Title: Chapter 3 Henrietta's History

Loved it!

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 09 2012 06:00 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Henry's Life Lesson

Great update, loving the pace of the story!

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 09 2012 05:44 pm

Title: Chapter 3 Henrietta's History

Excellent! Excellent! Excellent! I don't often give 10 ratings, but I enjoyed your story. Thanks for sharing. 

Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2012 03:53 am

Title: Chapter 2 Vanessa's Dilemma

Wow. Too real. I can picture the characters as I read. Superb story. 

Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2012 03:37 am

Title: Chapter 1 Henry's Life Lesson

Great story! I'm really enjoying reading this. It's so real.... very realistic. I'm looking forward to more. 

Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2012 03:10 am

Title: Chapter 1 Henry's Life Lesson

Great story! I'm really enjoying reading this. It's so real.... very realistic. I'm looking forward to more. 

Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2012 03:10 am

Title: Chapter 3 Henrietta's History

Well isn't Henny's grandma a bitch, she's looking down her nose at Henny and her mother, and she was treated the same by henry's family.  You would have thought that woulf]d have made her more understanding.  At least Henry sr is coming around, his grandaughter has won him over.  Can't wait for more Brenda, Keep up the good work

Reviewer: Jules Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 20 2012 05:09 pm

Title: Chapter 3 Henrietta's History

I dont blame Henny one bit! Sometimes you just need to look 'em in the eye and see it and hear it for yourself.

Good for Henny!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2012 06:01 pm

Title: Chapter 3 Henrietta's History

What an endearing story... it was so true!

We still have people like this today.  I am so glad that Henny and her father are going to have a strong relationship.

the Grandfather is a hoot..

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2012 04:07 am

Title: Chapter 3 Henrietta's History

I tell you the truth that old battle axe emily had some damn nerve aint nothing but dirt poor white trsh dressed in a pretty bow looking her nose down at some one well at least henry sr. stop fighting and began to finally accept his son decisions and become a grandfather to henny!!!!!loved the story a wonderful ending.......

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2012 06:22 am

Title: Chapter 3 Henrietta's History

This was great I don't how I miss this one lol.I love Henry Sr.and I'm glad Henny is starting to opening up to her daddy.looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: meko1975 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2012 04:35 am

Title: Chapter 3 Henrietta's History

That was so good, Henry's momma is a bitch on two wheels!!  I am so glad that Henny spoke up and told them right.  I was proud of Henny and she impressed Henry Sr. as well.  Loving it!!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2012 01:34 am

Title: Chapter 2 Vanessa's Dilemma

Vanessa's family is just as bad as Henry's parents.  I am loving this Brenda!!!  I am very happy that Vanessa womaned up and told her grandma about Henry.  Lamont is a fool!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2012 01:20 am

Title: Chapter 1 Henry's Life Lesson

Brenda thanks for this story I am so glad to read about Henry as a child.  HIs parents were worthless and if it hadn't been for Minnie Henry would have been a lost cause.  Henry will have his work cut out with Henny, to her his getting close with her is all about getting Vanessa back.  He needs to show her otherwise.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2012 01:05 am

Title: Chapter 3 Henrietta's History

Excellent ending! At least granddad had enough sense to start to wise up!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2012 10:47 pm

Title: Chapter 3 Henrietta's History

Thanks for a nice update.  At least Henry, Sr is accepting of his grand daughter.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2012 09:32 pm

Title: Chapter 3 Henrietta's History

Thanks for the MLK Day update! 

I was initially quite apprehensive about Henny going to see her grandparents, but I'm glad that at least her grandfather seems to be coming around.  Her grandmother is quite the hateful witch though, isn't she...

It's sad that so many years after MLK's death there is still so much hate and intolerance in the world, but at least we are heading in the right direction (for the most part anyway).

Happy MLK Day to you, Brenda and thanks for the snippet!

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2012 08:33 pm

Title: Chapter 3 Henrietta's History

Great update Brenda! The title is very appropriate, Henny shall overcome.

Reviewer: buddha Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2012 07:40 pm

Title: Chapter 3 Henrietta's History

Very delightful. I chuckle at Henny's interaction with her grandparents. Henry Sr. seem taken with Henny. Henry's mom on the other hand... what a pistol. She resents Henny for reminding her of her past and looking like her mother in law.<p></p>

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2012 07:13 pm

Title: Chapter 3 Henrietta's History

Great chapter! Glad Henry Sr. Is willing to accept Henny, hopefully Emily comes around too!

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 16 2012 06:50 pm

Title: Chapter 2 Vanessa's Dilemma

Don't you just hate nosy neighbors? Vanessa is a grown woman and people including grandma should stay out of her business. I hope she and Henry fight to be together!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 13 2012 10:35 pm

Title: Chapter 2 Vanessa's Dilemma

It's interesting that in the beginning one could come down hard on Henry for how he treated Vanessa. But I've learned with your stories that things are not always as they seem. Your characters are given so many layers and you paint a full picture of who those characters are and that takes time. So, while the initial reaction may be, how could he do that? With each installment you get a better idea of the circumstances and human flaws an frailities involved. I love that about your storytelling.

On a more humorus note, when I'm reading about the grandmother and Uncle, I get a Madea and that brother of hers picture. I don't know why that popped into my head. Can't wait to see the Uncle after all these years and his wrong-headed notions. Henry is no longer that naive little kid that he was. I'm thinking he'll be able to hold his own.



Author's Response:

Thank you BellaChica:  I do that because there is always a reason why people are the way they are.  Every character I write will not always be redeemable, because all people cannot recover and move on from their pain, so they continue to hurt others.  As a minister I've learned that.

For example, Henry's parents are still the same even though the child they wanted to get rid of ended up saving their only child's life.  They pushed that fact out of their minds.  Howvever, they are going to come face to face with Henrietta and that will be interesting.

I guess it's the minister in me coming out.l All babies are born innocent.  Negative behavior is learned and pain that is inflicted is repeated.  I love redemption.  It is always somewhere hidden in my stories.  LOL  Howver, as I said, everyone cannot be redeemed, I know that.

LOL at Madea.  I hadn't thought about that, but now I can't get those two out of my mind.  If it looks like Madea and her brother in the next installment, it's your fault.  LOL 

Thank you for reviewing.  We all are a work in progress and only God's grace can help us to move closer to what our LORD really wants us to become.

 

Brenda

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2012 06:25 am

Title: Chapter 2 Vanessa's Dilemma

I think Henny is slowly warming uop to her father, it's a good thing her friends were their to push her in to going out with him, and all credit to Henry for riding the rides until he was sick, just to impress his daughter.  As for grannie, she seems like a tough cookie, but I think she will crumble under Henry's charm, Lamont is just blowing hot air, as his mother said, look at the choices you made before you start to lay the blame for your life at others doors. 

Reviewer: Jules Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 07 2012 03:42 pm

Title: Chapter 2 Vanessa's Dilemma

Wow grandma is tough.  Poor Vanessa,  it is amazing how things come to light.  Stay strong Vanessa.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2012 03:19 am

Title: Chapter 1 Henry's Life Lesson

What a sheltered life Henry lived.  I felt bad for him.  I was glad that he out Henny in her place when she was talking bad about her mother.  Thanks for a great read. 

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2012 02:52 am



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