i love this story! Keep on writing. And when you get a chance, plz update Lila's Thunder :)
Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed [Report This]Date: May 14 2013 01:36 am
great update
Reviewer: jomoli Signed [Report This]Date: May 14 2013 12:42 am
Ok, that was a very MEAN, TEASE!!! I thought old girl was at least gonna get her first HAPPY ENDING...oh well maybe next update.
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: May 13 2013 11:23 pm
Ughhh!!! I just knew it was gonna happen!!!
Reviewer: Teiga Signed [Report This]Date: May 13 2013 08:29 pm
Soooooooo...in the next chapter he'll be eating the cookie right?????
justsaying
Reviewer: ladake79 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13 2013 07:17 pm
Well, that was... nice.
And please update Trois. PLEASE.
Reviewer: LolaWrites Signed [Report This]Date: May 13 2013 06:02 pm
This is going to bad when Adam finds out why Shaun has worked her way into his life. Adam really likes her and she makes him care. Shaun you are right you will lose him but it would be your fault as you are using him to advance your career. This makes you deserving of having your heart broken as well makes you worse than Veronica. Loving this story!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 13 2013 02:08 pm
-sobs- I need more!!! I'm so dreading the moment Adam finds out about who she really is. But they're so cute and sexy together I know it'll all be okay. Adam talking about eating out...ugh yes. I love this so much. Thank you for the update!
Reviewer: ElegantBunny Signed [Report This]Date: May 13 2013 09:59 am
O... M... FREAKING G! I'm starting to hate Celia's damn advice. Shaun and Adam are so close and perfect... and scared. I wish Shaun would just quit fighting it. I feel like the thing that's definately holding them back is her.
Reviewer: sojo Signed [Report This]Date: May 13 2013 08:25 am
OMG! That was fuckin* hilarious! And seriouly hot!
It was like I was in the room watching the whole conversation...back and forth and back and forth...like a tennis match....hehehe. It was fun. I cant wait for the next update! Thank you!
Reviewer: amlaamar Signed [Report This]Date: May 13 2013 07:06 am
AWESOME chapter! My "fix" has been filled! And for Mother's Day nonetheless! Now I can't think of Adam without thinking of your story! Well written!
Forever your fan!
Nim
PS. PUH-LEASE don't leave us hanging for so long - but honestly - scratch that whining here - this chapter WELL made up for anything! You rock!
Reviewer: Nim Manu Signed [Report This]Date: May 13 2013 06:31 am
I was driving in my car listening to Stereo and came home to an update of this wonderful tale. *happy dance*
All this practicing, let's just hope they don't end up with a "practice" baby. :)
And she doesn't need any input from Celia. And Adam is a p.e.n, heh? Another talent ;)
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 13 2013 06:18 am
I can really feel the lovin' between Adam and Shaun after this update! Fantastic story, can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: AnnieNathanson Signed [Report This]Date: May 13 2013 05:26 am
I'm in love with Adam. I don't want him to find out about Shaun but we all know it'll happen anyway. I want them to get married and have beautiful green eyed fluffy haired children, ok. This is wonderful.
Reviewer: Edged Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 13 2013 05:20 am
Yesssssss! They were so closeeeee! I don't think Shaun is going to be able to hold out much longer with the way adam is going on. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed [Report This]Date: May 13 2013 05:00 am
I absolutely loved it! This story is one of my favorites. It is like a how to lose a guy in ten days and never been kissed type of story that is just worlds better. I applaud your brilliance, please post again soon. I wonder what Celia has to say about all of this? Could we handle it if they became intimate? Hell yes!!!!!!!! Could they??? *Merp* Dunno.
Reviewer: HumorMe Signed [Report This]Date: May 13 2013 03:35 am
GAh this is such a tease I want this to happen so badly already dammit. i get all excited and then...
I love seeing this relationship develop and then at the same time, seeing Shaun hold back because of her secret, which if she just talked to him about it already feelings would not be as hurt as when her little secret is acutally revealed. The tension IS REAL! I LOVE IT!
Great update! Thanks!
Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]Date: May 13 2013 02:58 am
Gooooshh!! These 2 are so freaking intense!! Sometimes i feel like not reading this story as soon as you update just so i can have more than one chapter to read. It just leaves me like Adam! Wanting for more and more. I can't wait for the next update and to be honest, for the rest of the story, period. Can't wait to see how Adam will react when everything comes out. I hope your muse hits you hard so you can write a lot of chapters haha.
Btw, every time i watch The Voice i think of this freaking story haha. He's so damn hot, sexy, cute... Simply beautiful.
Hope you update soon!! Thanks for this.
Reviewer: Mariposa-12 Signed [Report This]Date: May 13 2013 02:13 am
Man, Adamn is in so deep! This is gonna end messy when he finds out what's going on.
And Adam really wants Shaun..whew! Ialmost wanted her to get busy with him!
Nice!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: May 13 2013 12:56 am
You are killing me!
Reviewer: diggity35 Signed [Report This]Date: May 13 2013 12:27 am
Another excellent chapter!!!! So hot,and they are only at first base.
I re-read the last chapter of Lila's Thunder. You stopped at a really big place. Are you gonna pick up writing that at any time?
Date: May 12 2013 11:53 pm
She's let this go on long enough. She needs to come clean soon.
Thanks for the update
Reviewer: Meg Signed [Report This]Date: May 12 2013 11:29 pm
She better say yes.
Reviewer: Dances_With_Pen Signed [Report This]Date: May 12 2013 11:17 pm
Get her Adam. She needs to come clean before she gets caught. This s going to be so ad when he finds out.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12 2013 11:00 pm
Shaun should have said "who am I to deny you the pleasure of pleasuring me?" At least that's what I would have said.. I love me some Adam Levine so he could get it anytime, anywhere..
I am not looking forward to the truth coming out but it needs to come out like ASAP so they and work on building a real relationship..
Great update!
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed [Report This]Date: May 12 2013 11:00 pm