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Title: Chapter 5

Love this story so far.. Jason and Keyshia have amazing chemistry.. I look forward to seeing how thier relationship blossoms.

 Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 13 2012 05:54 am
Title: Chapter 5

Jason's father is a piece of work.  Jason has money of his own so he's not letting what his father said phase him.  This was crackalackin'!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2012 04:41 am
Title: Chapter 4

I really like your story! How sweet and sexy is Jason!!

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 07 2012 05:08 am
Title: Chapter 4

Thanks for a great update.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2012 02:34 am
Title: Chapter 4

awww that was sweet of him. I hope she calls him and at least go have coffee or something and get to know him.

 Reviewer: Bella Rosa Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2012 12:32 am
Title: Chapter 4

I like it. Keyshia is stubborn but I like Jason. Please open her eyes up and see a good man. Please update soon. Not liking Alicia much. 

 Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2012 02:09 pm
Title: Chapter 4

I Like:) He is so sweet and Keyshia is so hard,but I find them very interesting as a couple and can't wait for more!

 Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2012 11:49 am
Title: Chapter 1

I loved the chapter can't wait to see what happens next.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 06 2012 09:53 am
Title: Chapter 4

I love love love this chapter. He was trying to be so sweet and i understood her by acting how she did. Her friends did her wrong that is so crazy. I loved that he gave her money to help her. I want her to call. Please update soon i.love it

 Reviewer: primesgurl4 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2012 07:26 am
Title: Chapter 4

I am so glad that Keysia went off on  Alicia, because she did was wrong on so many levels.  Give Jason a chance, that boy is fine!!!  He gave you good loving, Jason is a keeper!  More please!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2012 06:40 am
Title: Chapter 4

I wasn't feeling the first chapter...and I truly hope that she drops her *friends* but I have to admit I'm beginning to like this story...a lot...love the fact that he's Brazilian. He's such a caring guy.  I wonder what drew him to Keyshia...and why he cares so much already.

 Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2012 06:32 am
Title: Chapter 2

U got me sitting here on the next scene and wondering what's next.

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 25 2012 05:26 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Wow!!! Jason is wow,wow,wow,what a speciment and Keyshia wants him and who wouldn't.  As for her two friends, she needs to get new ones with morals. Great story, so more please.

 Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2012 12:43 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Very sexy cast!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2012 07:13 am
Title: Chapter 2

Wow! I like this story already! Please make will a good and long one!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2012 07:09 am
Title: Chapter 3

Alicia is about to flip a b*tch when she realize Keysha got what she wants without even trying. She going to be all up in her ear saying things to try and break them up.

 Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2012 06:12 am
Title: Chapter 2

i've got a smile on my face right now ... i like jason . shit he definitely can get it . i know she's about to enjoy what's left of her birthday. smh. i can't believe those heifers -- no i can't believe she's friends with them. i'd long gone ditched those money hungry whores. ha! that alicia whore was looking to find a big baller , and keyshia managed to snag one up without even trying. lol now that's funny. i'm liking this so far, so update again soon please .

 Reviewer: Vava Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2012 04:44 am
Title: Chapter 3

Good cast pics.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2012 04:25 am
Title: Chapter 2

Thanks for the update.  I can't believe that her friends did what they did to her.  She did the right thing bt leaving but now she is a mans house that she doesn't know.  He seems to be ok but she is going to have sex with this guy that she just met.  I think it is probably all of the alcohol that she drunk at the club.  I was surprised that Jason doesn't have an entourage.  What kind of star is he? Singer or actor?

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2012 04:25 am
Title: Chapter 1

I like, but I liked it the first time you posted it. I figure Jason was the person at the end of the story that needs to be cleared up because a person could get confused about that. Alicia is dirty and needs her @$ kicked for what she did.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Jason's the person at the end. I apologize for the confusion.

Thanks for the review! lol smh at alicia

 Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19 2012 10:53 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Good start to the story.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2012 02:20 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Great start update soon! Can't wait to see what happens next

 Reviewer: vmck Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 19 2012 01:35 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Gosh that was a turn of events, Alicia that cheeky girl! Great first chapter!!!!!

 Reviewer: LaceTurkeyExpress Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19 2012 12:57 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Really interesting..sounds almost like some freaky human trafficking type shit!! Update pleasee!!!

 Reviewer: leah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 18 2012 10:57 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Good start to your story.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 18 2012 06:17 am


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