Reviews For The Better Life
Title: Chapter 18

Oh no they finaly get rid of eric and his nut case sister now grand ma coming in pic. So he Jasnon want to marry Keyshia. I can't wait to see when he ask her that  big question. Thank for the update. I'm glad I read this story.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 07:00 am

Title: Chapter 18

Wow now after the fact that you basically disowned the girl because of her skin color you wanna get on her good side. Can't wait to see what happens!!!

Reviewer: Alixermixer Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 08:59 am

Title: Chapter 18

OHMYLANTA! This story never ceases to amaze and hold my attention.

Ugh, this is so good. People are so trashy! I can't believe her grandmother would try and pull the same stunt Alicia tried. 

And-- oh, no: Is the grandmother gonna try and set Jasmine and Jason Jameson up? He loves Keyshia!

update soon! please!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 08:17 am

Title: Chapter 18

 


 

Reviewer: Tiffany y. Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 08 2012 07:41 am

Title: Chapter 18

Great update. Look forward to the engagement and how he does it. 

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2012 12:37 am

Title: Chapter 18

:)

Reviewer: Avapriceless1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2012 08:53 pm

Title: Chapter 18

love it more soon

Reviewer: faye Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2012 06:04 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Alicia getting knocked out was way overdue and I'm glad it finally happened. I was missing this story so thanks for the update. I guess the grandmother wants to get her feelings hurt now. 

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2012 11:49 am

Title: Chapter 18

Heck yeah i enjoyed it!!! I can't wait for the next chapter! Aww i want them to get married!

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2012 08:00 am

Title: Chapter 18

Time for a family reunion? Hardly!Keep stepping grandma!

Alicia is vile and I'm glad she got knocked the hell out...lol!

Nice!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2012 07:45 am

Title: Chapter 18

I am sensing that Bernice is evil and I hope that Jason can stop her from hurting Keyshia.  I am so glad that she knocked the hell out of Alicia, that was wonderful.  I will have to read that again!!!

Fabulous!!!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2012 07:03 am



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