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Title: Cast Pictures

Nice pictures. Love Honey's and Gabe!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2012 06:48 am
Title: Chapter 1 Deception

I would not want to claim them as my parents. I love Gabe, a man that will not bow down to his dad, and sacrifice his happiness.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2012 06:46 am
Title: Chapter 1 Deception

I think Mr. Wainwright needs a taste of his own medicine.. There is always someone whose richer and whose money is way older than this and I'm sure he has more than one skeleton in his close or black sheep in the family that he rather everyone not know about..

Sydney, is a pain in the ass.. She got what she wanted well almost.. Her kids would never be the true heir to the Wainwright legacy..

Kudos, for Audrey for being happy for her son and looking for to her some black grand babies..

Sugar, is a hot mess.. I hope Bruce, isn't out for a quick romp in the sack.. I think she needs a good man to bring out the woman she truly wants to be.

I'm sure once you read all of your reviews you muse will kick in with boat loads of ideas..

Looking forward to the next chapter.. Also, glad you will be updating your other stories as I love them as well.

Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2012 02:45 am
Title: Chapter 1 Deception

Ms. B you always have a way of getting me to dislike a person but then turn around and give me a back story on that person that make me feel sorry from him/her but I don't think even a back story for Sugar would make me feel sorry for her greedy, trifling tired self.

Albert can't see the forest for the trees and Audrey seems like a loving, kind mother but we haven't been introduced yet.

Sydney is daddy's little princess would it be something if she was the one that was actually gay/lesbian.

Lee is a man whore but he uses protection which is good but he seems to be a good guy and an even better friend.

Honey I am loving her she seems a strong, intelligent and caring woman but she is not letting her mother run over by any means which is wonderful cause Sugar is trying even the patience of JOB would be tested with a mother like her.

Gabe is a sweetheart and I like how he kept his cool with his father and how he just let's him assume he is gay just like they say assumption will make ASSumption out of one everytime. I like his boldness too when he first met Ms. Honey Dew and I would love to see Albert and Sugar in a room together it would be hilarous the bigot and the money grubbing wannabe still your harlet.

Loving the story thank you for sharing.

Happy writing

Happy and safe holiday

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2011 01:56 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Deception

Luv it so far! Thanks for sharing!

 Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2011 05:09 am
Title: Chapter 1 Deception

Awesome story. Gabe and Honey are a dynamic couple that captures your attention. People who judge them by their appearance and social-economic background will always be suprised and somewhat twisted with conflicting images. I love them. Their parents ie her mom and his dad plus his itchy sister need to checked and told their places. Can't wait for more, pretty please.

 Reviewer: zetacrave Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 29 2011 02:44 am
Title: Cast Pictures

Great cast.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2011 05:27 am
Title: Chapter 1 Deception

Great start to the story.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2011 05:26 am
Title: Chapter 1 Deception

Man! This story is so juicy! I'm loving all of it. I'm adding this to my favorites!

 Reviewer: NikkiHearsAWho Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2011 08:28 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Deception

I love all of your stories! Merry Xmas, thanks for writing and sharing.

 Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed [Report This]
Date: December 25 2011 07:30 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Deception

Ms. Brenda, you always surprise and delight me with your stories. I cant wait to see how this one turns out. So far very interesting! I'm eagerly awaiting the events of the upcoming charity event. I'm sure all will be revealed to the family. Thanks for always keeping me interested and Merry Christmas!

 Reviewer: katie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 25 2011 05:09 am
Title: Chapter 1 Deception

Very interesting story line!!! I really did think Gabe was gay!!! I like how it's leading me through the story!! I can't wait for the drama to begin!!

 Reviewer: Ainslee Capoise Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 24 2011 09:35 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Deception

Yeah, you are right drama will happen with this story,from racism to ignorance, whether black, white, ghetto fabulous or socialite, there is bound to be a whole hell of a lot of drama in this story! Any time you mix people with money with people without money, you will have drama for your momma! It doesn't matter which race has the money they do not want their children with a person without money.....they feel is sully's the family!  Thank You Brenda1257 for this story and I can not wait to read more!

 

 

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2011 04:24 pm
Title: Cast Pictures

Nice looking cast!

 Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: December 24 2011 04:38 am
Title: Chapter 1 Deception

Great story, can't wait for more updates!

 Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: December 24 2011 04:38 am
Title: Cast Pictures

This is so good! I'm excited to see where this story goes! *Adds to favorites*

 Reviewer: NikkiHearsAWho Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2011 03:49 am
Title: Chapter 1 Deception

Me likey! More please.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2011 03:08 am
Title: Chapter 1 Deception

Wow, great start. Sugar is a piece of work!

 Reviewer: Ashauna77 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 24 2011 02:47 am
Title: Cast Pictures

Good start! Can't wait for more!! 



Author's Response:

I'm working on it.

 Reviewer: Megan Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2011 02:09 am
Title: Cast Pictures

To bad Lee is gay because he is fine!!!!  I am loving the cast!



Author's Response:

Yes, well we can't have them all, can we?  LOL

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2011 01:58 am
Title: Chapter 1 Deception

hmmmm. Brenda another hit..

 Reviewer: the girl next door Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 24 2011 01:25 am
Title: Chapter 1 Deception

Mum's a piece of work....Dad's a piece of work....

 

Who's up for eloping and never looking back? *hands raised to the sky*



Author's Response:

LOL Leo Princess:  I don't know about eloping because where's the fun in that.  Don't you want to see what happens when those two meet up? Thanks for the review and Merry Christmas!

 Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2011 08:17 pm
Title: Cast Pictures

looking good ms. brenda!



Author's Response:

Believe it or not I'm working on an update between cooking pies and making a pound cake.  LOL

Don't know when it'll be finished though.

 Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2011 03:06 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Deception

Gabriel a freak. I love how he took charge. When their parents meet, there's going to be  a whole lot of drama.



Author's Response:

Yes, Gabriel feels that he has to be agressive to get beyond women's first impression of him.  LOL.  There is going to be some knocking of the heads real soon.  (After the holidays)  Merry Christmas!

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2011 02:23 pm
Title: Cast Pictures

I absolutely love this story. You've got another hit on your hands. And I love the pics.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  More coming after the holidays.  Merry Christmas.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2011 02:21 pm


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