great chapter :D
Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2012 07:07 am
LOL....yeah...I have to say, as a rule, I really hate skinny jeans on men as well, too. Yuck!
I like Shaun....a lot.
Adam kinda needs someone real like Shaun in his life, so this should be good.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: April 02 2012 01:22 am
Great start and I can't wait for more!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 01 2012 10:46 pm
Loved the start of this story, can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: Jules Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 01 2012 08:18 pm
love this story. please hurry with chapter three!!!!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 01 2012 04:07 pm
loving this story! Can't wait for the next chpater.
Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]Date: April 01 2012 02:50 pm
Love Adam Levine. Love this story. Want to read more.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: April 01 2012 02:38 pm
Great start. I'm glad that this girl is smart and stands up to him--it makes for more of an interesting story. It also makes it even more funny for when they inevitably fall for each other. Great job and I can't wait to read more!!
Reviewer: madameblaque Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2012 12:21 pm
Loving this story!
Reviewer: Monique Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 31 2012 05:48 am
I like Shaun! Adam needs someone like her in his life and I hate to see men in skinny jeans too!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2012 05:29 am
Couldn't stand Mayer before his remark! Good start!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2012 03:53 am
I love Shaun. She held her own!! Damn, kick that asshole right where he deserves it
Reviewer: Genevieve Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 31 2012 02:21 am
Love it! More please!
Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2012 01:47 am
I absolutely love this story! I want more! I seriously cannot wait for the next one. I hope that they get to know each other. And please, save Shaun from those heels. Couldn't she wear something more comfortable. I think that he is going to really like her because she is different. I believe that Celia will be proven wrong because of her assumptions that Shaun needs to act like a brainless model in order to make Adam putty in her hands. Loved it, loved it, loved it!!!
Reviewer: Adi Milano Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2012 01:02 am
I just know I'm going to love their iinteractions from now on. Their chemistry is so intriguing.
Reviewer: Penny88 Signed [Report This]Date: March 30 2012 10:43 pm
Great story!
Reviewer: Leoslove Signed [Report This]Date: March 30 2012 08:44 pm
I've seen many chick flicks somewhat like this story's plot, it's even nicer to see it done on paper though.
As to the 'debate' I was unaware I'd caused. I don't have to justify my opinions to anyone. You worry about what you decide to say in your reviews and I'll worry about my own thoughts. Take from that what you will, but I'm done with it.
Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed [Report This]Date: March 30 2012 04:45 pm
I liked this story. You're writing style is engaging. The characters are funny. I also liked how you pulled the plot straight out of real life. I love that Adam Levine is the lead guy in this story. He is so dreamy. Yes, I said dreamy. LOL The only part that I was taken aback by was the Halle Berry and Paula Pattan are not real black woman part. That left me scratching my head. It literally took me out of the story. I know that's how a lot of black people feel. I hear it all the time.
Reviewer: lucky Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 30 2012 03:41 pm
Thanks for a great update.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: March 30 2012 12:12 pm
Love it, very visual...please update soon
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: March 30 2012 10:16 am
great start
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: March 30 2012 10:15 am
Love it! I absolutely love Shaun and Adam's interactions! It's cute! :)
Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed [Report This]Date: March 30 2012 08:50 am
Haha, Shaun and Adam are so funny! Their whole interactions with each other are so adoreable. And Shaun is just the cutest thing :) I love her personality, its just like mine (death to ALL heels and dresseally though?
Ew... come on son -__-
Great chapter, as always, and I cannot wait for the next one. Thanks.
Reviewer: apathetic_smileyface Signed [Report This]Date: March 30 2012 08:32 am
Love it. Adam's world is about to be rock.
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: March 30 2012 08:12 am
Very good!
Reviewer: Sandra Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 30 2012 07:05 am