nice pic of the cast.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: August 25 2011 02:48 am
well it look like she got what see want for a birthday gift. It funny that the girls are dating best friends and didn't know it. I"m glad that julian is talking to his family and moving foward in his life. thank for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: August 25 2011 02:47 am
Hot diggity damn!! What an update!! Loved it.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: August 25 2011 02:13 am
That was hot!!! Julian did Amaris just right and she liked it!!! Tamera, reciting the of Solomon color me shocked. Who knew a ho could recite such a beautiful poem? LOL. I can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response:
LOL Daniel has been reforming her.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 25 2011 01:54 am
I LOVE THIS STORY. I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT.
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: August 24 2011 09:14 pm
julian has a real problem with forgiveness and this vengeful attitude of his. it will be interesting how amaris and his relationship will go, considering.
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: August 24 2011 01:21 pm
Hope Tam and Amaris find happiness.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: August 24 2011 04:54 am
I think that I know what I want for Christmas...a short, sexy white dude with red hair...Hey Julian!! How you dooiinnggg...If I was in Armaris shoes I think that I would have been a little scared too...for about 30 seconds, give or take a few. I'm glad that the girls was able to be frank with eachother about their insecurities. Giggled at Tam doing the cartwheels and dancing...Update, Please!!
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: August 24 2011 03:14 am
keep it coming its good and damn amaris the man"s name is daniel not mr ching lol
Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 24 2011 01:35 am
Julian is such a freak!! Amaris tells him she's a virgin and describes what he wants to do to her in graghic details, scaring her shitless. He's such aa freak!!
Author's Response:
LOL! Julian had never dealt with a virgin before and he didn't realize he was scaring her. He thought that he was turning her on. LOL. A month in detention has changed his point of view. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Ceece Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 24 2011 12:18 am
Yep, Julian does have a lot of mental baggage relating to his high school years and he does need to squash all that and live his life to the fullest. I can't say that there is not a one teenager or high school student that did not have an issue even the poplar ones their's just wasn't as noticable as some other they were good at keeping their issues hidden.
I am sure even Justin and Jason had their issues they had a father that pushed them to be jocks when they probably just did it to satisfy their father and took it out on Julian because he was able to do his own thing in their eyes and was not pressured to be this super jock but when it all came crumbling down they had nothing to fall back on and shoot father dearest was then hard on them for failing.
Julian need to release, relate, renew and let Amari in his heart, she has fears too but she is a grown woman not a teenage high school girl.
Thank you for the update and sharing
Happy writing
Author's Response:
So many people are stuck in their trauma from years past and it effects everything they do. It's so sad because they are not really living until they chose to deal with the problem. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2011 11:49 pm
I was quite surprised my the description of this story and I just HAD to read it. And then I was pleasantly surprised to find myself gifted with a little bwam love too. Haha I really like the development of your story and would Love Love Love more of Daniel and Tamera. Their relationship totally has the Samantha and Smith Jerrod type of vibe and I'm loving it.
Reviewer: SeoulSinger Signed
[Report This]Date: August 23 2011 10:16 pm
I love Tam! She is the kind of friend we should all have! Very loyal. I'm glad Julien is calling his mom maybe he can find some peace. Great chapter!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2011 09:45 pm
Excellent start
Reviewer: valis202 Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2011 08:49 pm
Wow well it seems both have problems from their past and until they fix them they can't move foward in their life. I think Julian is going to treat amaris right and I belive he is in love. thank for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2011 07:35 pm
Damn this story is beyond great whoo every chapter is completly better than the last this story truly blows my mind and i absolutly love and adore it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2011 07:30 pm
Julian had an ephinany!! I am glad that he is going to try and forgive his sperm donor and his sons. So he can freely love and be loved in return. I can't wait to read his conversation with his mom. She will be estatic!! Great chapter!! I love how both Amaris and Tam told each other the truth about themselves. I am glad that they have each other.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2011 07:22 pm
Daniel put Ms. Hot Bootie in check and made her slow down. He wants all of her not some of her.
Now for Julian I don't know what to say about him with hid scary ass. Sure the lust and attraction is there but I don't want him to hurt Amari he would be her first physical encounter with a man and she is wanton and hot for him which we all can tell from her response from him just touching and kissing her. I can't believe he had her checked out and was snooping in her personal life by having her investigated I wonder how she would feel about that. Yes, Amaris you have some work cut out for you chica.
Thank you for sharing and the great update.
Happy writing.
Author's Response:
Julian wants to control things, but he's about to learn a valuable lesson. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2011 12:58 pm
very good
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2011 11:55 am
The beautiful dark skinned heroine first attracted me, then the premise. Well done challenging our perceptions of what love looks like. Well done!.
PS: I guess you have to have a "Tamera" to balance this out, but to tell the truth I can do without the slutty best friend.....
Author's Response:
LOL!! Doesn't everyone have a "Tamera" in their lives??? Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: bajan Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 23 2011 10:30 am
I really like this story so far, partially because I'm from DC so the cities and areas mentioned are so familiar. I can't wait to see what happens not only to Amaris and Julian but, also with Tamara and Daniel as well.
Author's Response:
I'm in richmond, not too far from DC. My brother in law is there so I am somewhat familiar with the area, but I still had to look on the map to remember some of the outlying areas they have taken us to. More is coming soon. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2011 07:34 am
I am loving this story so much! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2011 06:27 am
Wow, that was hot chapter! Both Daniel and Julian have a plan. I like it. Terrific characters!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2011 05:44 am
Very nice.
Reviewer: Anon. Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 23 2011 05:43 am
well hot dam lol it look like julian want to show amaris a thing or two. LOL i'm laughing at her friend because she not use of guy turn her down lol but it good thing so she can get to know him better and have true love instead of sex. thank for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2011 05:18 am