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Title: Chapter 4

I hope Keyshia give him a chance. He seem like amazing guy that really wants to be there for her and take care of her. I'm glad she told that faked friend off. I hope those two meet again. Thanks for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 04:20 am
Title: Chapter 4

Wow, to be wanted by a man like that would be heavenly! You Go Keyshia! I hopes she does the right thing, before she does the wrong thing like listen to one of her so-called friends and end up in another VIP Night club, but this time with a not so nice clientel!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 02 2012 07:41 am
Title: Chapter 4

He sounds perfect, use that number girl!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 12:45 am
Title: Chapter 4

Love it! You got skills!

 Reviewer: Leoslove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2012 09:01 pm
Title: Chapter 4

I really like your story! How sweet and sexy is Jason!!

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 07 2012 05:08 am
Title: Chapter 4

Thanks for a great update.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2012 02:34 am
Title: Chapter 4

awww that was sweet of him. I hope she calls him and at least go have coffee or something and get to know him.

 Reviewer: Bella Rosa Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2012 12:32 am
Title: Chapter 4

I like it. Keyshia is stubborn but I like Jason. Please open her eyes up and see a good man. Please update soon. Not liking Alicia much. 

 Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2012 02:09 pm
Title: Chapter 4

I Like:) He is so sweet and Keyshia is so hard,but I find them very interesting as a couple and can't wait for more!

 Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2012 11:49 am
Title: Chapter 4

I love love love this chapter. He was trying to be so sweet and i understood her by acting how she did. Her friends did her wrong that is so crazy. I loved that he gave her money to help her. I want her to call. Please update soon i.love it

 Reviewer: primesgurl4 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2012 07:26 am
Title: Chapter 4

I am so glad that Keysia went off on  Alicia, because she did was wrong on so many levels.  Give Jason a chance, that boy is fine!!!  He gave you good loving, Jason is a keeper!  More please!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2012 06:40 am
Title: Chapter 4

I wasn't feeling the first chapter...and I truly hope that she drops her *friends* but I have to admit I'm beginning to like this story...a lot...love the fact that he's Brazilian. He's such a caring guy.  I wonder what drew him to Keyshia...and why he cares so much already.

 Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2012 06:32 am


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