Title: Chapter 1:Intro

Good start to the story.  It will be interesting to see if she makes it in Hollywood.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2012 09:16 pm

Title: Chapter 1:Intro

Great start.

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Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2012 08:39 am

Title: Chapter 1:Intro

What is Janice's talent?  Can she sing, dance or play an instrument?  Did any from the school that she graduated from tell how about how hard it is to break into show business.  This story should be interesting I just hope that she has a good head on her shoulders and doesn't circum to the lure of Hollywood, you know drugs and alcohol.  More please!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'll get to all of that info in the next chapter.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2012 05:27 am

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