Thanks for fixing the margins :).
I was hoping to read how Mary's hubby responded to the makeover LOL.
[Report This]Date: January 03 2013 03:50 pm
Please adjust the margins on chapter 12. The left part is cut off and cant be read on the phone.
Author's Response:
gotcha! i'll do that right away :)
Reviewer: 100%Fan Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 03 2013 02:03 pm
Wow I thought them men in the family were jerks but they have nothing on these ladies. She should listen to his aunt Jason is in love with her and hope they get back together. Thank for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: December 09 2012 06:04 am
Ms. Katherine is great, Ms. Mary is a trip, but honest. I am glad Keyshia was able to pull her out of those dull ass clothes she had been wearing all those years and helped her get her hair styled differently. Too bad she had to tell her the unadulterated truth about jason's family. But I like her honesty. Anna, I just wanted to slap the shit out of her but changed my mind because she is what she is a 13 year old brat....but I believe in time she and Keyshia will become great friends. Too bad jason is stuck in that crazy ass family....and the truth be known Jason should not be the heir to the throne, because he is not 100% white, his momma is brazilian. So in all actuality Carter should be the heir. But Jack the Ass will not let that happen! Good story keep up the good work I am putting this on my tracking list!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: September 02 2012 06:01 pm
Wow, what a complicated relationship!! Looks like Jack has everyone under his thumb and making all miserable. He needs a reality check! Hope Jason and Keyshia can make it work.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: August 30 2012 02:21 am
Keyshia is missing out on a strong, loving, and sexy man because she doesn't want to date her boss. That man wants to take care of you. Get a different job and keep Jason as your man. Keyshia has too much pride and it's getting in the way! I like Aunt Kat and Anna is a typical teenage girl, nosy!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed
[Report This]Date: August 28 2012 04:27 am
Sometimes I wonder if Keyshia is bipolar! She breaks off the relationship because she doesn't want to complcate things by working for a man -her boyfriend - that she's alrrady sleeping with, yet she has no problem in asking him to help undress her for bed??? What does she want? But before that she gets weird because as she woke up from a nap laying on top of him. Really, Keyshia? And why would she blush because Carter looked at her weird? Grow up girl!
Good stuff!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2012 06:03 am
I'm so excited!!! I want Aunt Kat , Mary and Anna to defend her to the rest of the family. I think they should go back to NY after the get together is over and start to hang out together more. Then some drama needs to happen. A deranged fan needs to come into play or something. The result of such a scare only draws Keyshia and Jake closer together eventually getting back together. Keyshia should be reluctant throughout this process though. Maybe we can have her go on some dates and have some fun watching Jake stalk them or something? Anywho I'm excited to see what happens next.
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2012 01:35 am
If Jason even touches another woman besides Keyshia, well hell won't be the only place people will fear.
LOL, kidding...kinda.
But seriously, I just want them together again.
And it needs more sizzling romance.
And some more Carter, because I like seeing Jason jealous :D
Reviewer: Emy Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 27 2012 01:26 am
Wonderful update. Maybe Aunt Mary will be a little nicer from now on, I doubt. Anna being young will warm up to her much better. It's time for them to say forgoet about it and take their chances with a relationship. He should have made and saved up more than enough money to still be filthy rich, and find his mom in the process.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2012 10:17 pm
BABY I'M YOUR BOSS!...Ooh Kinky ;P
Reviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2012 08:59 pm
I would love for the truth of his feelings to come out. Also if she is getting threats Jason needs to come clean. Also she needs to talk about the things Mary said and I really want them to get together and make it work. This is a great story!
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2012 06:26 pm
I am confused becasue I thought that Jason had money that was not connected to his racist father? What I want to happen is for Jason and Keyshia admit how they feel about each and tell his sperm donor where he can stick in an united front. I so love this story, I hope that the next update is not far off into the future.
It was so long, I wanted to thank you for that. However, the first part of the text in every sentence was cut off. It's been that way for almost all of the chapters.
Author's Response:
hey pmgayles,
maybe i'm being a little slow (sorry lol) but i've noticed that i make a few mistakes, so for the past few chapters, i read over it at least 2 times and it's always written exactly how i want it to be written. idk what's wrong "/
thanks for the review though. i ALWAYS look forward to what you have to say :)
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2012 05:27 pm
I'm ready for them to step out and stop fighting the feeling. Screw his family.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2012 03:51 pm