Title: Chapter 6 Lessons in Love

omg i demand you come back here and update



Author's Response:

LOL.  Can I go outside and play for a little while?  PLEASSSSEEE!  It's going to be 80 today.  OK, I may update later...maybe.  

Reviewer: mags Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 14 2012 10:06 am

Title: Chapter 6 Lessons in Love

What a sweet story!! Loving it!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2012 06:53 am

Title: Chapter 6 Lessons in Love

Thank You!!!!! Thank You!!!! for giving that poor baby some relief.  Now about their dad, can there be a bigger A-hole???  Wow,definitely didn't see that coming.

 

And lastly, please don't stop the madness..... :-)



Author's Response:

Yes, Inga had a good nights sleep afterwards.  LOL.  I'm not so sure about Charlie though. MOre is coming...

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2012 03:43 am

Title: Chapter 6 Lessons in Love

No you don't have to stop!!! Great job



Author's Response:

alright now, my left eye started watering....a sure sign to give the computer a break.  LOL.

Reviewer: annette Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 14 2012 03:21 am

Title: Chapter 6 Lessons in Love

Well, good thing it was a good day's work then...lol!

Charlie Sr..ughh...what a joke. He's got his wife and son supporting him through Jared! This guy this digusting! If this doesn't convince Jared, then he's hopelss. His father just played on his emotions all these years. And he's going to have some explaining to do with his family, especially Valerie, about hiding the fact that he's known where Charlie has been all this time. Now, Valerie will have her own problems with the father of her children to deal with, so now maybe she can leave Charlie alone. I can't even believe this.

Inga, I think she's too preoccupied with sex at the moment to consider her feelings for Charlie. Because of this, he might be expecting too much from her. She's not talking feelings, only how soon he can bone her. Don't think that's really hit Charlie yet. I think he might be counting on something suddenly magical happening on her end at the end of these six months.



Author's Response:

Charles knows how to exploit people's weaknesses and he used Jared's desire for a father for his own evil  purposes.  I'm pretty sure that Jared is done with him at this point.

As for Inga's feelings for Charlie, they are there.  While it's true she's preoccupied with sex, the last three months she's been trying to do things Charlie's way.  When he offered her his hands for her birthday, her first concern wasn't the sex, but if he would be alright in the process.  (Believe me she cares, more than she even realizes at the moment).  

Charlie is in love and Inga is falling hard too.  She just doesn't realize it yet, but she will.  LOL.

Valerie is concerned about whether Inga really loves her son because she doesn't want him hurt.  The race thing bothers her a little, but not enough for her to complain, because the main thing she wants is for Charlie to be happy.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2012 02:45 am

Title: Chapter 6 Lessons in Love

Charles Sr needs his a$$ kicked. I hope Lucinda doesn't get her feelings hurt messing the Jared. As for Charlie....go ahead with yourself! Happy Birthday, indeed!



Author's Response:

Jared is so used to being with girls that are pretty and self absorbed, he felt that he never had someone to love him.  He just wants to be loved and valued as a person.  He acted out growing up trying to get his mother's attention.  He is the middle child, stuck between Charlie and what he perceives as the 'adorable twins'.  No one paid Jared any attention before.  Things are about to change for him....

Charlie was happy to give that birthday present.  LOL 

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2012 02:40 am

Title: Chapter 6 Lessons in Love

So Charles Peterson Sr., has reared his vile head.  He has been Jared for years and was willing to pimp him out to pay off hid debts.  That man is evil, I really do hope that he does apologize to his mother, because he treated her and his brothers so bad.  Inga got sex on the brain and Charlie gave in a little bit.  I hope that you appreciate what the man did for you Inga!!! Brenda you did the damn thang again!!!



Author's Response:

Yes, Charles isn't out of the picture yet.  Jared has met his match in Lucinda. LOL.  As for Inga, yeah she loves sex, but did you notice her concern for Charlie when he offered her the massage?  Methinks that she's slipping....Now if only Charlie can get her to say the words so that he can get down to business!  LOL

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2012 01:57 am

Title: Chapter 6 Lessons in Love

Oh hell no. Senior has lost his mind. First he strings Jared for money, then sells him out to pervs. Then try and sits in judgment of Charlie and Inga's relationship.

I can barely wait for the next uodate. Please Brenda, tell me Senior going to pay for all his deeds.

