Reviews For The Better Life
Title: Chapter 1

Talk about crap friends....

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 08 2015 08:16 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Ugh I freaking love this story!!! I'm pretty sure I check the site four times a day looking for updates lol you are awesome!!

Reviewer: Kiki88 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28 2013 06:32 am

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Wow nice! Thank you for a great read, I loved the twists and turns. I got frustrated sometimes with the couple's decisions but they finally got here. I'm looking forward to your other stories.



Author's Response:

thank you thank you thank you! I got frustrated as well and I was the one writing the story lol

i'm looking forward to getting my other ones out there :)

Reviewer: Lindy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 09:59 am

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This story is so unique and unpredictable. I couldn't stop reading please update soon.

I hope he finds his mom anf that his dad find happiness.

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2013 03:45 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I am enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2012 02:19 am

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I can't belive her best friend would set her up. Why would she do that lie to her and dance for some horny old bastards smh. I think she need to pick better friends. I like the story so far.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 03:49 am

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Alicia'a a bitch. How can she do this to her friend?

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 07 2012 12:27 pm

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Ugh! Keisha, WHY DIDN'T YOU BREAK UP WITH ERIC? Honestly, the first time he left her in the cold rain, she should have been gone-or the first time he hit her?  I had no idea that he actually hit or choke her (though I think there was an allusion to it in another chapter)...and she didn't want to break with him unless she was sure about Jason?  IS SHE NUTS? Thank goodness she came to her senses...Jason WORE HER OUT, lol.  Too bad about the fallout. I wonder if Jason's men will stop Eric and Alicia or will he sell the photo before they get a chance?  However, this plays out....it's not going to be pretty.  Jason's father hates Keisha, the media will have a field day...maybe there will be a big fallout and a potential loss of fortune? But Jason has his own money right?  Or...?  I just hope these two are strong enough....I think Jason is strong enough but Keisha...*shakes head.*

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2012 03:50 pm

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i'm ready 4 them 2 get back together.....Eric is a trip, and i don't know why she's with him!

Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2012 11:45 pm

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Jason needs to tell her he loves her as well then tear that ##### up! omg this story got my mind all in the gutter I just love it so much and they have been playing cat and mouse for too damn long its time man! For the love to flow again I need to see some happiness not temporary but permanently! Please and thank you :)

Reviewer: UnderRestrains Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 01 2012 05:09 am

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who is that guy in the banner that's supoose 2 depict jason?

Reviewer: anna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 01 2012 03:57 am

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Great update, can't wait 2 C what happens next!

Reviewer: Skip2641 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2012 08:32 pm

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I agree with Shelly Keyshia is really confused.  Pick what you want girl and go for it.  It's like you are taking wha is available when it is available.  DO BETTER!  As for Jason GROW SOME BALLS!!!!  Awesome writing hope the next chapter is up soon. 

Reviewer: Carmel Beauty Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2012 11:55 pm

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I am loving this couple. I can't wait for an update.

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 24 2012 12:24 am

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I don't understand this in the least little bit. First they are dating then she breaks up with him so she can take a job working for him. Which says to me she didn't think much of the relationship in the first place. Then she makes out with his cousin, REALLY!  I get that she can date but fooling with his family is just a No! No! Not to mention she doesn't seem to realize that she even in the wrong. I think I like the idea of Jason dating because Keyshia needs a reality check.  I see why she, Lauren, and Alicia are friends she is truly on their level and that is not a good thing.

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 02:05 am

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Alicia and I would not be friends after this stunt she pulled.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2012 11:43 pm

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I love this story - I think Jason is awesome but Keyshia needs to grow up! Keep it coming, this is great.

Reviewer: katie Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 06:31 pm

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I cannot stop reading this, I am obssesd!

Reviewer: Lala Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 10:54 am

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Great start!

Reviewer: Leoslove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2012 08:08 pm

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Another good chapter. I wonder what he was doing that took so long.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 14 2012 10:08 am

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I've liked this story since you first posted. Alicia showed her true colors from the time that she f#cked the bouncer to get into the club so her antics should come as no surprise and Lauran seems like a follower. So the questions is why is Keyshia friends with either of them? I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2012 11:17 pm

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I loved the chapter can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 06 2012 09:53 am

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I like, but I liked it the first time you posted it. I figure Jason was the person at the end of the story that needs to be cleared up because a person could get confused about that. Alicia is dirty and needs her @$ kicked for what she did.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Jason's the person at the end. I apologize for the confusion.

Thanks for the review! lol smh at alicia

Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19 2012 10:53 pm

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Good start to the story.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2012 02:20 pm

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Great start update soon! Can't wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: vmck Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 19 2012 01:35 pm



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