Okay, so this was all kinds of hotness, and I am so in love with Scandal...
You captured the essence of Livvi and Fitz so well; they are my new fave tv pairing. Hopefully you do more one-shots or continue this one; I'm not fussy:)
Can't wait until Thursday!Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2012 03:40 pm
I know and I just got caught up on my episodes I watched where this one shot came in so I suppose Cyrus didn't have anything to do with trying to setup the president up plus he would seem to lose everything if the president did go down. I still can't say I like him due to how he lied to Fitz and Livy. Hmmmm who could it be? Interesting very very interesting.Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2012 06:20 pm
this is great! I just watched this episode last night so your one shot was right on time for me :)
Thanks!!Reviewer: mya1967 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 09 2012 04:31 pm
i have fallen in love with this show and can't miss it. I love Fitz and Livy together I hate they have so many obsticals in front of them and his wife already knows about their affair that is why she made that statement on why she invited her to the party.
I don't trust Cyrus there is something not right in the water with him. I think that the audio that he had Fitz listen to maybe of him and Livy but then Cyrus did not know they were in a relationship.
I wonder who had Amanda do all this and she was going to come clean with it all she should have called Oliva and told her it was impartive that she talk to her immediately.
Anyway I am getting beside myself. I definitely loved the one shot...
Thank you for sharing....
Thanks Kat: I love Scandal. I can't wait for the background on Livvy and Fitz!Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2012 04:38 am
loved it! followed u over here from the sweetest taboo!! i didnt wanna like these two but theyre irresistible!! i too have not watched every episode in its entirety. ive just seen clips on the fitzandliv youtube channel. plus i keep up with the scandal thread on tst. ima go head and watch the whole thing this week though tee hee!!!! brava brenda!!! p.s. tell matheson and val i said hi lol!!!
Matheson and Val are good. If I can get these stories finished, I may revisit those two.
I know, I know...no one likes a cheater, but I have a feeling that there's more to Fitz and Mellie than meets the eye. Marriage of convenience, maybe?
I can't wait til Thursday?Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 09 2012 04:06 am
Is wrong for me to thank God for your obedience to your muse?? And BTW in my perfect word you would be Lead writer for this show and it would be on Showtime so that last scene could actually play out on screen.
Thanks Lady T. Prayer is always in order and so is giving thanks. LOL
I love this show and the way it draws you even if you're feeling one way, that may change by the time Scandal gets through with you.
I can't wait for Thursday!Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2012 03:17 am
WOW!! I like it, and I can't wait until Thursday!
Me either! LOLReviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 09 2012 01:15 am
That was the hotness as always, Brenda...you've captured the essence of these two and their steamy, passionate, yet oh-so-forbidden love affair. I have no doubt that these two people love each other...even Fitz...though I know most view him as a philandering dog...maybe so...but he is quite simply..."addictive"...poor Olivia...what's a girl to do...
I wished that she could fall for someone like the D.A...sure, he's not what some would consider "sexy" enough or traditionally handsome...nor does he possess the type of power that President Grant does...but he is a steady...good man...honest to a fault...and if we lived in a world where we could pick the one we fall in love with instead of the reality of having love and passion finding and claiming you without logic...he would be the choice I would make for Olivia...but alas...the heart wants what the heart wants...and settling for second-best is hardly satisfying...darn, why did you have to do this to me...Scandal's is fast becoming my brand-new guilty pleasure...I hope it gets renewed...can't wait to see how things play out between Liv and Fitz...the looks alone can scorch concrete...burn a hole through the wall...let me stop rambling...
Great one-shot...I promise not to beg for another chapter...but I wouldn't complain if you gifted us with another one-shot in the future...
Yes, I like the DA too. I'm glad they're friends. I don't think Olivia chooses a man by looks alone. Fitz is much older than she is but the chemistry just blows you away. The people around her are all complex individuals and the show just draws you in. I am sure that there is more to the DA also than meets the eye and if the show continues, I hope they explore his life too.
Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2012 12:43 am
EXCELLENT! This Thursday's episode should be almost exactly like your fic!!
We can only hope! LOLReviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 08 2012 10:18 pm
Awesome story. I don't even mind that it's a one-off.
I remember watching the last episode, when she opened the door and saw him there. My first thought was thought was, crap, they're gonna cut it here and my parallel thought was, how the f* am I going to survive til next week?
I completely understand. And humbly thank you for easing my 'pain'. For a quick write-up, you got the characters bang on. Well done.Reviewer: cuppacoffee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 08 2012 08:25 pm
i love it..AND THE SHOW. wow, this was hot! i thought i was going to die of dehydration while reading it lol go brenda!
Drinks several glasses of water for a full recovery! LOL
I love this show too. I can't wait til Thursday! Thanks for the review!Reviewer: FindingMyself Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2012 05:49 pm
This one shot was so Hot and Sexy just like Fitz and Olivia. I totally 1000% obsessed with this show . Why must this only be a one shot . More please ( jumping up and down screaming) . Good job. : )
Lets see what happens Thursday and maybe I'll follow up.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 08 2012 04:42 pm
Soooo, I need to confess (tentatively raising my hand). I haven't actually watched a single episode of this new series so I am lost on the whole concept a little. With that being said...I thought it was a nice story, but not really my 'cup of tea' as it deals with infidelity which is a major block for me personally.
...I know, I know (heading over to the timeout corner with my blankie).
I totally understand, so no timeout corner for you. A lot of people feel that way, but it's something about this show that draws on your sympathy regardless of your convictions. Sometimes people will do the very thing that they have told themselves the'd never do because of the situations they find themselves in. Unfortunately life is not always black and white. I think about Dan Ankroyd in "Trading Places" and how he looked down on Eddie Murphy until he was the homeless one. He thought that he'd never steal, but that changed didn't it? Life is like that. Doesn't make it right, but sometimes our viewpoints alter a little when we have empathy for what the person is going through.
Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: RoyalKiss Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2012 03:30 pm
That's it, *amn it! No hope for an update, at least two or three chapters? Make a short story. You cannot start these hot *ss stories and then leave the rest to our imagination, Brenda, lol! Well, okay fine. This was an excellent one-shot.
Well, lets see what happens Thursday!Reviewer: Anna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 08 2012 03:29 pm
Brenda as always you did your damn thing. Scandal is my new favorite show. Kick your muses azz and you should write some more. LOL Who knows the writers may have to come and knock on your door. Great Job. I hope you write more.
I love Scandal! I can't wait for Thursday and see what they do next!Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2012 02:56 pm