Reviews For A Perfect Fit
Title: Chapter 10

AH!  Maxie & Selma are Great together and truly a Perfect Fit!

Ironic, that these two descendants of two opposing races, especially in view of historically the Whites as barbarous slaves owners and Blacks as the slaves, funny that 147years after the abolishment of slavery these two descendants were only able to find true happiness in-love with each other, even true completness and fulfillment.  INTERESTING!

The song "Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow" is one of my great favorites of my youth.  I sang with Matthew and Michigan as my memories traveled sweetly back!

Great Chapter!  And I am so happy they are now married, I feared something would happen to prevent the union from taking place!

 

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2012 05:46 am

Title: Chapter 9

Yep!  Stanley's one of those evil parasitic relatives, but I sure can't figure how he expects to get part of the money his deceased brother left to Selma and their children.  Real glad Selma has a strong man like Maxie's  for support to lean upon and his love, as, well, as three grown sons.

 

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2012 04:46 am

Title: Chapter 8

That was some Dynomite HOT lovin between Selma and Maxie, he really whipped it on her!!!

Real glad for the much better communication between Maxie and brother Russell, whose now able to relax and really be "human" now that his true sexual appetite has been satisfied with his wife.  It's amazing how much sexual satisfaction and true enjoyment are so very important to our psychic selves; seems we discount the value of the physical too much, as something merely animalistic, dirty, and not worthy of true human consideration.  But, sex really is a great part of us, we are after all animals but just with the higher evolved brain; nevertheless, are libidos remain purely in the physical zone but individualistic as to desire fulfillment.

 

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2012 03:35 am

Title: Chapter 7

Great writing and I'm glad Russell is getting his sex fantasy with his wife, he will now be a happy man!

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2012 02:46 am

Title: Chapter 6

This is a fun story that I'm enjoying!  Men and the attention valuation that they give to the size of their penises.  However, I suspect that that's a valid concern for a man!

It seems Russell has a bigtime continuing sex fantasy about Black women still lingering unrequited from his college days, that's weird since he does love the White woman he chose to marry and been married happily to all these years!

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2012 02:20 am

Title: Chapter 1

OMG!  I'm greatly Happy for Maxie that he finally found a woman that his small dick could have sexual happiness with; also both he and and Selma sure gave me a lot of laughs, not at them but, how they express themselves, especially Selma!

I love Selma's super womanness, she really don't play and this is just the kind of woman Maxie has needed, and equally important, they are great friends and companions for each other, before the sex!

I am very glad this is a story about adults in the upper age range because myself being age 43plus in years and single, its nice to have a believable romance fantasy of members of my peer group seeking and finding love.

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 25 2012 06:18 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Thanks for the update, felt sorry for poor Maxie, being on the receiving end of Selma's hormones, it's a ggod thing she didn't hear the woman outside of the hospital casting aspersions on her babies paternity, blood would surely have been shed.  Why do some people feel they have the right to talk about things they know nothing about, misguided fool, good thing Maxie put her in her place.

Reviewer: Jules Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 27 2011 07:13 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Who is this woman!!! she needs to shush! they're totally Maxie's!!!

Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2011 10:13 pm

Title: Chapter 1

This story just gets better and better. Maxie has finally gotten what he wanted a beautiful wife and children. I love this story and be waiting for another fabulous chapter. 

Reviewer: preppychick890 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 18 2011 01:33 am

Title: Chapter 11

LOVE 

Reviewer: Mel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 17 2011 11:35 pm

Title: Chapter 11

I love your stories they are always so real, thought out and descriptive.

I liked how you included the bathroom scene the reason I say that is because it shows that even though this is a story they still have body functions that are taken care of and happen.

The babies are beautiful and that woman had some nerve coming to Maxie with that mess I hope it did not put any doubt in his head about the parentage of his daughter and son they are dark because their mother is dark and she don't know there could be some black in the bloodline on Maxie's side born in America don't always make your bloodline pure in one way.

Thank you for a wonderful update as always.

Happy writing.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 15 2011 11:34 am

Title: Chapter 11

thanks for a wonderful update brenda!! sooo glad selma and the babies are ok!

Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2011 12:42 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Thanks for a great update.  I was feeling so bad for Maxi because Selma was just plane hating her husband.  when she threw up after learning about the twins was so surprising.  I guess that she thought that one child was ok but two was one to many.  As for her having to have the babies by c-section was shocking.  At least she and the babies are ok.  Why do people feel that they can say anything...the way the woman told Maxie that basically his kids wasn't his was a WTF? moment.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2011 08:42 am

Title: Chapter 11

There's always someone trying to ruin the happiness!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2011 05:59 am

Title: Chapter 11

What a wonderful update.How awesome Maxie and Selma had twin, a boy and a girl at that (WOW).  I didn't see that coming,I don't know what you have in store for us for the next update but I'm really excited to find out.

Reviewer: meko1975 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2011 05:33 am

Title: Chapter 11

Sometimes, bi-racial children take after the mother and sometimes the father...my nephews don't look black or white they look latino...Go figure?  I hate when people assume they know what is best for you....she has now put that question in Maxie's head and he will now start to wonder....Hummm are they mine or are they someone elses?....Shame on that old nosey ass biddy!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2011 03:04 am

Title: Chapter 11

Love it. My husband is white/Mexican. Our oldest child, looks Mexican and white. No kind of color whatsoever. Poor baby is about as pale as pale can be in the winter. Our baby, she's Carmel and you can tell she's mixed. I have seen white pale mixed with dark black and the baby come out as dark as me. Or the other way baby is blonde hair blue eye fair skin and one parent is blupurle. You just never know. 

 

Love Maxie getting on her nerves I understand it. This is his first and only rodeo. He wants to make sure everything is beyond ok. He just lost sight of Selma's needs. I'm glad she put him in check. He needed to know mom is just more than a incubator. 

 

Again LOVE LOVE LOVE IT.

 

Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 13 2011 02:24 am

Title: Chapter 11

Great chapter!

Reviewer: annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 13 2011 02:01 am

Title: Chapter 11

Whooo another wondeful update i am soo glad maxie put his foot down and let hormonal crazy selma know who wore the pants oh wow twins can i say i was shocked but extremely happy all up until some screwball bitch came up to maxie and implying that his children are not his because their are not light skinned damn where will the ignorance come to an end uh that trick needs to worry about the missing baby daddy in her daughter life instead of a complete stranger anywhoo love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2011 01:45 am

Title: Chapter 11

LOL...that lady was right they do not look like biracial babies, lol! Anyway, great update. I loved it as usual.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2011 01:43 am

Title: Chapter 11

Great update.  I felt bad for Maxie I kinda understand that being this is his first and last pregnancy he would grate the nerves. Yes it was overbearing but you gotta love him. 

 

Those babies are so cute.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2011 01:05 am

Title: Chapter 11

People can sure be ignorant. It was none of her business. So glad the babies are here and healthy. They are so precious!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2011 11:26 pm

Title: Chapter 11

someone needs a good smack down!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2011 11:21 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Love the update! It's interesting that you should write about the babies skin tone; most assume that bi-ethnic babies will come out fair. That isn't always the case, especially if you make-up is of cultures that are of color. I knew a girl who was black/italian and she wasn't fair at all!

Reviewer: Philly Girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 12 2011 11:17 pm

Title: Chapter 11

That old woman was ignorant!! How dare she say they are not his because they look black??  It's all about the genes not about overall appearances.  I hope Maxie doesn't take that jealous old woman seriously.



Author's Response:

No Maxie knows the babies are his.  That doesn't stop people from making rude comments though!   More is coming soon.

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2011 07:33 pm



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