I understand that Keyshia needs a job and money but why is she so quick to pass up a relationship with Jason who is more than likely going to be the best thing she's ever had? I just didn't see that one coming but I know that the chemistry that they have and the sparks that they generate will make for fantastic reading. Alicia...meh...same whore, no new tricks. Keep up the good work FM! I really look forward to your updates.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous
[Report This]Date: August 04 2012 07:29 pm
Why are they hiding their relationship? Thanks
Author's Response:
they're hiding their relationship because Keyshia does not want anything to do with being famous
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: August 04 2012 12:48 pm
What's the name of the actor (photo) you picked for Jason? God, that man is FINE!!
Author's Response:
his name's Bernardo Velasco and he's a model :)
Reviewer: CurlyQ Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 04 2012 09:04 am
Loving this story so far!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: August 04 2012 05:32 am
This working relationship should prove to be interesting since they are both feeling each other rather deeply. Jason won't be able to keep his off of the Keysia and she won't be able to keep her hands off Jason. This is going to funny. I don't trust that ho Alicia, why is she friends with her?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 04 2012 03:41 am
Thanks for a great update.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: August 04 2012 03:10 am
I am loving this story. I hope that Lauren doesn't turn out to be anything like Alicia. Something tells me that Alicia is not that loyal, it seems as though she is money hungry and is willing to do anything to get it. Lauren seems to be a follower willing to do anything dispite her judgement if it pleases the leader. I hope that the other two friends find a love like Keyshia.
A new fan,
Kim
Reviewer: kimyso Signed [Report This]Date: August 02 2012 03:35 am
I like the fact that he missed her so much that he went thru the trouble of tracking her down. And he's not pressed about sex so much as starting a great relationship. Thumbs up Jason! (And the thoughtfullness of giving her a luxury car doesn't hurt either.) I love this story.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 29 2012 06:27 pm
Please update soon. Really ejoying the story. I will check out your other story.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 29 2012 05:53 pm
Great story finding myself, I don't trust her friends. I can't wait to see if Jason is strong enough to be with Keyshia.
Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]Date: July 29 2012 04:07 pm
I know its hard to keep a big secret and im ready to she her revealit and make her friends eat their words and look stupid....hahaha
Reviewer: ChristinaElizabeth Signed
[Report This]Date: July 29 2012 07:04 am
Great chapter!
Reviewer: Leoslove Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 29 2012 12:22 am
That Alicia thang... *smh*
Reviewer: Leoslove Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 29 2012 12:01 am
Most excellent!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 28 2012 11:56 pm
Great job!!!! =)
Reviewer: Leoslove Signed [Report This]Date: July 28 2012 09:25 pm
I want so waffles ugghhhh I wish I get jason someday
Reviewer: esther Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 28 2012 09:20 pm
Love it! You got skills!
Reviewer: Leoslove Signed [Report This]Date: July 28 2012 09:01 pm
Hot, girl! Hot!
Reviewer: Leoslove Signed [Report This]Date: July 28 2012 08:47 pm
great update, pelase update soon
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: July 28 2012 05:14 am
A man who can cook and is fine too. She should keep him. Plus he gave her a very expensive car!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: July 28 2012 04:28 am
i gotta say i didnt want read this tory cuz i thought it was gonna suck but today i was like HEY! give it a try.And its GREAT I really like and its not what I though it was gonna be about .Also I really like Jason I mean his kinda weird seeing how he wants to get to know somebody he has no clue about but I like thst fact he created the no sex rule shows he has more to offer and at some point wants to share things with the girl i kinda forgot her name. And way keep writing adn cant wait for the next upload.
Author's Response:
lol thank you for your honesty :)
i really appreciate it!
Date: July 23 2012 03:57 am
I still don't like Alisha and as much as I feel sorry for Lauran's circumstances, I don't quite trust her either. She's been up under Alisha too long. Otherwise, Keyshia needs to keep doing what she's doing--keeping the details of her relationship private. Still loving this story.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 23 2012 01:38 am
I really don't like Alicia but Lauran is alright. So cute that Jason called Keyshia for a pep talk.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: July 22 2012 04:35 am