Very Nice!!!!
Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed [Report This]Date: June 30 2012 02:38 pm
Great update! Love how Adam is able to get Shaun out of her shell and open up to him more!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 30 2012 08:53 am
great update!!!!
Reviewer: janineac Signed [Report This]Date: June 30 2012 08:41 am
This is one helluva good story. Just please, pretty please, don't get us hooked and then abandon this story. I can't wait for an update. This is gonna be hot, I am just so thrilled that Shaun is a virgin! I can't wait.
Reviewer: mjfan Signed [Report This]Date: June 08 2012 06:19 pm
Good chapter. You're a good writer. I can visualize the scenes and emotions. Look forward to more.
Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed [Report This]Date: May 03 2012 04:00 am
Well somebody is catching feelings...
Reviewer: Madameblaque Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 30 2012 08:39 pm
Hmmm...what's got Janelle's panties in a bunch? What does she care if the pretend relationship becomes a real relationship?
I think Shaun and Adam complement each other really well.
I can't wait for more.
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: April 30 2012 10:05 am
Great chapter!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: April 29 2012 05:53 am
I really love how this story is going to be more than the 'lusty instant atttraction' bit. From what I see, I think that their feelings are going to get deeper over time and I cant wait!
Meanwhile, even if Janelle is only trying to look out for her client, the hours in the darkness deal is way creepy.
Thank you for being such a wonderful writer with a nice developmnt plot. Anxiously waiting your next update, I LOVED it, as always :D
Reviewer: apathetic_smileyface Signed [Report This]Date: April 29 2012 03:46 am
This is such a amazing story! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 29 2012 01:22 am
Uh oh!!!! Someone sounds jealous cant wait for more!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Aiyana_beautifulFlower Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 28 2012 10:58 pm
I can already tell that I am going to love this story so please update soon
Reviewer: kell369 Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 28 2012 07:38 pm
I think Shaun likes Adam more than she wants to admit.
Janelle seems a little jealous to me. But, why?
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: juleah Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 28 2012 07:20 pm
Loved it!!!!! Update soon.
Reviewer: kwajeraspen Signed [Report This]Date: April 28 2012 06:48 pm
I am obsessed with this story! Please update more frequently!
Reviewer: Monique Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 28 2012 05:22 pm
I'm loving this story. Can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: annette Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 28 2012 05:56 am
why is janelle so heated? she woried he'll hurt shaun? loved the update!
Reviewer: Dani Cali Signed [Report This]Date: April 28 2012 05:18 am
Love the update!
I can't tell if Janelle is jealous and stalkerish OR just a manager watching out for her interests and her client's. I'm going with the latter for now.
I appreciate that even Adam's bandmates are calling him out on his racist comment. It feels like the less he gets away with it, the more he understands and tries to do better.
I hope we get to see more of Yoshi btw. It should be fun to watch him interact with both Shaun and Adam lol.
Reviewer: paayush Signed [Report This]Date: April 28 2012 04:04 am
This is not good... Adam and Shaun need to stop now before they both get hurt...
Great job!!
Date: April 28 2012 03:41 am
Janelle is a hard woman...whew!
This is a dilemma for Shaun, huh?
Adam...poor guy. He cant get it right no matter what!
Good!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: April 28 2012 03:04 am
Love it...please keep the updates coming.
Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed [Report This]Date: April 28 2012 02:59 am
Somebody's jealous... and a little stalkerish.
This chapter was brillant.
Patiently awaiting more.
Reviewer: ladake79 Signed [Report This]Date: April 28 2012 02:25 am
Adam has it bad, and he's not ready to admit. Shaun is really in denial, but at least they will both get something out of this. I hope that Shaun doesn't get hurt!!! Great update and it was funny as hell.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 28 2012 01:54 am
I love this story!! Please update again soon
Reviewer: vmck Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 28 2012 01:26 am
This is one of the best stories on here. You're a fantastic writer. You're dialogues are witty and you take the time to flesh out your plots. Please update more often.
Reviewer: TheDaezy Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 28 2012 01:22 am