She may be playing a dangerous game. Don't give daddy dearest any ammuntion to work with concerning her. Jason needs to calm down as well, he is not acting any better, pushing her aorund like that.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: August 26 2012 09:35 pm
BABY I'M YOUR BOSS!...Ooh Kinky ;P
Reviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2012 08:59 pm
I would love for the truth of his feelings to come out. Also if she is getting threats Jason needs to come clean. Also she needs to talk about the things Mary said and I really want them to get together and make it work. This is a great story!
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2012 06:26 pm
I am confused becasue I thought that Jason had money that was not connected to his racist father? What I want to happen is for Jason and Keyshia admit how they feel about each and tell his sperm donor where he can stick in an united front. I so love this story, I hope that the next update is not far off into the future.
It was so long, I wanted to thank you for that. However, the first part of the text in every sentence was cut off. It's been that way for almost all of the chapters.
Author's Response:
hey pmgayles,
maybe i'm being a little slow (sorry lol) but i've noticed that i make a few mistakes, so for the past few chapters, i read over it at least 2 times and it's always written exactly how i want it to be written. idk what's wrong "/
thanks for the review though. i ALWAYS look forward to what you have to say :)
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2012 05:27 pm
Hope Lauran keeps this to herself for now, if Alicia finds out, the whole world will know. This seems like it will be a problem, working for him if they cannot have a relationship. What will happen when one or the other of them, has someone else who is interested in them. I don't see this working out well at all.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2012 05:17 pm
I'm ready for them to step out and stop fighting the feeling. Screw his family.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2012 03:51 pm
Those two are sorta ridiculous. Jason and Keisha want to be together so stop fighting the attraction and go for it.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: August 25 2012 08:58 pm
Awww I can't wait for the next long chapter!
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: August 24 2012 09:43 am
I'm in love with this story! I wish she told her we need someone else to talk to about jason when shes upset.
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: August 24 2012 08:47 am
I want them back together. I was defitely supised by this turn of events. I will be staying uned.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed
[Report This]Date: August 24 2012 04:51 am
I'll check out your other projects but I really love this couple.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: August 24 2012 04:15 am
I am loving this couple. I can't wait for an update.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: August 24 2012 12:24 am
more soon more love it
Reviewer: faye Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 23 2012 03:37 am
Alright, I'm loving Keyshia's personality more and more. love how she turned down Jason's cousin. She has fire!!
Reviewer: Dances_With_Pen Signed [Report This]Date: August 22 2012 05:47 am
I don't see why Keyshia doesn't think she can have a relationship with Jason and be his PA as well? Does she not think they are mature enough to handle it?
Good stuff!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: August 21 2012 07:41 am
She does not work, so how can she explain getting that expensive ride?
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: August 21 2012 06:49 am
yeaaa jasons back love him. I think jason not acting crazy/not sayng i love u is going to the hardest job ever
Reviewer: esther Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 21 2012 06:34 am
I don't trust Alicia, she is not a true friend.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: August 21 2012 06:23 am
great update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: August 21 2012 05:53 am
Nice update. In time Keyshia, he will share with you or just keep watching tv and someone in his family will be on it.lol
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: August 21 2012 04:34 am
Not good to leave her hanging like that. I would be suspicious if I were her, he could have at least called her.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: August 21 2012 04:20 am
I don't understand this in the least little bit. First they are dating then she breaks up with him so she can take a job working for him. Which says to me she didn't think much of the relationship in the first place. Then she makes out with his cousin, REALLY! I get that she can date but fooling with his family is just a No! No! Not to mention she doesn't seem to realize that she even in the wrong. I think I like the idea of Jason dating because Keyshia needs a reality check. I see why she, Lauren, and Alicia are friends she is truly on their level and that is not a good thing.
Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]Date: August 21 2012 02:05 am
Keyshia is starting to frustrate me. She intentionally flirted with Carter and then tried to play the "I didn't know that he still had feelings for me" card. Why wouldn't he when you still have feelings for him? Her kissing Carter was a dumb*ss move as well. And Jason should have just been honest with her instead of throwing her against the wall and insulting her.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 21 2012 01:59 am
He sounds perfect, use that number girl!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: August 21 2012 12:45 am
Thank you for the update but I want them to be together! Please have them come together and do not have him with someone else. Please!
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: August 21 2012 12:35 am