omg dying to read the next chapter.plzzz dnt end the story so soon there is so much more potential to this story....dnt rush into a quick ending and ruin this awesome story......dying to see jasons reaction.......wil keisha say yes....what will they do about the pregnancy...will the new york people get to know about it...and hw will they react...will there be more drama with jasons family and will everything become public....will jasons dad ever meet his mom.....wil keishaa move to braazil permanently..,...dying to knoww....love ur sstory updaate soon!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: lizzie Anonymous
[Report This]Date: February 16 2013 12:07 pm
I just caught up with this story and its fabulous.
Reviewer: juno Signed
[Report This]Date: February 15 2013 07:51 pm
Ending already? But this is only chapter 4 right? No? But seriously.....I have loved this story from the first paragraph to the last period. You gave Keisha the strenght she needed and Jason the balls to walk away from his overbearing father and that ridiculous family tradition. Thank you for such a wonderful story!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: February 14 2013 06:51 am
Ending already? But this is only chapter 4 right? No? But seriously.....I have loved this story from the first paragraph to the last period. You gave Keisha the strenght she needed and Jason the balls to walk away from his overbearing father and that ridiculous family tradition. Thank you for such a wonderful story!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: February 14 2013 06:50 am
No, suggestions, just keep writing your vision, and I'll keep reading...
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: February 13 2013 04:26 pm
Great update
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2013 07:14 am
love it!
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2013 06:45 am
Loved the chapter.I'm glad his mom turned out to be so sweet.
Well this is good; she's preggers and he asked her to marry him before she told him. Thats makes all the difference, I think.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2013 04:16 am
LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is a great update.
Reviewer: HumorMe Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2013 03:51 am
Love the story!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 12 2013 03:03 am
This chapter actually made me tear, between Key finding out she's pregnant to Jay finally meeting his mom, than to the wedding proposal and than finally telling him that he's going to be a DADDY!!! I'm so excited about the next chapter...10
Author's Response:
AWWW! Thank you so much
This really means a lot to me :))
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2013 12:50 am
First of all great upate that was well worth the wait. As for what should happen is that they should get married. They have always workde things out and this situation with Keyshia being pregnant is not too different. I know Jason is a better man thaen his father will ever be and will no doubt be a loving father. They will both get what they always wanted a family that will love one another not matter what life throws their way.
Author's Response:
I'm looking forward to posting the next chapter and I will definitely refer back to your suggestion! They're strong individually, but even stronger together :)
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2013 12:48 am
Wow! Love this update. Please do not take so long to update.
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: February 11 2013 11:37 pm
Woooooooow!! Is all i can say.... That was just... Woooooow!! .... Nuff said... Update soonest please
Reviewer: Hawtgurl Signed [Report This]Date: February 11 2013 10:11 pm
Jason asked her to marry him so I don't think your being pregnant will be a problem. He obliously loves you and you love him Keyshia so don't be stupid!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 11 2013 09:38 pm
Great update. I love these two together.
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]Date: February 11 2013 07:12 pm
I hope he's happy about the pregnancy. I hate this story is coming to an end. I've really enjoyed it.
Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]Date: February 11 2013 04:58 pm
Hi just want to say enjoy the update second I don't know if you look but you some your words in this chapter are getting cut off so thought you should know. Now I'm so glad that Jason finaly saw his mother he seems very happy and i think dad is still in love with Jason mom too. Now their going to have a baby wow. I wonder what Jason reaction going to be? thank for the update.
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks for the review!! I tried changing the margins so many times and I just changed them after you wrote this. I hope it looks right now :(
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: February 11 2013 03:32 pm