Reviews For The Better Life
Title: Chapter 6

How cute are they taking a bath eating pizza making out they fit so well together. His dad been married 7 times wow smh. I wonder what going to happen next with this couple? thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 04:43 am

Title: Chapter 6

Damn, there is nothing like a drunk rich white woman, making a pass at the person least interestedin them....the step son! I hope Jason has enoug time to explain and Keyshia has enough patience to allow him the needed time to open up to her about his like.

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 02 2012 08:27 am

Title: Chapter 6

Nice update. In time Keyshia, he will share with you or just keep watching tv and someone in his family will be on it.lol

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 04:34 am

Title: Chapter 6

Good chapter!

Reviewer: Leoslove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2012 09:53 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I'm liking this slow build between Keyshia and Jason, and I likethat they can just be free with one another.

I do have a feeling that Jason's mother is not actually dead, maybe its something his father told the press to explain her absence.

As for Livy, I have a feeling we may not have seen the last of her.

Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 17 2012 02:29 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Keysia you need to slow your role, get to know the man and then he will let you in on some of his secrets.  They ho Olivia is crazy, just going to show up at he boys house and the throw yourself at him.  Olivia is the worst type of ho she's a broke down one.  For shame Holivia!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 16 2012 10:18 pm

Title: Chapter 6

James is a sweet heart,but I feel trouble a coming...

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16 2012 10:17 pm

Title: Chapter 6

They are really cute together. I'm glad Jason fired that ignorant receptionist.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 16 2012 07:10 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Your story is getting very interesting please continue, i love drama and a strong female chacter in a story

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 16 2012 03:20 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Good update.  I hope that Keyshia will be patience as  he is requesting.  As for his father what a jerk to send your child to do your dirty work for you.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 16 2012 03:04 pm

Title: Chapter 6

moremoremoremoremore! :')

Reviewer: emy Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 16 2012 07:40 am

Title: Chapter 6

Keyshia should slow it down some. Before she was opposed to the idea of getting with him, now she's all salty because she thinks he doesn't fully trust her! She's not fully disclosing all her business so what's the problem? She needs to make up her mind.

 

Nice!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 16 2012 06:45 am

Title: Chapter 6

Keyshia wants him to trust her already...then again he wanted exclusivity after one night of passion. It seems that they are comfortable with each other but I can understand why he is holding back a bit. I mean they still don't *know* each other...and Keyshia's friends (hopefully ex-friends) are shady.  I liked this chapter; don't think it was dull at all.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 16 2012 05:49 am



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