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Title: Prologue

Julian is more man than those three combined.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 22 2011 05:25 am
Title: Chapter 1 The Size of Things

OMG! The story is a good read thus far!  And Tamara is quite the character, she had me laughing out loud.

 Reviewer: sandra Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 22 2011 05:00 am
Title: Chapter 1 The Size of Things

OMG!!! I want more! This is too good. The way Julian's father and brothers treated him was really wrong, but I have a feeling that he is going to have to forgive them if he wants to truly move on. Anyway, Ms. Amaris and Mr. Julian are going to be a very interesting couple. I cannot wait for more. Oh goodness I hope you post very frequently. As long as this chapter was, I was ready to read more about J and A's Saturday outing.

 Reviewer: oHH Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2011 04:47 am
Title: Chapter 1 The Size of Things

Loved it!! Go Julian!! Amaris isn't gonna know what hit her. Hope Julian reconciles with his family soon.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2011 04:33 am
Title: Prologue

Me likey!! More please.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2011 04:14 am
Title: Chapter 1 The Size of Things

That was good, Tamera is a hot mess!!!  Julian wants him some Amaris!!!!  This was good!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2011 04:10 am
Title: Prologue

I forgot to mention Amaris, that poor living in house full a ho's.  She might as well live a brothel like Richard Pryor was born in.   I know that she will be happy to move to DC.  I am very glad that she had someone in her corner.  Paula loves her but she and her daughters aren't setting a good example for Amaris.  I can't to read about the good times that are coming Julian's and Amaris's way.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2011 03:59 am
Title: Prologue

Supreb

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2011 03:54 am
Title: Prologue

I like the concept of this story and would like to read more.  Is Amaris' mother's name Julia or Paula?



Author's Response:

LOL You must know I was tired!  I made the corrections.  thanks!

 Reviewer: Gypsi Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2011 03:52 am
Title: Prologue

I can't say that I blame Julian, I wouldn't have given that fool my kidney especially with the way he had treated him his whole life.  Now he wants to call him son, Julian get on with your life. !!! I can't wait to read more!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2011 03:50 am
Title: Prologue

Oh, This is so good!! Julian I feel for him and I have seen first hand how even your own family can be as cruel as a complete stranger. Armanis-I hate that she was exposed to that...all of those different men and such, but you can see despite her mother's vices, Paula really does love her daughter. I'm digging this story and I can't help it...I'm picturing in my mind Tall as a Pine Armanis with shorty Julian, lol too cute!

 Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2011 03:44 am


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