is in Love and Amaris is too, she just scared. I hope he doesn't catch any flax from his family when he brings Amaris to meet his folks. So good as always!!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2011 04:08 am

Title: Chapter 5 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me

oh my damn i have been hoping and begging silently for an update and whoo i must say you delivered an spectacular one thank you soooooooo much!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2011 03:39 am

Title: Chapter 5 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me

OH crap what if Tam is going to to have daniel baby? lol. I like that Julian wants amia to meet his folks that is a big step and think it will go well. good update and thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2011 03:25 am

Title: Chapter 4 Sinking in Deep and Liking It

Nice...

Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2011 06:07 am

Title: Chapter 4 Sinking in Deep and Liking It

Does Daniel have a problem with dark skin black people? The comment he made to Julian kind of made me wonder.



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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 26 2011 12:04 pm

Title: Prologue

Are the Arrington kids only a year apart?



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Yes, they are a year apart.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 26 2011 11:59 am

Title: The Cast

interesting cast

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2011 11:56 am

Title: Chapter 4 Sinking in Deep and Liking It

<b>His skin was a pale ivory.</b>

Like I wrote,  you're challenging our perception of what package love comes in. Too often in I/R romances, the hero's "tanned" even if, like with Julian, he's a redhead. This type of realism I adore in my romances. Keep going lady!.

PS: My ex is a red/blonde and had trouble tanning, but the contrast of skin colours.......sooooooooooooooo yum!.



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Reviewer: Bajan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2011 10:04 pm

Title: Chapter 3 Seeing the Real You

Such an intense chapter. You have redeemed Tamera in my eyes. Thank you and please erase my ignorant words about her being a slut and her story not need. You have convinced me otherwise. This story can only flows beautifully!.

Reviewer: Bajan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2011 09:40 pm

Title: Chapter 4 Sinking in Deep and Liking It

one word ...WICKED...

Reviewer: cynn333 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2011 02:38 pm

Title: Chapter 4 Sinking in Deep and Liking It

Well damn there u have it. Jules put it on Amari and she turned right around the next morning and blew mister man out of the water she takes instructions well it would seem.

Then there was Daniel and Tam...with Tam coming out of no where revealing that she loves hin now at first like Daniel I was a bit suspecious but like him I relaxed a bit. Then sista girl recited Song of Solomon Chapter 5 then to say she was making love to him and that she was in love with him broke the dam it would seem for Daniel cause he could hold back anymore and like Tam he surprised the hell out of me.  Daniel got some strong alpha in him don't get me wrong I never thought he didn't but with the power that came from him during that love scene had me with my mouth open like Jules was after Amari turned his ass out.  LOL! Yeah Jules definitely lost the control there and then thru baby girl a challenge to I bet he won't do that again.

Great update.

Thank u for sharing...more please

Happy writing.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2011 12:02 pm

Title: Chapter 4 Sinking in Deep and Liking It

Wow. Julian. Daniel. Wow

The poems were so romantic. 

Hope Julian doesn't start to question where Marri learned how to make his eyes roll back in his head.

I really like both of these couples. They really mesh.

Great chapter.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2011 11:27 am

Title: The Cast

10 stars ... this is a very touching story. I liked the chemistry between the characters.

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2011 11:26 am

Title: Chapter 3 Seeing the Real You

Damn if Julian isn't something else. He was very clear as to what he wants to do with Marri. Wow. I can see how she would be scared. And Julian is just as scared. They have a lot in common. And then we have Tam, who is a trip, but just as scared. The only one in that bunch who doesn't seem to be scared, is Daniel. I can see both Daniel and Julian rocking my girls in very different ways. This should be good.

The fact that Julian finally wants to get rid of some baggage speaks to how intense his feelings are for Amaris. 

Really enjoying this story, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2011 11:02 am

Title: Chapter 4 Sinking in Deep and Liking It

DAMNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2011 08:38 am

Title: Chapter 4 Sinking in Deep and Liking It

DAMNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2011 08:37 am

Title: Chapter 4 Sinking in Deep and Liking It

DAMNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2011 08:35 am

Title: Chapter 4 Sinking in Deep and Liking It

Both Daniel and Julian got they wanted. Both Amaris and Tamera are very happy women! Very nice chapter!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 25 2011 04:38 am

Title: Chapter 4 Sinking in Deep and Liking It

well damn, julian and daniel are like whoa! 

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Date: August 25 2011 03:57 am



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