Reviews For The Better Life
Title: Chapter 11

Well jason not in jail witch is good thing lol. These two need to shut up kiss make up and just be togehter that is all. I love his aunt she cool people Thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 05:48 am

Title: Chapter 11

Why kiss the cousin, after knowing exactly what he wanted from her. I'm so confused, with bothof them now and they still want to be boss and employee.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2012 09:45 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Those two are sorta ridiculous. Jason and Keisha want to be together so stop fighting the attraction and go for it.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 08:58 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Awww I can't wait for the next long chapter!

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2012 09:43 am

Title: Chapter 11

I want them back together. I was defitely supised by this turn of events. I will be staying uned.

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 24 2012 04:51 am

Title: Chapter 11

more soon more love it

Reviewer: faye Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2012 03:37 am

Title: Chapter 11

Alright, I'm loving Keyshia's personality more and more. love how she turned down Jason's cousin. She has fire!!

Reviewer: Dances_With_Pen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 05:47 am

Title: Chapter 11

I don't see why Keyshia doesn't think she can have a relationship with Jason and be his PA as well? Does she not think they are mature enough to handle it?

Good stuff!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 07:41 am

Title: Chapter 11

yeaaa jasons back love him. I think jason not acting crazy/not sayng i love u is going to the hardest job ever

Reviewer: esther Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 06:34 am

Title: Chapter 11

great update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 05:53 am

Title: Chapter 11

Keyshia is starting to frustrate me. She intentionally flirted with Carter and then tried to play the "I didn't know that he still had feelings for me" card. Why wouldn't he when you still have feelings for him? Her kissing Carter was a dumb*ss move as well. And Jason should have just been honest with her instead of throwing her against the wall and insulting her.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 01:59 am

Title: Chapter 11

Thank you for the update but I want them to be together! Please have them come together and do not have him with someone else. Please!

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 12:35 am

Title: Chapter 11

Not sure how I feel about this chapter. It was a good read but Jason really needs to calm down. If he's in love and is finding it hard to work with her, then he should have never agreed to the "no dating." Oh...Keyshia *shakes head*...she should have never played with fire. She practically laughs in dude's face, tell him he's not her type but then kisses him? I knew he was going to try to go in for the kill. Maybe they should date other people...the maybe they would realize that they should be together and forget that stupid rule but she shouldn't try to start something with his cousin. James was ready to go crazy on that dude-Carter will back off now for sure. Keyshia quits and takes it back...lol. Maybe quitting wasn't such a bad idea...the way he talks to her because he can't be with her due to some rule? Nah, son. Still like these two though...

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 20 2012 11:32 pm



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