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Title: Chapter 11

AWW the babies are so cute and love their names too. I'm glad she got thu her husband to let him know he needs to think about her needs to and her sons so cute wonder about their mother. thank for the update



Author's Response:

You know Selma's hormones were raging when she was snapping!  LOL.   More is coming soon..

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2011 06:39 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Selma, you are tripping!!!  Maxie loves you and your dirty draws.  He just wants you to take care of yourslef and holding in all that anger was not good for you or the babies.  I am so glad that they had twins, so now Maxie gets boy and girl.  Selma has some strong genes as those babies didn't get any of Maxie's that is noticeable.  I hope that he doesn't let that racist womans comments intrude on his happiness.  This chapter was so good and nice and long.  Thank you Brenda!!



Author's Response:

LOL  You are so funny!  Maxie does love him some Selma.  Her hormones were making her cranky and weepy. Now that the babies are here, Maxie just wants to enjoy being a father.  More to come soon!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2011 06:20 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Beautiful babies. That lady had some nerve approaching him in that way.



Author's Response:

Old people think that they can say what they want out of their mouths.  LOL

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2011 05:10 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]
Date: December 12 2011 04:14 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Wow!! Great chapter.  Selma did snap, but Maxie handled it well.  Happy the babies are healthy and finally going home.  WHat is up with the nosey a** woman.  I hope Maxie doesn't question Selma's loyalty because I am positive Slema will snap again.



Author's Response:

Maxie has no doubt that the babies are his.  He never even thought about the complexion until the old bat brought it up!  LOL  More is coming soon!

Reviewer: othello Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2011 03:51 pm

Title: Chapter 11

That old b*tch needs to go to helll, and mind her own business. Clearly they didn't cover genetics back when she was in school.

 

And either way, what does she care?



Author's Response:

LOL  Old people can be a trip.  Maxie was on the verge of cussing her out, but pulled off with rocks flying instead.  Maybe one hit her....

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed [Report This]
Date: December 12 2011 03:38 pm

Title: Chapter 10

BEAUTIFUL!!!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2011 03:09 pm

Title: Chapter 9

What are the two words that start with the letter T that describes Stanley Bloomfield?  Trouble and Trash! Yep that him! Maxie is the man! Please write stanley out of the story soon, he needs a rock bottom moment to happen to him.

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2011 02:39 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Jealousy comes in all sizes shapes and colors! Kelly is a true woman for stepping up and getting in Russells butt about the way he has always treated Maxie. And how he needs to cut him some slack! If maxie is happy then he should be happy also!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2011 01:24 pm

Title: Chapter 5

And flying pigs can be so cute with their little wings and tutu skirts.....Anyway. I like the fact that everyone has come to an understanding. I am glad Stephen has explained his actions about Maxie and Maxie has promised as a Gentleman never to cheat on Selma. Since Stephen is the official man of the house he had to defend his mothers honor and Maxie had to allow Stephen to do it for his sake and to show him the respect he needed. Now Stephen on the other hand had to give Maxie the benefit of the doubt, and finally realize NO ALL MEN CHEAT! Just the ones that are insecure with themselves!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2011 12:47 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Oh hell what a way to find out your going to be a father......That is not good! But I admire Terry for stepping up to the plate to find out the truth about Maxie and Selma.....instead of being like Stephen and Matthew and just assuming. Keep it up, I am liking this story more and more. Also I like the fact that she explained to him that he might not have the full package, but what he does have is one hell of a gift for her and she likes it! 2 thumbs up!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2011 12:17 pm

Title: Chapter 8

That's what I'm talkin bout! All is forgiven and all is well between the two brothers.....Russ' son has found his soul mate and Russ's wife Kelly had finally opened up made new and interesting friends and made her husband beg like a thirsty man begging for water in the desert!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 06 2011 08:40 am

Title: Chapter 7

DAYAM!!!!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2011 08:14 am

Title: Chapter 10

What a sweet chapter! Everyone turned out to have a good time. Love the way Rowland told Selma's son they are now his grandchildren. Maxie's mom is a sweetheart!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2011 03:23 am

Title: Chapter 10

Yeah Selma and Maxie are husband and wife.  Thanks for a great update.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2011 03:09 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Thanks for the wonderful update. Rowland a hoot.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2011 02:35 pm

Title: Chapter 2

so im rereading cuz i love this story so much and i just realized that there are no granddaughters only grandsons!!! please please please let maxie and selma have a baby girl! that would be sooo sweet!! itll be the first girl for everyone concerned!!!



Author's Response:

LOL I'm way ahead of you!  More is coming soon.

Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 05 2011 12:54 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Yeah! They are finally husband and wife and it went off without a hitch.

Stephen got him a new grandfather that loves the Vikings as much as him if not more and they have all bonded quit well.

Matthew got him a new grandmother that soothed his doubts about his place in the family and Selma not knowing it confirmed her mother in law's words to him which helped him be at each I can see a bond growing stronger with the family.

I kept waiting for the other shoe to hit but it all was well and I am happy happy happy.

Thank you for a wonderful update as always.

Sure you know I can't wait for more more more.

Happy writing...



Author's Response:

Stanley didn't know about the wedding, besides he's off gambling somewhere.  More to come soon!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2011 07:47 am

Title: Chapter 10

Brenda you are so awesome, I am so happy to read one of my favorite stories by one of my favorite authors!!!  You rock!!  Selma and Maxie got married, yay!!!  Selma has made Maxie so happy, she have given him everything that he has ever wanted.  I am waiting for that troll Stanley to show up and try to get what doesn't belong to him. 

 

You made my day, Brenda!! Have a great week!!!



Author's Response:

Stanley didn't know about the wedding.  He is going to show up again and I am sure Maxie is going to take care of the situation. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2011 06:37 am

Title: Chapter 10

I just love this story...great update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2011 06:21 am

Title: Chapter 10

awwwwww how lovely!!! thanks for another wonderful chapter brenda! sooo glad the wedding went off without a hitch!i still think ole stanleys gonna show up and selmas gonna end up getting hurt somehow due to one of his schemes or something. maxie would really go caveman on his ass then for real! more please!!



Author's Response:

Stanley will show up again!  Maxie will handle the situation for sure!

Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2011 04:37 am

Title: Chapter 1

OMG I honesty cry like a big baby reading this update.I'm just a hopeless romantic. How awesome Maxie parents are (can they be my grandparents too) lol.I love how Maxie and Selma are husband and wife now their family seem to be getting along nicely.Mrs.Brenda you really out did yoursel with update,looking forward for the next one.

Reviewer: meko1975 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2011 04:17 am

Title: Chapter 10

Thanks for the update

Great chapter

Brenda I love everything you write

Reviewer: othello Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2011 04:13 am

Title: Chapter 10

They are married. I'm glad the minister didn't do anything disrespectful.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2011 03:50 am

Title: Chapter 10

OH my the wedding finally came and it was just wonderful loved how selma kids go along with their new addition grand parents that was just wow and of course maxie gave selma one hell of merry christmas!!!!!!!!!!!whoo i just loveeeeeeeee this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2011 03:46 am



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