Reviews For The Better Life
Title: Chapter 3

Nice pictures.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 12:34 am

Title: Chapter 2

Happy Birthday to Keyshia!

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Date: August 21 2012 12:00 am

Title: Chapter 1

Alicia and I would not be friends after this stunt she pulled.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2012 11:43 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Not sure how I feel about this chapter. It was a good read but Jason really needs to calm down. If he's in love and is finding it hard to work with her, then he should have never agreed to the "no dating." Oh...Keyshia *shakes head*...she should have never played with fire. She practically laughs in dude's face, tell him he's not her type but then kisses him? I knew he was going to try to go in for the kill. Maybe they should date other people...the maybe they would realize that they should be together and forget that stupid rule but she shouldn't try to start something with his cousin. James was ready to go crazy on that dude-Carter will back off now for sure. Keyshia quits and takes it back...lol. Maybe quitting wasn't such a bad idea...the way he talks to her because he can't be with her due to some rule? Nah, son. Still like these two though...

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 20 2012 11:32 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Really interested in seeing where this story goes.

Reviewer: Shereads48 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 18 2012 04:07 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Correction, why Keyshia and Alicia are such good friends.

Reviewer: AP Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2012 05:58 am

Title: Chapter 10

I don't feel sorry for Keyshia. What did she expect from Jason? She made the decision not to continue their relationship and to strictly work for him but now she's complaining b/c he's not on her ass anymore? And now she's going to mess around and cause dissension between family members? And that's the least that could happen. She's starting to show why her and Brandi are such good friends--immaturity.

Reviewer: AP Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2012 05:54 am

Title: Chapter 9

Ha ,I don't think Keekees' gonna like this side of James and how they're relationship is going to change... She asked for this though,lol

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 11:31 pm

Title: Chapter 10

There is something about his cousin I don't trust. Dad is a prick.

Reviewer: Dimples Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 11:02 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I love this story - I think Jason is awesome but Keyshia needs to grow up! Keep it coming, this is great.

Reviewer: katie Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 06:31 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I cannot stop reading this, I am obssesd!

Reviewer: Lala Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 10:54 am

Title: Chapter 10

I think she's playing with fire. They ended on such stupid terms, her terms mind you, now she's upset that he's given her just what he warned her he would? She's being completely unreasonable.

 

Great update!! Jason is awesmoe, his mom must be an angel because his Dad is just too evil.

Reviewer: JB Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 07:41 am

Title: Chapter 10

Loved the update but she needs to be careful how she treats Jason by trying to use Carter to make him jealous. This may not have a good ending for her.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 07:06 am

Title: Chapter 10

Keyshia needs to stop and think about what she's doing here.

Jason has an interesting family.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 07:03 am

Title: Chapter 10

It ain't cool to play for with peoples feeling, Jason is jealous and he will lose his mind if he finds you with his cousin.   Don't be stupid Keysiha!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 06:54 am

Title: Chapter 10

Keyshia shouldn't play with fire. I don't have a good feeling about that Carter McIntyre.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 04:50 am

Title: Chapter 10

I can't believe that Jason is ok with her just being his assistant.  Did he think that he could keep her so busy that she wouldn't have time for anyone else.  He hasn't been doing anything to keep the home fires burning so why is he upset about carter.

Carter might be more mature that Jason gives him credit for and a real run for his money with Keyisha.  So thumbs up for him.

BTW, wow is Dad an ass.

Reviewer: crocuslady Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 03:14 am

Title: Chapter 10

Woah, I hope messing with Jason's feelings doesn't back fire on her. Nice chaper!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 02:41 am

Title: Chapter 10

Love it! I love the direction you are going! I want Jason and Keyshia to get back together and Jason to kick his dad's butt! Please update soon!

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 02:20 am

Title: Chapter 9

Lawd, Lauren has a big ass mouth....Jason better find a way to get her to keep her damned mouth shut. I really hate Keyshia's friend, but I think it's cuz they're real. They're those girls from the neighborhood that you've been friends with for forever. I can already tell than Alicia is a hater, so hopefully she'll be the last one in the world to find out about this.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2012 07:42 am

Title: Chapter 9

Loved it;) I don't want their relationship to end, please let them continue to be together;)

Reviewer: xiaomei21 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2012 07:42 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Leoslove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2012 05:06 am

Title: Chapter 9

Ya know, I'm kinda insulted for Keyshia that her so called "friends" think that Jason is out of her league. Even Lauren. What exactly do they think is so wrong with her?

And I'm kinda with Keyshia on not working with the boyfriend scenario. However, I do see why Jason would want someone he could trust to do that for him.

I hate Alicia!!

Good stuff!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2012 02:36 am

Title: Chapter 9

I think Keyshia is going to regret being Jason's assistant. He offered to take care of her which was sweet and very hot! Really like this chapter!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 05 2012 01:08 am

Title: Chapter 9

Enjoying the story. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 05 2012 12:46 am



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