I would NOT turn down head from Adam Levine. Somebody hands a medal to Shaun lol.
I like her better when she's not listening to Celia tbh. She can handle Adam without an expert.
They're getting so deep though, they're both this close to be in love. I'm afraid of what will happen when the truth comes out.
Update more often, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaase :D
Reviewer: paayush Signed [Report This]Date: May 12 2013 10:27 pm
ahhhh!!! for a sec i thought she would've said yes
Reviewer: cocoverdad Signed [Report This]Date: May 12 2013 10:11 pm
ugh i don't want him to find out. i just can't take the heartbreak then the long road to forgiveness, it's too much for my poor tortured soul.
Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed [Report This]Date: May 12 2013 09:49 pm
You masterful BITCH!!!! (I am so sorry. That might me uncalled for and offensive to you, but I mean it with the GREATEST endearment possible). YOU.ARE.KIIIIILLLLLING.ME.
Shaun is WAY better than me because I would've defiled the hell out of Adam by now. Several times over. SMH.
Fantastic, as usual.
*sighs*
Reviewer: Camille Signed [Report This]Date: May 12 2013 09:01 pm
I like this story however, I hope she stops listening to Cecila. When is she going to tell him..
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: May 12 2013 08:44 pm
Voices.....I'm suffering MASSIVE withdrawals here.....Save me. Save us. That was to huge of a cliffy to leave us with for ALL of these days.... Alright now. I'll buck up and stop whining. But please know your avid readers (I'm one of them - though a bit fanatic with regards to your stories). I check daily JUST to see if you've updated... Gotta get another habit! :) I'm hoping this next chapter really goes someplace (you know what I mean)...
Reviewer: Nim Manu Signed [Report This]Date: April 30 2013 12:12 am
Loved the update!
Reviewer: adt2700 Signed [Report This]Date: April 20 2013 07:54 am
Rough draft my ass!!! She is in deep trouble because thier connection is deep!!!
Reviewer: Leogina Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2013 06:40 am
Shaun really is in deep shit....
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: April 15 2013 02:27 am
Great update! He's gonna be so hurt when he finds out...
Reviewer: aprilfool Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2013 11:27 pm
Loved this chapter, my favorite so far...thanks soooo much for the frequent updates..
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: April 12 2013 01:14 am
Love, love ,love this story :)
Reviewer: kaci Signed [Report This]Date: April 11 2013 08:50 am
Yes she is in trouble! Her feelings are getting involved. But I am loving how you are not rushing in the development of the relationship of Adam & Shaun. This story is getting better and better.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: April 11 2013 07:50 am
Voices: You are soooo sweet to answer me! Thank you for me (and I'm certain your fellow avid readers)!
We are LOVING the story! Though, if you have ANNNNNYYYY sort of prediction on when your next chapters will be up/posted... then I will steadfastly remain calm (as much as I can) until you think you will have another chapter up..... I'm anxious to know (as we all are), how things are going to pan out.
So, if you know (and can tell us....) that would be great. Then I won't obsessively check for updates - even though I have set an alert..... :D :D :D
Now, quit reading our reviews and write us some more. awesome. chapters!.... PLEEASSSEE!
Reviewer: Nim Manu Signed [Report This]Date: April 11 2013 06:20 am
ohhh myyy gooosshhhhhh I freaking love him! she needs to come clean! forget the article! love this
Reviewer: kiyosabi Signed [Report This]Date: April 11 2013 03:26 am
Thank you so much for updating. I was thinking of this story the other day because I was watching The Voice and Adam's sexy ass said something super funny. Ah those dimples. Any-who so this chapter... was great!
I really love how your writing is very descriptive. You are able to capture the character and setting really well. Like that scene with Noodle at the sushi place.. HILARIOUS. I could picture his expression. You really have the dialogue down pack. Also the runway and her fall... Whew.. I cringed out loud. Great job and keep them chapters coming!
-p2p-
Reviewer: partial2passion Signed [Report This]Date: April 10 2013 10:27 pm
Shaun is an intelligent idiot right about now! Well no, she's not an idiot but she's definitely being idiotic about what she's doing and I'm surprised, frankly, that no one hasn't 'scooped' her background yet and splattered the shocking details all over the news.
Adam has been nothing but kind to her since day one- a little cocky yes, however, the man has been a gentleman, a friend- offering compliments, and encouragement and all the while Shaun continues to deceive him and for what...? Payback? Retribution? pssshhh! Dude spoke aloud a stupid thing during an opportunistic moment after an all-nighter with no sleep, an inner thought based on past experiences. He didn't do anything to her personally- and well hell, we all know that, that statement isn't true anymore. Poor man has fallen hard for a woman whom he knows nothing about.
Now let me say this...I really like Shaun...she's sweet, kind, smart and the lady made for Adam but chick has got to come clean or this whole debauchery will blow up in her face and it will be HER fault, not his.
And please, puhleeze, don't let anyone or anything interrupt the inevitable...'cause after that sweet serenade- those lyrics, the KISS! It would be on-and-poppin up in that hotel room! lol
So loving this story, update real soon! :)
Reviewer: JV4ME Signed [Report This]Date: April 10 2013 07:23 pm
OMG that was so amazing i swear im tearing up right now!!! update soon PLEASE
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: April 10 2013 05:48 pm
:)
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]Date: April 10 2013 02:12 pm
Ah hell! Yes Shaun is in big trouble. I'm so happy that Adam finally found a way to express how he felt and I had a feeling it was going to be through music. But I also have a feeling that something is about to happen and it's not going to be so nice.
I'm am so in love with this story! I get excited so excited when I see an update. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: diggity35 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2013 01:03 pm
Thanks for the update!!!
Reviewer: AnnieNathanson Signed [Report This]Date: April 10 2013 09:23 am
Forgot to rate!
Reviewer: Nim Manu Signed [Report This]Date: April 10 2013 06:21 am
WHAT A CLIFFY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope Shaun takes this chance to come clean, repair the inevitable upset! I'm hoping she has enough integrity NOT to write the story! (fingers crossed). She's falling..... HARD! Thank you Voices for hearing my chants and rants and cheers! (if you have a chance to read my reviews). But.... don't bother reading my reviews if it gives you more time to WRITE for us! :D :D I'm now an addict. As I've said before...
Author's Response:
I don't just read the reviews, I thoroughly read them--and enjoy them! I'm terrible at responding but please know that I read and apprechiate each and every person who takes the time to tell me their thoughts. Thank you! <3
Reviewer: Nim Manu Signed [Report This]Date: April 10 2013 06:20 am
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it!!!!!!
Reviewer: HumorMe Signed [Report This]Date: April 10 2013 06:06 am
I love this story... I am starting to feel that she's totally screwed and should come clean.
Forget the story it's not worth it, she will feel like crap and he seems to really care about her.
Excellent.
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2013 04:31 am