BBW* I forgot to mention how much I lurve Adam and Katie! Love their bro-sis ship, I'm totally shipping those two kinship...more of the love, please!
Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed [Report This]Date: March 25 2012 12:23 am
This seems interesting, I like it so far. Um, I just wish you would have casted a normal black woman for him instead of a model. I don't think models are your average everyday black women. I mean, obviously they're women just like the rest, but they aren't average in the least. Average black women are deliciously curvy individuals with real sized hips, titts and ass. She didn't have to be a BWW but average is a 14; I could have settled for a 10. It would have been sexy to see Adam Levine next to a beautiful, curvy woman. Anwho, I'm looking forward to more of this asap...
LOL I didn't realize this was your story (the same person writing 'Lila's Thunder') until right before I was going to submit my review...no wonder I actually ened up liking it. I won't lie, I was skeptical about even clicking on this fiction after reading the summary.
Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25 2012 12:18 am
Interesting. I am intrigued to see what you have in store for Adam and his leading lady.
Thank u 4 sharing.
Happy writing.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2012 11:35 pm
Love it! Back when John Meyer said that infamous statement, my literal reaction was, "Oh, THANK GOD!". Since he has a nasty habit of discussing his exs' in the media, I was thrilled that women of colour were spared that indignity. His David Duke dyck be praised! Apparently, he went on to shove his whole leg down his throat after, but I had tuned out by then.
Will be interesting to see what sort of self-reflection this Adam will be forced to faced during his PR-relationship. Colour me intrigued.
Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2012 10:27 pm
more please!! great beginning!!
Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2012 09:32 pm
To think that i was just looking at PR as a career to go into, its like fate. the story is good keep posting.
Reviewer: chocolateorange Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2012 08:43 pm
I agree with Vaberella's comments. Love Katie. And whats the deal with Adam and his family?
Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2012 07:31 pm
Good first chapter! I want to read more.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2012 07:21 pm
Looking forward to read more ! Great job
Reviewer: Noona971 Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 24 2012 07:20 pm
I'm liking this one...
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2012 12:00 pm
You know what...I didn't find his comment that offensive. I found it inappropriate and a bit crass but not offensive in the least. It just shows preference and that he prefers White women sexually to Black women. Not a big deal. However, I remember hearing that John Mayor had his drama and did some research on it. I never knew what he said because I hate and abhor his music and when he sings he just looks stupid. So I ignored it. I found his statement a bit more vulgar. The original statement wasn't the problem; it was all the rest about Holly Robinson Peete...with the whole biracial Black girl usage and kind of how she's Black with a White girl personality. That was when it got out of control and he went over the top and definitely offended Black women. But initially about his dick. Nada.
This story is really great. I was hoping she wouldn't be a model though. A 'real Black woman' is normal, not a model and most often than not voluptuous. Well maybe if the model is Toccara or something and sadly I don't see Toccara giving him the light of day. ^_^
Reviewer: vaberella Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2012 09:07 am
I'm with the others, anxious to read more. You got skills
A new fan,
Kim
Reviewer: kimyso Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2012 07:11 am
Can't wait to see how things turn out once Adam meets with the woman.
Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2012 07:04 am
This sounds promising. Didn't John Mayer make the white supremesist remark in RL? Either way, it's an unneccessary comment, but I can not wait for the update
Reviewer: peach martini Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2012 06:29 am
Adam is an ahole, but a sexy one!! I love Katie, but Adam is stupid!! I can't wait to see who they are going to use to make him seem non-racists. More please!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2012 05:52 am
Nice, love Adam!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2012 05:21 am
YAAASSSSS! Adam Levine! Adam fucking LEVINE! Oh yus, babe. Love it already update soon! :D
Reviewer: OMG Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 24 2012 05:14 am
love it
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2012 05:11 am
I really like this first chapter
Reviewer: SoccergirlBianca Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2012 05:09 am
Supreb.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 24 2012 05:03 am
great start can't wiat to read more.
Reviewer: babyt Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 24 2012 04:36 am
i look forward to more. this is going to be very entertaining
Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2012 04:28 am
This was so good . Can't wait to see what happens next . Update soon !
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 24 2012 04:21 am
You've already sold me on this story. The dialogue are sharp and crisp. I love Adam's interaction with his sister. And the title of this chapter says it all. Nice touch.
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2012 04:06 am
You are an amazing writer! I love it.
Reviewer: SF69 Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 24 2012 03:57 am