Loving this story..really creative dynamic between the characters. However, I'm starting to sympathize with Vita...I mean he's illness is making him lose control of himself and it's preventing him from obtaining what he desire most: love.
It's kind of sad and it's a bit fustrating that no one has yet to really notice or try to help him, even he doesn't actually recognize what is going on. It's chapter 15 and nothing has been done about it yet....the issue of his illness has remained stagnant and hasn't really moved foward yet :/
Reviewer: Clarissa Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 01 2013 04:46 am
Yaaay!!! Glad Aza is back,he treats Carla bad but he's much better than that Vita,ugh
Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]Date: October 31 2012 01:52 am
Awww so sweet, so glad Vita did'nt hurt her.
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: October 28 2012 09:30 pm
I love Carla andAza, but am so confused about Vita. I don't know to hope if he becomes cured or not. I am soooo glad Aza is back.
Reviewer: Drea Signed [Report This]Date: October 28 2012 06:09 am
Hopefully things will work out
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: October 28 2012 05:28 am
Vita is growing on me. I so hope that his mates will be able to help him from this darkside that he is plagued with it sound like he is in so much pain when it takes over.
I so der what happen with Aza for him to need comfort to.
Great update thank u! Happy writing
Date: October 28 2012 04:51 am
Awww, this was soooo short:( I love this story and this chapter albeit very good was short. I'm glad that Aza is back and Carla has someone to at least have a half way decent relationship with. I hate this side of Vita, it is so violent and malicious. He seems to get off on the terror. I have to disagree with the review that wants Vita and Aza to be lovers. How do you love your rapist? I've read quite a few menages that have had MMF relationships and none of them involve rape. You've got your work cut out for you with Vita but your talented so I know you can do it. You had me feeling sorry for Vita and hoping he turned a corner with Carla with this shopping trip but damn he screwed that away royally. I hope the next chapter has more of Aza and Carla. Vita can go piss in the wind.
Reviewer: Charly43 Signed [Report This]Date: October 28 2012 02:27 am
I missed Aza and his usrliness. He's the lesser of two evils.
Reviewer: Shae Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 28 2012 01:47 am