Reviews For The Better Life
Title: Chapter 7

Well keyshia is a nicer person then me because I wouldn't let that fake person living with me.  I hope Jason let Keyshia meet his aunt and his uncle the seem like really nice people. Thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 04:54 am

Title: Chapter 7

Keyshia needs to dum her so-called friends. They are  hanger ons.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 07 2012 04:13 pm

Title: Chapter 7

I don't trust Alicia, she is not a true friend.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 06:23 am

Title: Chapter 7

Thanks for a great update.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2012 03:10 am

Title: Chapter 7

That Alicia thang... *smh*

Reviewer: Leoslove Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2012 12:01 am

Title: Chapter 7

i gotta say i didnt want read this tory cuz i thought it was gonna suck but today i was like HEY! give it a try.And its GREAT I really like and its not what I though it was gonna be about .Also I really like Jason I mean his kinda weird seeing how he wants to get to know somebody he has no clue about but I like thst fact he created the no sex rule shows he has more to offer and at some point wants to share things with the girl i kinda forgot her name. And way keep writing adn cant wait for the next upload.



Author's Response:

lol thank you for your honesty :)
i really appreciate it! 

Reviewer: esther Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 23 2012 03:57 am

Title: Chapter 7

I still don't like Alisha and as much as I feel sorry for Lauran's circumstances, I don't quite trust her either. She's been up under Alisha too long. Otherwise, Keyshia needs to keep doing what she's doing--keeping the details of her relationship private.  Still loving this story.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2012 01:38 am

Title: Chapter 7

I really don't like Alicia but Lauran is alright. So cute that Jason called Keyshia for a pep talk.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 22 2012 04:35 am

Title: Chapter 7

I am glad Keysha talked Lauren into standing up for herself because Alicia was being a b*tch and nose as hell.

Reviewer: dimples Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 21 2012 11:48 pm

Title: Chapter 7

I'm loving the slow build up of their emotional relationship. You're becoming one of my favourite writers, definitely one of the best on this site. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. I hope you'll be able to post another installment. Thank you for enligten my life. Love from Spain



Author's Response:

AW THANK YOU!! wow lol i don't even know what to say... O:

Reviewer: Bel Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2012 11:21 am

Title: Chapter 7

Thanks for the update... Jason and Keyshia are just too cute, and I love their banter.

And Keyshia needs to DROP Alicia, that girl is no ones FRIEND, she is a jealous bitter chick, and both Keyshia and Lauren need to CUT her off like a HANGNAIL.

Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 21 2012 06:49 am

Title: Chapter 7

Ughh...what is that skank Alicia's problem anyway? Keyshia needs to drop that loser. Nice!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2012 05:35 am

Title: Chapter 7

I love the story please update sooon

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2012 04:41 am

Title: Chapter 7

I really hate Alicia, she makes my teeth itch.  I would have told her ass that I did like Lauren better, Alicia is untrustworthy.  There toxic people in your life that you need to get rid of, and Alicia is one of those people!!  Great update!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2012 01:52 am



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