Reviews For The Better Life
Title: Chapter 9

Well I hope she doesn't anyone about Jason and Keesh. Something tells me one them going to break and give in and let the rules fly out the window. I can't wait to see what happen next. Lol it was funny they way she slap him lol. Thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 05:24 am

Title: Chapter 9

Hope Lauran keeps this to herself for now, if Alicia finds out, the whole world will know. This seems like it will be a problem, working for him if they cannot have a relationship. What will happen when one or the other of them, has someone else who is interested in them. I don't see this working out well at all.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2012 05:17 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Ha ,I don't think Keekees' gonna like this side of James and how they're relationship is going to change... She asked for this though,lol

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 11:31 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Lawd, Lauren has a big ass mouth....Jason better find a way to get her to keep her damned mouth shut. I really hate Keyshia's friend, but I think it's cuz they're real. They're those girls from the neighborhood that you've been friends with for forever. I can already tell than Alicia is a hater, so hopefully she'll be the last one in the world to find out about this.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2012 07:42 am

Title: Chapter 9

Loved it;) I don't want their relationship to end, please let them continue to be together;)

Reviewer: xiaomei21 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2012 07:42 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Leoslove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2012 05:06 am

Title: Chapter 9

Ya know, I'm kinda insulted for Keyshia that her so called "friends" think that Jason is out of her league. Even Lauren. What exactly do they think is so wrong with her?

And I'm kinda with Keyshia on not working with the boyfriend scenario. However, I do see why Jason would want someone he could trust to do that for him.

I hate Alicia!!

Good stuff!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2012 02:36 am

Title: Chapter 9

I think Keyshia is going to regret being Jason's assistant. He offered to take care of her which was sweet and very hot! Really like this chapter!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 05 2012 01:08 am

Title: Chapter 9

Enjoying the story. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 05 2012 12:46 am

Title: Chapter 9

I understand that Keyshia needs a job and money but why is she so quick to pass up a relationship with Jason who is more than likely going to be the best thing she's ever had? I just didn't see that one coming but I know that the chemistry that they have and the sparks that they generate will make for fantastic reading. Alicia...meh...same whore, no new tricks. Keep up the good work FM! I really look forward to your updates.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2012 07:29 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Loving this story so far!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2012 05:32 am

Title: Chapter 9

This working relationship should prove to be interesting since they are both feeling each other rather deeply.  Jason won't be able to keep his off of the Keysia and she won't be able to keep her hands off Jason.  This is going to funny.  I don't trust that ho Alicia, why is she friends with her? 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2012 03:41 am



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