I am wondering something, when AJ pulled Esther's file would it not have shown that she was married and who she was married to? The fact tha the is questioning who William is makes me believe the file was not very through. He has to know he's now sleeing with a married woman. Besides that, I really like the fact that she got to experience an orgasm and I am very happy he went after her, after seeing how she was in the car. Nice chapter.
Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed
[Report This]Date: August 14 2012 08:00 am
I am really liking this story. Please update soon.
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2012 09:41 pm
'unless he wanted intercourse, that meant lying still, remaining silent, and waiting for him to finish so that she could breathe again.'Seriouly? What was she a human 4x4? Proper upbringing my ass...the first thing she should have learnt about that kind of proper upbrining is that you have a boytoy on the side. That should have been the first lesson. Yes, I'm being bad. Okay now to real stuff. I have lost 10% of my respect for AJ. Tweety Bird? In that entire box of band-aids, there was no Bugs, Marvin the Martion or Sylvester? Tweety? He should have looked for a different band-aid...and that is my silly comment for the chapter...LOL!!! Loved the kiss...he was down to thirty but he gained some points back...LOL!! Wonderful chapter. He's breaking through that ice. :)
[Report This]Date: August 13 2012 06:34 am
'Who had conditioned her to be so awfully respectful?' I couldn't agree with this sentence more...conditioned is the right word as if she was a science project or something of the sorts. I like that she got to enjoy her first pizza and with good company also. AJ is such a gentleman putting her to bed and I what a fantasy about marriage? This woman is really messed up. It is as if she has never had a thought that was hers and now she's having them and that's the strange thing. Nice chapter.
[Report This]Date: August 13 2012 03:30 am
How does one comment on such evil and not even the evil of William so much but of parents who know this is what their child does and cover it up. Now that is the real evil. Accomdating this evil are the women who never report it. No comment...good insight.
Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2012 01:30 am
AJ is such a trouble maker and I love him. Hehehehe! I loved how he used her words against her every chance he got but he did it in a fun way. Now he's goign to dirve her to school in the mornings. What is he trying to accomplish by doing that? Nothing but some more trouble. I like that about him, he's pushing he out of her comfort zone. Nice job again.
Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed [Report This]Date: August 12 2012 06:12 am
“Y-you, you want to talk about s-sexual intercourse Mr. Thomas?” Esther stammered when she finally caught her breath. A.J. smirked at her choice in wording. Sexual intercourse? Who said that?-wrong in so many ways but funny as hell. Loved this line. And asking Esther what is her favourite position is like asking her what is the chemical formula of glucose...she only knows the act but beyond that, clueless. But that ending where AJ takes her out of the restuarant and kisses her in the alley, that was nice. She really needs to deal and she can't do it by herself. Another great chapter.
Date: August 12 2012 06:03 am
'Having a hot flash over a cute guy was not proper behavior for a lady'I agree with this comment, a lady wouldn't do such a thing but a real woman would and that's what Esther needs to become a real woman. The pills were obviously issued by a physc doc which means she was in treatment. I wonder what happened why she stopped the treatment? She doesn't seem to be in a state of mind where she can do without it or is it that she is running away from the family and choose freedom over them controling her treatment? The seems to be getting addicted to the pills and that could become a danger. Great chapter.
Date: August 12 2012 05:57 am
I love that she's getting sone proper loving... She really needs therapy to have a truly loving relationship and to permeantly be rid of her ex.
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: August 11 2012 08:26 pm
this is the first time i'm ever commenting on a story and i just want to say that i really love the story however the fact that esther has Dementia is really throwing me off. From reading the story it seems like Esther is suffering from PTSD due to being a victim of abusive family members more so than suffering from nonreversible loss of brain function that comes with dementia. honestly that's my only issue with the story everything else is really good! i hope to see how everything unfolds!
Reviewer: Aysha Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 11 2012 03:55 pm
I really liked it, however I need MORE! ...lol I like how u started this chapter off like a dream...= )
Reviewer: MeganRose Signed [Report This]Date: August 10 2012 09:20 am
Nice job AJ. Very good investigation and observation between the pictures and the actual person. I also like that Esther is trying to have a life by herself instead of with the so called 'family'. Nice that Rosario is the only one that she trust. I wouldn't trust that Avery also as she seems like a little goodie two shoe who would sell her sister out for the praises of the mother and father. The abuse heaped on Esther was bad if she is on such a storg medication. Good job with this chapter also.
Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed [Report This]Date: August 10 2012 07:26 am
Love Rosario's decription of Esther's apartment-anorexic (LOL!). Wow her parents are a piece of work and so is her husband. Someone should have told him that while modern science has gotten good in the last few years where they have managed to clone a sheep, that is not creation in the true sense of the word and she can't do it by herself. What an ass! Can't wait to see how AJ gets involved into Esther's life now. Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: August 10 2012 07:18 am
Ester is running away from a lot; a tormented soul; her demons are just barely below the surface and you can tell her classroom with the kids is the one place she gets any peace. Looking forward to reading how far the abuse is from her family. Good first chapter.
Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed [Report This]Date: August 10 2012 06:55 am
I love this story! I'm so glad she gave in to him! I'm nervous for her though her mother sounds crazy and I don't want AJ to get hurt.
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: August 10 2012 04:31 am
this is so awesome, i really love the characters and story! !! please update~
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 10 2012 04:21 am
Great update... loving Esther and AJ more and more.
Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 10 2012 03:43 am
Loved the update but she needs to tell him the truth about being married!! Her mother sounds real scary!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: August 10 2012 02:37 am
Wow...fanning myself right now..lol
Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]Date: August 09 2012 07:27 pm
All hell is about to break loose. I wish she would give AJ something so he isn't caught off guard when her mother comes knocking on her door.
Reviewer: Ttee72 Signed [Report This]Date: August 09 2012 06:52 am
I love this story! I am hoping AJ gives her the courage to stand up to her mother who is crazy as hell!
Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2012 06:40 am
Nice...she has some peace now.
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 09 2012 06:35 am
nice update....more please
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: August 09 2012 05:03 am
That was an amazing dream turned reality, lol! Can't get enough of these two.
Reviewer: JustMe Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 09 2012 05:00 am
AJ is good for her, and it is not just about the sex. She need not worry about him beating her or belittling her. I can't wait till she opens up to him. He will protect her from the evil that will eventually come calling.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 09 2012 04:13 am