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Title: Chapter 16

I think Jason will finaly tell her that he in love with her too. The looks the touches the everything. These two are soul mates and belong together. Thank for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 06:32 am
Title: Chapter 16

Please, please, please update soon. Just read this entire story today & I can't get enough. I love both of these characters. I got a little worried when you brought Eric into the picture. I need these two to be together. I need my own Jason Jameson. Love your writing. Please keep the story going.

 Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 09 2012 11:45 pm
Title: Chapter 16

Please let him say,"I love you," back... I don't miss her friends, but I know more drama is around the corner.

 Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2012 03:18 am
Title: Chapter 16

Yay for the update! Absolutely loved this chapter! It was amazing, i'm so glad they're getting closer!! 

 Reviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2012 09:25 pm
Title: Chapter 16

About time! Jeez... these two were driving me insane with this constant back and forth! I'm happy it's out there now, Jason needs to confess his feelings for her too and Alyssa and Eric need to be out of the picture. Especially Eric, I never liked him and really hated the fact that she started something with him in the first place, plus he kinda seems like someone who wouldn't have a problem putting his grimy hands on a woman. Anyway, great job as always and looking forward to the next update :)

 Reviewer: Terri Day Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2012 06:50 pm
Title: Chapter 16

I think it's time he reveals himself back and her friends can come in as they try to figure out their relationship ..... Great chapter I just wished they would fight...I.e. Jason and Eric 

 Reviewer: Tiffany York Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 01 2012 05:31 pm
Title: Chapter 16

Great update and glad that someone shared their feelings! Now can they be together and what is up with Eric. Please bring that out!

 Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2012 02:02 pm
Title: Chapter 16

now they are getting somewhere...loved it. Thank you...

 Reviewer: Lindy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 01 2012 01:42 pm
Title: Chapter 16

let jason and keyshia work on there relatioship. and let keyshia get rid of eric . maybe she can find out that he is sleeping with one of the friends. hope that jason would be glad someone loves him for him.

 Reviewer: lady tee Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2012 12:48 pm
Title: Chapter 16

oo snap what jason gonna do NOW!! lol

 Reviewer: esther Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 01 2012 10:27 am
Title: Chapter 16

bring her friends back. they need to bash eric. of course hes going to be like i love you too! hopefully they can move past this media thing and just be together! maybe theyll be together for a bit then the parents will interfere?

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 01 2012 08:28 am
Title: Chapter 16

Much better...some progression finally

 Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2012 08:05 am
Title: Chapter 16

I think he should be gracious and say, Thank You and then he should say Keisha, I Love You Too! For once he doesn't need to be arrogant about being right. That will make her run away or clam up!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 01 2012 06:55 am
Title: Chapter 16

Bring the friends back I miss them too. I didn't care which one said it first as long as one of them did. Eric seems to be a little bit violent.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 01 2012 06:17 am
Title: Chapter 16

He should tell it back to her! I'm tired of these two acting like dummies dancing around each other already! She's going to have that wife-beater waiting to happen named Eric to deal with and Jason is going to have to deal with that psycho Alyssa! Geez, they know how to pick them!

Good!!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 01 2012 06:06 am
Title: Chapter 16

great update...please update soon

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 01 2012 05:10 am
Title: Chapter 16

Jason should tell her that he loves her too since she bared her heart and soul to him.  May I just add that Eric makes my teeth itch and that Jason should stomp him into the ground.  I really want Keyshis to break up with that fool, he doesn't deserve her.  Beat Eric down Jason, beat 'em like he stole your dollar.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 01 2012 04:30 am


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