Ugh, this story is sickeningly amazing. You are such a talented writer. I love Shaun and Adam's chemistry and attraction to each. It sucks that they had to come together under these circumstances. And to become so attached to one another so quickly .. damn. I really hope everything works out for them and Shaun makes the right decision in the end.
Reviewer: geekwithglasses Signed [Report This]Date: August 01 2013 07:46 pm
Hmmm...Shaun is getting on my nerves; she is too much a "tool", letting everyone pressuring her (Celia, her parents). She is supposed to be in her mid-20ties, right? Why does she sound like a 16 years old? Also all the back and forth, hot kiss and then cold shoulder, is getting tiring. There need to be some evolution.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 01 2013 07:36 pm
I think Shaun should just tell him herself about the article and how everything started. Even if he gets mad, he'll appreciate her honesty especially if he knows that both of them are emotionally invested in the other.
I am hoping that things will work out for both of them.
Excellent update!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: August 01 2013 07:32 pm
Ugh so many feelings haha. Why can't Shaun just become a model and then when that is done become a writer. Or write the article about her experience working with top names... I just don't want the epic blow up to happen.
Anyways, Love this story and can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: cheetahgrl07 Signed [Report This]Date: August 01 2013 07:25 pm
This is going to end badly for Shaun, aalthough I do hope that Adam will eventually forgive her. Shaun will have to change the nature of this peace as Adam really isn't the racist scum sucking pig as that rant portrayed. Thank you for posting the update! I missed this story
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 01 2013 07:02 pm
I have been waiting forever for this update! Ahh Shaun you can't have it both ways hun but I feel for you.
Oh Adam...poor Adam
Reviewer: cocoverdad Signed [Report This]Date: August 01 2013 06:42 pm
Dearest Voices, just so you know, I've now reread this story from the beginning, 5 times (count them - 5) because I like it so much. I've now gleaned every possible ounce of knowledge and love and respect for all characters and I'm still feel like my addiction is not even slightly assuaged. And frankly, I wouldn't want it to be. But seriously, please finish this story! You're a great writer! If you need any ideas or beta'ing, let me know (LOL - but serious at the same time). Do you think you'll be doing something on this story soon? 5th time through is just a solidification of the fact that your story is GREAT!
Reviewer: Nim Manu Signed [Report This]Date: July 29 2013 11:29 pm
Well damn....hopefully she doesnt lose him after all this
Reviewer: JB_Shawty143 Signed [Report This]Date: July 13 2013 12:48 am
For this FABULOUS 4th of July..... Please help us celebrate with a few chapters being posted! We love you! And we are TOTALLY stuck on a cliffhanger!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 12:24 am
This story has caught my attention, but that "real black woman" statement is very telling. As a "real black woman" who just happens to be multicultral I can't stand when we judge each other like this.
Author's Response:
You are not the first person who has felt this way so I feel the need to point out that it is a character in my story who said these words--a fictional white woman--and they are not indicative of how I feel about black/multicultural women myself. It is dialog, simply an extension of a character in my story, in this case Janelle.
Reviewer: peanutsmom19 Signed [Report This]Date: July 01 2013 03:51 pm
OMG PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I HAVE BEEN REREADING THE STORY OVER AND OVER HAHA I LOVE IT!!
Reviewer: cheetahgrl07 Signed [Report This]Date: June 24 2013 10:55 am
OMG! Voices.......... puuuuuuuuleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaseeeee appease our addiction!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm hoping, praying, pining and whining (now) that perhaps we can have 2 HUGE chapters in the next few days. As one of your MANY avid fans, we HAVEN'T forgotten this AWESOME story! Save us!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Nothing else substitutes for this story and the characters and your writing!!!!!!!! Maybe we can get a group cheer/chant going on here... stadium style:
WE!!! WANT!!! MORE!!! WE!!! WANT!!! MORE!!! WE!!! WANT!!! MORE!!! WE!!! WANT!!! MORE!!! WE!!! WANT!!! MORE!!! WE!!! WANT!!! MORE!!! WE!!! WANT!!! MORE!!! WE!!! WANT!!! MORE!!! WE!!! WANT!!! MORE!!! WE!!! WANT!!! MORE!!! WE!!! WANT!!! MORE!!!
(AND LOTS OF ENCORES!!!) :D Love ya! Hope this makes your day!!!
~ Nim
Reviewer: Nim Manu Signed [Report This]Date: June 18 2013 05:40 pm
Omg can you please update ? I'm begging you :) I love this story so much
Reviewer: Amy Winehouse Signed [Report This]Date: June 12 2013 04:00 pm
Great update! Oh God, he's so gonna feel like a fool when she tells him that she's not a model, but a writer..
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 25 2013 05:32 pm
I know you love reviews from your fans! I'm laughing reading the sentiment we all share: ahhhhhhhhhhh! This is awesome!!!!! Can't wait for more!!!!
Reviewer: Nim Manu Signed [Report This]Date: May 21 2013 03:39 am
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! I am screaming! AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! More! I need more! NOW!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Monique Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 20 2013 03:27 pm
Hay thanks for updating.! I really like this story.! Keep up the good work!
:)) <3
Reviewer: weluvjb92 Signed [Report This]Date: May 18 2013 04:57 am
Whew! That was close! It is time to let him sample the forbidden fruit! But will she survive it? Knowing he may never forgive her? Can she forgive herself?
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2013 02:54 am
That was hot!
Reviewer: Musicluva Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 15 2013 05:16 pm
She will give in soon
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: May 15 2013 04:39 pm
GRRR I wish she would tell him the truth!!! I'm so ready for them to be happy. Maybe he gets mad at her when he find out they stop talking for awhile then he changes his mind and goes after her just as shes about to turn in her assignment on him!!!
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: May 14 2013 05:21 pm
Ahhhhhh fucking amazing chapter!!! I love her and Adam's convos. had me blushing and smiling like a fool lol
Reviewer: risk19 Signed [Report This]Date: May 14 2013 04:07 pm
This chapter was such a tease! Haha I thought I was finally gonna get their sex scene!!!
Reviewer: Bryleigh Lisette Signed [Report This]Date: May 14 2013 07:59 am
As I've said: You are awesome! But my dear voices, I am going to be having a REALLY hard time waiting for anything more than a few days for the next up date! These almost happenings are ruining me! :D
If you can't update this one, give us some more on Lila's Thunder and Trois! ALL excellent stories!
PS. You should (if not already) pursue publishing your books professionally! You're quite captivating! SERIOUSLY!!!! I. Can't. Wait. For. More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Nim Manu Signed [Report This]Date: May 14 2013 07:06 am
you my dear friend are AMAZINGGG this story had me going through my emotions i love it and using adam levine as the main character i am truly in love...with your story and writing style please i beg of thee update soon
Reviewer: kell369 Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 14 2013 03:07 am