Great story, it took me on a nice trip I am glad I read it. Thank you for putting pen to paper...in this case fingers to keyboard and giving me the opportunity to read your story. By the way I will read your next story also!Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2013 03:02 pm
Great Story!!!! I read the whole story in about 30 hours because I only stopped reading to cook, use the bathroom and sleep!!! Can't wait to read the next story hopefully you can't keep us updated on Jack and Allie too!!!
THANKS!! wow! you're great. amazing!
i'm glad that i could hold your attention for that long lol
and i'm thinking of doing a little short story on the two of them :)Reviewer: BossLady Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2013 04:41 am
u rock love itReviewer: faye Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 25 2013 01:33 am
well done.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 24 2013 02:44 am
Thank you for a lovely ending. I truly enjoyed the chemistry between this couple as well as the trials that they went through to get o their happy ending.
thank you so much! i love getting reviews from other authors :D not that i don't equally enjoy all of my other reviews lol
it was a rough ride, but now it's over :( so sadReviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2013 02:35 am
Lovely ending. I love stories that have happy endings. Not sure how I feel about Jack's redemption but I do believe that he realizes his mistakes. Shame that it too over 20 years to come to terms with it and actually attempt to do something about it.
I'm curious. Can you tell me who the model is that you used for Jason's picture? He's gorgeous.
Jack is a character that I've been struggling with since I created him. My mind takes control and I just write down whatever I'm thinking. Not everyone deserves a 2nd chance, but like i said...it's weird what love does to a person.
And the model's name is bernardo velasco. found him on tumblr lol he's sooo fine!Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 03:08 pm
It would be great if you can do Jack and Alessandra! Past and present!!! But I loved your story!
Hm...never thought about doing a seperate story for them but now I'm honestly considering it haha
It would be short...but hm. yeah. i'll think about it!
Thank you so much for reading! :DReviewer: Daddyprincess Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 01:44 pm
Wow nice! Thank you for a great read, I loved the twists and turns. I got frustrated sometimes with the couple's decisions but they finally got here. I'm looking forward to your other stories.
thank you thank you thank you! I got frustrated as well and I was the one writing the story lol
i'm looking forward to getting my other ones out there :)Reviewer: Lindy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 09:59 am
fantastic ending, however I would of loved to know what Keyshia kin folks thought about the relationship
you know what? after i published this chapter, i kicked myself because i totally forgot to add what happened to them and auntie kat and some of the other family members.
i'm about to sound sarcastic and i swear i'm not trying to be..
BUT it's totally okay if you make up your own ending for them. As long as it's not happy haha jkReviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 08:21 am
Yayyyyy!!!! I loved it! Beautiful job tying up the loose ends.
thanks! means a lot of because i honestly tried so hard haha turns out i forgot to talk about a few people
you're lovely for sticking through til the end :)Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 06:34 am
I can't wait to read the squeal love the story. Life threw them bumps in the road but they kept each other back. I'm so glad they are married and happy. Thank for the update.
yayayay! i have somebody committed to read lol this is greatReviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 05:20 am
such an epic ending to an epic story, thanks for the ride.
has it reached that status? lol thanks for staying throughout this thing. it got rough and you continued to read. awesome! :)Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 04:31 am
Great udpate!!! I loved this story. I would love a story between Jack and Alessandra, please..
thanks!! we'll see about that. i'm already thinking about how i'm gonna write it lol :)Reviewer: Tina Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 03:43 am
Keep up the good work & update soon..please.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 17 2013 02:44 am
i cant wait on the end ive been following your story for some time now...its soooo goodReviewer: tiffany york Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 14 2013 11:12 pm
My only comment is, I wish this story wasn't about to end so soon! This is a great story from the first sentence to the last! Whatever you write from this point on I will read.
I will be a fan for life!
awwww!! you're a sweetheart! thank you so much
i feel so honored :)) this gives me so much motivation!Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2013 01:15 pm