I am glad Keysha talked Lauren into standing up for herself because Alicia was being a b*tch and nose as hell.
Reviewer: dimples Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 21 2012 11:48 pm
I'm loving the slow build up of their emotional relationship. You're becoming one of my favourite writers, definitely one of the best on this site. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. I hope you'll be able to post another installment. Thank you for enligten my life. Love from Spain
Author's Response:
AW THANK YOU!! wow lol i don't even know what to say... O:
Reviewer: Bel Anonymous
[Report This]Date: July 21 2012 11:21 am
Thanks for the update... Jason and Keyshia are just too cute, and I love their banter.
And Keyshia needs to DROP Alicia, that girl is no ones FRIEND, she is a jealous bitter chick, and both Keyshia and Lauren need to CUT her off like a HANGNAIL.
Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous
[Report This]Date: July 21 2012 06:49 am
Ughh...what is that skank Alicia's problem anyway? Keyshia needs to drop that loser. Nice!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: July 21 2012 05:35 am
I love the story please update sooon
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: July 21 2012 04:41 am
I really hate Alicia, she makes my teeth itch. I would have told her ass that I did like Lauren better, Alicia is untrustworthy. There toxic people in your life that you need to get rid of, and Alicia is one of those people!! Great update!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 21 2012 01:52 am
I'm liking this slow build between Keyshia and Jason, and I likethat they can just be free with one another.
I do have a feeling that Jason's mother is not actually dead, maybe its something his father told the press to explain her absence.
As for Livy, I have a feeling we may not have seen the last of her.
Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 17 2012 02:29 pm
Keysia you need to slow your role, get to know the man and then he will let you in on some of his secrets. They ho Olivia is crazy, just going to show up at he boys house and the throw yourself at him. Olivia is the worst type of ho she's a broke down one. For shame Holivia!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 16 2012 10:18 pm
James is a sweet heart,but I feel trouble a coming...
Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]Date: July 16 2012 10:17 pm
They are really cute together. I'm glad Jason fired that ignorant receptionist.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: July 16 2012 07:10 pm
Your story is getting very interesting please continue, i love drama and a strong female chacter in a story
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: July 16 2012 03:20 pm
Good update. I hope that Keyshia will be patience as he is requesting. As for his father what a jerk to send your child to do your dirty work for you. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: July 16 2012 03:04 pm
moremoremoremoremore! :')
Reviewer: emy Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 16 2012 07:40 am
Keyshia should slow it down some. Before she was opposed to the idea of getting with him, now she's all salty because she thinks he doesn't fully trust her! She's not fully disclosing all her business so what's the problem? She needs to make up her mind.
Nice!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: July 16 2012 06:45 am
Keyshia wants him to trust her already...then again he wanted exclusivity after one night of passion. It seems that they are comfortable with each other but I can understand why he is holding back a bit. I mean they still don't *know* each other...and Keyshia's friends (hopefully ex-friends) are shady. I liked this chapter; don't think it was dull at all.
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]Date: July 16 2012 05:49 am
Another good chapter. I wonder what he was doing that took so long.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 14 2012 10:08 am
Loving it...hope they get solve their differences.
Reviewer: Bella Rosa Signed [Report This]Date: July 14 2012 05:59 am
Great update! Jason seems to be the perfect guy but I can see his father is going to be a major problem already.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 13 2012 11:59 pm
Wow, Jason sounds sexy as hell.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 13 2012 11:30 pm
I've liked this story since you first posted. Alicia showed her true colors from the time that she f#cked the bouncer to get into the club so her antics should come as no surprise and Lauran seems like a follower. So the questions is why is Keyshia friends with either of them? I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 13 2012 11:17 pm
What is taking him so long? What is Jason doing? I am sure that Keyshia is going to be a bit miffed when he does get in.
Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed [Report This]Date: July 13 2012 05:36 pm
That receptionist was beyond rude. Glad that she got fired. I am surprised that having a biracial son was ok for the grandfather but not having the Brazillian mother be part of her child's life was a no no. To bad his father wants him to follow in his foot steps and drop the black lover. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: July 13 2012 12:25 pm
Need more...Jason is soooo sweet!!!!
Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]Date: July 13 2012 11:17 am
OMG I love your story! Don't take too long to update (:
Reviewer: MeganRose Signed [Report This]Date: July 13 2012 10:35 am
Cute chapter. Jason wastes no time....I must admit that I didn't expect him to want an exclusive relationship so soon but then again he was already feeling something the morning after. Hmm...falls quickly just like his father huh?
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]Date: July 13 2012 07:31 am