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Title: For Nikki

I like this story, but I can't help keep going back to the notion that The Family or their actions are not clear. They are referred, implied, or mentioned that they killed people; are they the mob? 

Also, glad the author mentioned a part 2, because it says the story was complete, yet chapter 32 only had pictures (great selections thank you), but I was like "What just happened? This is not the ending." Daniel has to get his, Lorraine has to make up her shittiness to her daughter, and Niamh has to make things right with Blaise. And how Blaise's mistreatment of Niall as a kid never was addressed. 

Where do these darn names (Niall, Niamh, and Blaise) come from? And I thought my name was weird as a kid.


 Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2016 06:41 am
Title: For Nikki

Excellent,

I feel sorry for Blaise...

 

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 24 2013 11:00 am
Title: For Nikki

Thank you thank you thank you!!!!

 Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 18 2012 02:10 am
Title: For Nikki

Both Niall and Blaise are too fine!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2012 05:56 pm


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