Reviews For The Better Life
Title: Chapter 10

Oooooo something tells me the games Ms. K is playing may back fire on her lol. Poor Carter is going to die so young messing with his cousin woman lol. Dad is the king of ass hole thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 05:42 am

Title: Chapter 10

She may be playing a dangerous game. Don't give daddy dearest any ammuntion to work with concerning her. Jason needs to calm down as well, he is not acting any better, pushing her aorund like that.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2012 09:35 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Really interested in seeing where this story goes.

Reviewer: Shereads48 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 18 2012 04:07 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Correction, why Keyshia and Alicia are such good friends.

Reviewer: AP Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2012 05:58 am

Title: Chapter 10

I don't feel sorry for Keyshia. What did she expect from Jason? She made the decision not to continue their relationship and to strictly work for him but now she's complaining b/c he's not on her ass anymore? And now she's going to mess around and cause dissension between family members? And that's the least that could happen. She's starting to show why her and Brandi are such good friends--immaturity.

Reviewer: AP Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2012 05:54 am

Title: Chapter 10

There is something about his cousin I don't trust. Dad is a prick.

Reviewer: Dimples Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 11:02 pm

Title: Chapter 10

I think she's playing with fire. They ended on such stupid terms, her terms mind you, now she's upset that he's given her just what he warned her he would? She's being completely unreasonable.

 

Great update!! Jason is awesmoe, his mom must be an angel because his Dad is just too evil.

Reviewer: JB Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 07:41 am

Title: Chapter 10

Loved the update but she needs to be careful how she treats Jason by trying to use Carter to make him jealous. This may not have a good ending for her.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 07:06 am

Title: Chapter 10

Keyshia needs to stop and think about what she's doing here.

Jason has an interesting family.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 07:03 am

Title: Chapter 10

It ain't cool to play for with peoples feeling, Jason is jealous and he will lose his mind if he finds you with his cousin.   Don't be stupid Keysiha!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 06:54 am

Title: Chapter 10

Keyshia shouldn't play with fire. I don't have a good feeling about that Carter McIntyre.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 04:50 am

Title: Chapter 10

I can't believe that Jason is ok with her just being his assistant.  Did he think that he could keep her so busy that she wouldn't have time for anyone else.  He hasn't been doing anything to keep the home fires burning so why is he upset about carter.

Carter might be more mature that Jason gives him credit for and a real run for his money with Keyisha.  So thumbs up for him.

BTW, wow is Dad an ass.

Reviewer: crocuslady Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 03:14 am

Title: Chapter 10

Woah, I hope messing with Jason's feelings doesn't back fire on her. Nice chaper!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 02:41 am

Title: Chapter 10

Love it! I love the direction you are going! I want Jason and Keyshia to get back together and Jason to kick his dad's butt! Please update soon!

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 02:20 am



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