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Title: Chapter 5

Well Jason father is a jerk big time and glad that mean woman was fired. Now she staying at his place what next wedding bells? Thank for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 04:31 am
Title: Chapter 5

When will the stupid racism end? I am glad blondie bitch got fired. And what is up with dear old dad and his problem with black women? Or women of color period......A racist statement if I ever heard one...keep the white race 100% white? 

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 02 2012 08:03 am
Title: Chapter 5

Not good to leave her hanging like that. I would be suspicious if I were her, he could have at least called her.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 04:20 am
Title: Chapter 5

Great job!!!! =)

 Reviewer: Leoslove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2012 09:25 pm
Title: Chapter 5

Loving it...hope they get solve their differences.

 Reviewer: Bella Rosa Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2012 05:59 am
Title: Chapter 5

Great update! Jason seems to be the perfect guy but I can see his father is going to be a major problem already.

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2012 11:59 pm
Title: Chapter 5

What is taking him so long? What is Jason doing?  I am sure that Keyshia is going to be a bit miffed when he does get in.

 Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2012 05:36 pm
Title: Chapter 5

That receptionist was beyond rude.  Glad that she got fired.  I am surprised that having a biracial son was ok for the grandfather but not having the Brazillian mother be part of her child's life was a no no. To bad his father wants him to follow in his foot steps and drop the black lover.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2012 12:25 pm
Title: Chapter 5

Need more...Jason is soooo sweet!!!!

 Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2012 11:17 am
Title: Chapter 5

OMG I love your story! Don't take too long to update (:

 Reviewer: MeganRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2012 10:35 am
Title: Chapter 5

Cute chapter. Jason wastes no time....I must admit that I didn't expect him to want an exclusive relationship so soon but then again he was already feeling something the morning after.  Hmm...falls quickly just like his father huh?

 Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 13 2012 07:31 am
Title: Chapter 5

Love this story so far.. Jason and Keyshia have amazing chemistry.. I look forward to seeing how thier relationship blossoms.

 Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 13 2012 05:54 am
Title: Chapter 5

Jason's father is a piece of work.  Jason has money of his own so he's not letting what his father said phase him.  This was crackalackin'!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2012 04:41 am


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