Author's Response:

Oh  Charles is going to get his, that's for sure.  LOL  But of course we must have a little more angst first, huh?  

More is coming...

Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2012 01:45 am

Title: Chapter 6 Lessons in Love

Well damn!  I'm speechless! (Almost). Had to move back from the monitor to get a very cold glass of sweet tea because all the drama in this chapter just left my mouth hanging wide open and dried out.

About the father...hhhmmm.  What's that mushy, smelly stuff people sometimes scrape off the bottom of their shoe, yeah that. That's what I picture when I try to imagine Charles.

Then there's Jared. Yes he's a brat, a man-child, (and almost a man-whore), but maybe with a little help from a certain young lady, Lucinda can help him grow.

Now about the mom...OMG! Sister Sarah, Get Your Gun! It's an invasion. Hahahaha.  If she's worried now with just Inga, what will she do when Jared comes back around with Lucinda in hand. I am really loving this story and all the possible twists and turn this story can take next.  

And now let's discuss Charlie and Inga.  (Silence)...uhmm...(more silence)... whoooaa...Charlie...hot... (throws hands up and backs away now to go stand in front of the freezer!)

Reviewer: RoyalKiss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2012 12:42 am

Title: Chapter 6 Lessons in Love

2 updates in one day...Wowzers!! This update was explosive from the daddy trying to trick out Jared to him finding help from an unexpected source. It was exciting to see Charlie push his boundaries sexually. I wonder what's going on with Inga's feelings for Darius, she seems to be holding onto him a little too much. My mind is racing with the possibilities in regards to the daddy/debt situation. I can't wait for more but I suggest they take his lily white a** and use him!



Author's Response:

Inga has moved on, but seeing Darius mother and then hearing the things she said to her was hurtful.  Inga has moved on, it was just shocking and she reacted.  More is coming soon.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 10:07 pm

Title: Chapter 6 Lessons in Love

WOOOOOOO!!! I'm finding it admirable that Charlie wants to hear Inga say, "I love you" before he have sex with her.  Its usually the woman who wants the man to say "I love you" first.

Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 09:40 pm

Title: Chapter 6 Lessons in Love

oh my gosh that sick low down dog sperm donor sold jared for sexual favor to men to clear up his debt all the time jared was milking his mother for money was so he could give it to that waste of skin i am just beyond shocked and upset i am glad jared got away he is a spoiled man child but damnit he definitly dont deserve to be sold and pimped out by a man he loved more than anything i mean just wow.  ok darius mother has some nerve havent she learned anything from her son's suicide apparently not she seems to be even more filled with hatred and bitterness i am glad inga friends and man didnt let the old bat ruin her birthday and whoo what a very niceeee birthday gift charlie gave her whoo just tooooo hottttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Charles Jr. is a selfish SOB it is true and Jared's eyes are finally open.  Darius mother wants to blame Inga for the loss of her only son, but she can onlyblame herself. More is coming....eventually.  LOL

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 09:21 pm

Title: Chapter 5 Life and Love According to Inga

love this story sooo much charlie is such a man!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 08:59 pm

Title: Chapter 5 Life and Love According to Inga

THIS WAS TOO FUNNY!! She should have put the gift back in the car. Wow!!! He didn't want her to use a vibrator to take the edge off...Mannnnn...LOL

Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 08:47 pm

Title: Chapter 5 Life and Love According to Inga

Inga is something else. Charlie sure has his hands full. These two will never be boring.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 08:40 am

Title: Chapter 5 Life and Love According to Inga

Charlie is so freaking hot,I'm loving how he's taking charge and turning the table around for Inga. She thought she would pleasure herself,but my boy Charlie put stop to that real quick LOL. Man what kind of preacher is that!! He support to be a man of God instead of looking at color he should be letting them know if they put God first in their relationship they will be able to over come anything.I'm glad they want be going back to that church.I'm wonder if Valerie ex husband was having an affair with was black woman? Maybe that why she is having some issue with Inga.Great job with this update looking forward to your next one.

 

And yes Mrs.Brenda I was born in 1975 :) Well with yours fresh as can be writing style I guess that make you younger me.lol



Author's Response:

LOL.  I graduated in 1975,  Boy I feel old!   Thanks for the nice review. More is coming....

