Reviews For The Better Life
Title: Chapter 13

It something about Eric i just don't like. He seem to be shady like his sister and jason so called girlfriend. I wish these two stop playing games and be together lol. Thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 05:27 am

Title: Chapter 13

Is Keyshia serious! Why is she moping like she wasn't the one who broke up with him.  How exactly was Jason supposed to fall in love with her when she wasn't even really comfortable dating him...then she kisses his cousin.  I am confused royally by her.  She's doesn't want to date him yet she's upset when he dates someone else.  Really! The girl needs to get a grip.

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2012 12:31 am

Title: Chapter 13

jason is rather weak..during the first few chapters he was this amazing guy but now he is becoming more like his father..its almost as if he is ashamed of having known keisha..its kind of understandable y keisha would feel insecure about jasons family coz they are obviously racist..jasons turning out to be a puppet of his family's wishes i thought he would at least try to fight for her....its good that keisha decided to date eric that should teach jason a lesson....

Reviewer: shehara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2012 09:44 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Again I am not happy with the way this is going. I understand this is a story but I really like Jason and Keyshia together so please tell me I will be some pull itch them. I want Jason to go for it itch Keyshia. This is really bothering me. 



Author's Response:

sorry sharise for the disappointment :(

bright times are on the horizon. i promise!

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2012 12:29 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Wow, things have really gone in a tailspin. Wonder if Keyshia and Jason will find their way back to each other?

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2012 08:24 am

Title: Chapter 13

These two need to stop playing because this is just ridiculous! 

And I ask again....is Keyshia bipolar?! What is her problem with Jason, really? Because I really she's the one with it.



Author's Response:

i think everyone's just a little confused. she doesn't have a problem with him. she's just really hesistant about being with him because she's afraid of what people might think, also she doesn't want anything having to do with being famous. 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2012 04:45 am

Title: Chapter 13

great post can't wait for the next update!!!!

Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 04 2012 03:43 am

Title: Chapter 13

Oh man! Nooooo! Jason and Keyshia must be together! :(

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 04 2012 03:42 am

Title: Chapter 13

They both need to grow up, stop all this silliness. They both want to be together, yet neither will mke the move back to the other. I guess misery loves company!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2012 03:36 am

Title: Chapter 13

Like the update but not happy the direction this is going. I ant them together! P,ease make something happen!

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2012 03:25 am

Title: Chapter 13

I seriously think they're being silly. Like I missed something. Maybe it goes deeper than boss/employee and she doesn't feel good enough? But he made his feelings clear...I just think I need more from her, like an explanation for what really happened. I just can't understand...

 

Great update I love Jason even though he's being childish too.

Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2012 02:57 am

Title: Chapter 13

I am on pins and needles waiting for these to get back on the right track.

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2012 02:25 am

Title: Chapter 13

Those two are so stupid, Jason is in love with Keysia but dating that ho.  Keysia is about to start seeing that fine man Eric but she's going to hurt him becuae she can't love him back.  When are those two going to wake up and smell the cafe latte?  Great update. More please!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2012 02:12 am



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