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Title: Chapter 19

Thank you! Thank you for the update.  I've been waiting and you didn't disappoint.  Daniel is just evil wanting someone that didn't want him and then forcing himself on her like that.  It also shows just how jealous he is of Joseph.   This is just too good of a story and should be a movie!  LOL.  Please update as soon as possible.  Merry Christmas!



Author's Response:

Waaaaaaahh....a movie you say?! That's EXACTLY how it goes on in my mind and there are so many details and other things that are hard to convey through words without sight. Ugh! Thank you very much and MERRY CHRISTMAS TO EVERYONE!!~~

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2011 12:16 pm
Title: Chapter 19

I hate Daniel and can't wait for him to die, is Daniel mobster?  How did Joseph get mixed up in so much evil?  I can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Daniel is a big wannabe gangster guy. He think he's the stuff but he ain't haha. Joseph got around the wrong crowd. It's taken him more than half his life to even realize it, or for it to truly smack him in the face...

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2011 06:51 am


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