Reviewer: meko1975 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 07:11 am

Title: Chapter 5 Life and Love According to Inga

Defend your woman and your relationship Charlie. Someone will always have a say about them being together, but their say so is what matters.



Author's Response:

Charlie is way past what the people in Jarratt have to say.  More is coming soon.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 06:18 am

Title: Chapter 5 Life and Love According to Inga

Great update .

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 05:09 am

Title: Chapter 5 Life and Love According to Inga

While I'm still not there with Inga yet, I see her plight. If she can't get it from Charlie just yet, this would be the solution to her problem, I guess. Kinda weird how that went down.

 



Author's Response:

Unfortunatly for Inga, Charlie doesn't know that much about *ahem* sex toys and all that.  It seems that his brothers are a little more educated in that area....  Not to worry about poor Inga though.  Her birthday's coming up and well lets just say she'll get a little of what she's longing for....

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 04:47 am

Title: Chapter 5 Life and Love According to Inga

Loved the update!  I can really feel Inga's pain...hope she'll be put out of her misery soon:)

Valerie needs to get over her disapproval of her son's relationship, or she'll lose another son!  Hopefully it doesn't come to that...

The reverend should be ashamed of himself...the God he claims to serve is a God of love, and he is actually spreading hate and intolerance...sad, really.

I love Charlie, he's so adorable...so cute the fact that he was jealous of the sex toy...can't wait until Inga gets to school him...gosh I'm such a sinner:)



Author's Response:

Amiefuzzy:  The bible says, "All have sinned and come short..."  We all can't wait til Inga gets some.  LOL. 

Her birthday is coming up and she'll wear Charlie down a bit.  He has a surprise for her to help her make it through the six month wait....  MOre to come soon.

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 04:30 am

Title: Chapter 5 Life and Love According to Inga

I guess I kinda get the idea of Charlie's reasoning as it pertains to the TOY, but as long as she is thinking of CHARLIE as she is enjoying it...I don't see the problem and I don't call it cheating. SHOT...A woman got enough problems as it is, just let her have some dang joy until what she really wants step up. Also if I was Igna...charlie wouldn't have made it off that couch...manhandled...manhandled. Great as always!!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 04:01 am

Title: Chapter 1 Getting to Know You

Ok, this is a first for me. I'm leaving a review before reading the next chapter, but damn I got so giddy when I saw another update, I just had to show you some LOVE!!!! You Rock Brenda!!!!

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 03:42 am

Title: Chapter 4 Love and Life According to Charlie

Oh how I am loving this story - thank you!

 

I wonder what's the real issue behind Valerie's feelings towards Inga. Could it be that she, Valerie, feels she'll lose Charlie's if he actually has his own life...viewing it as just another male 'leaving' her? Hhmm, just guessing here. Either way I like it!  

 

What's almost as much fun as reading each new chapter is looking over the many reviews. Including the Author's response.  Soooo, there will definitely be at least two more chapters to this delightful tale, right? 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

LOL  Yes, there will be a few more chapters. As for Valerie, she is worried about the backlash of an interracial relationship.  The people staring and Charlie kissing Inga in front of everybody was embarrassing for her.  Thanks for the review.  MOre is coming soon.

Reviewer: RoyalKiss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 02:59 am

Title: Chapter 4 Love and Life According to Charlie

thanks for writing and sharing. I appreciate that they're not jumping in bed right away.



Author's Response:

Yes, well Inga wanted to....too bad Charlie's not cooperating.  LOL

Reviewer: annette Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 02:44 am

Title: Chapter 4 Love and Life According to Charlie

I am really loving this story!  Charlie and Inga are so hot together...love the fact that Charlie is no push-over and that even though I don't want him to resist Inga (lol), he has the will-power to do so...when these two do finlly get together, it's going to be so hot!

I kinda feel sorry for Valerie...I was not her biggest fan to start with, but the way she finally stood up to Jared was brave and must've been so hard, but it was LOOONG overdue!  Jared is such a spoilt, manipulative brat...hope he changes because life is gonna become really hard for him...I wish his dad would show up and show his true colors, so he can have an epiphany...

Look forward to the next update!



Author's Response:

OOh Amie, You reading my mind, so get out of my head, girl.  LOL.  I don't want to give it away, so all I will say now is to stay tuned for chapter 6.  More is coming....

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2012 03:12 pm



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