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Title: Chapter 11

I enjoyed this chapter, it was nice to see more of the relationship between Nia and Agito progress a little more.

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 01 2012 06:19 am
Title: Chapter 11

Good! Drama bring on the freaky stuff!

 Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31 2012 01:40 am
Title: Chapter 11

He's such an ass.  He ought to give the phone back before she finds out and his actions drive her to his brother's arms.   If only he could be honest with her and with himself!  More please!

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2012 07:35 pm
Title: Chapter 11

Waiting on the freaky stuff. His brother is not nice, it is all about him and his wants.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2012 05:58 pm
Title: Chapter 11

Great update . The kiss was so Hot . More ?

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Date: August 30 2012 05:15 pm
Title: Chapter 10

What happened to this story? Time for an update, please!

 Reviewer: CurlyQ Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 04:49 am
Title: Chapter 10

There's alot of chemistry between Nia and Yoshi. I hope that it doesn't go too far before his brother puts the breaks on that situation.

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2012 07:44 pm
Title: Chapter 10

I like this story.  I hope Nia doesn't fall for the Casanova brother who always gets what he wants.  Maybe little Bro will wake up and claim her for himself. LOL

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2012 08:33 pm
Title: Chapter 10

Great lunch date!

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 03 2012 07:02 pm
Title: Chapter 10

What is her boss thinking now?

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 03 2012 01:22 pm
Title: Chapter 6

I would to appropriatey rate your story but from Chapter 6, the few last words have been getting cut of by the margin. Is it possible for you to format your story so they can fit in the designated space?



Author's Response:

Hi, thanks for the heads up. I checked on it and I couldn't see anything wrong with the spacing. I'm using Mozilla Firefox and I'm not having that problem.


What are you using so maybe we can figure this thing out?
And thanks for reading.
Outlawstar615

 Reviewer: Lady Siren Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2012 12:12 pm
Title: Chapter 10

Great update . Nia best watch out for Yoshi . I really hope Mr. H steps up soon , he's gonna have to fight for Nia > Love this story !

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2012 05:21 am
Title: Chapter 10

Nia don't trust Yoshi he is going to use to wreck his little brother just becasue.  You saw with your very own eyes that those two do not get along.  So don't in between them, especially if you are in love with Mr. H.  So loving this story!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2012 03:39 am
Title: Chapter 10

It would be nice to not have Mr. H screwed over again, by these people who claim to be his family. I'd like to see him fight back for a change. I do not like his step-brother at all. If Mr. H likes her then it's time to show him stepping up his game.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2012 03:27 am
Title: Chapter 10

I love it and i want to read so juicy stuff. I want her to be with someone please!

 Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2012 03:06 am
Title: Chapter 9

I'm totally in love with this story, and I'm kinda hoping she'll go for Mr. Sohama/Yoshi. 

Please update so I can see where this goes!!

 Reviewer: alexp696 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2012 09:04 am
Title: Chapter 9

I like where this is headed so please continue.

 Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2012 05:27 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Loving this story so far!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2012 07:49 am
Title: Chapter 9

Mr. H needs to step up and realize that as ruthless as his brother is in business, he'll be the same way when it comes to Nia.

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2012 06:15 pm
Title: Chapter 9

Great update, but I thought she had a granola bar for breakfast when she got to the office and not toast?

 Reviewer: TheDaezy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 29 2012 05:27 pm
Title: Chapter 8

well dang is yoshi childish and cruel even. yikes!

 Reviewer: grumpirah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2012 04:00 pm
Title: Chapter 9

I like this blossoming relationship. I wold love to see were this goes. 

 Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2012 05:47 am
Title: Chapter 9

Great update!!! I can't believe we're at chapter 9 already!!! I'm not sure how I feel about Mr. H's brother....He's nice and all, but uhhhhh he needs to move out the way. Then again, there's nothing like healthy competition lol. I was wondering how Nia looks, especially from Mr. H's point of view. I really want to see him grovel. I think I'm getting ahead of myself :))

 

Thank you for sharing!!

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2012 05:31 am
Title: Chapter 9

Nia don't let Yoshi use you to hurt his brother!!!  I really have developed an intense dislike for Yoshi after reading the last chapter.  Mr. H. had better start being to nice to Nia  and treat her like a human being.  I am so loving this tale!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2012 05:15 am
Title: Chapter 9

I think that she really likes her boss nit his half brother. Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2012 04:49 am


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