Reviews For Drawn Together
Submit a Review
Title: Chapter 9

Great update . I can't wait to see how "lunch" goes.

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2012 04:44 am
Title: Chapter 9

I think she should be very careful. He may be interested in her, but first and foremost he wants to mess with his step brother like they have done all his life. I hope she stays true to Mr. H, and does not leave his company.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2012 03:27 am
Title: Chapter 8

Yoshi isn't prepared for Agito. I feel like he's been underestimated in general and now he's going to show them who he is.

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2012 12:46 am
Title: Chapter 1

Good start!

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2012 07:53 am
Title: Chapter 8

I hope Agito comes to his senses soon and tells Nina how he feels before Yoshihide steps in!

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 27 2012 05:49 am
Title: Chapter 8

Yoshihide is a ruthless SOB. It seems that Mr. H comes from a family if sharks. I can only imagine what the other siblings are like. I hope that Nia doesn't become a pawn in this family feud. Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2012 04:10 am
Title: Chapter 8

lmao that brother is so nice /ASSWHOLE I was waiting for him to show his true colors and that he did. As for Agito his gonna have to put a smile on his face or something if he doesnt want nina to leave. AS FOR YOU KEEP THE CHAPTERS COMING

 Reviewer: esther Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 27 2012 02:41 am
Title: Chapter 8

Now that you written a scene with both Yoshi and Mr,. H. I really hate Yoshi. But he did give Agi some inform that he wouldn't have had otherwise.  Now what will he do with the knowledge?  So awesome!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2012 02:23 am
Title: Chapter 8

Getting really good. Maybe now agitprop will show her how much he respect her and other things too.

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 27 2012 02:14 am
Title: Chapter 8

Wonderful , fun update . What has Nia gonna herself into two men almost fighting over her . Lucky girl . Yoshi seems fun but I hope he's not just gonna play her like a fool . Loving this story ! : )

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2012 02:01 am
Title: Chapter 1

Can't feel sorry for Agito, he brought this on himself.  He let his pride get in the way now he may end up losing to his brother again.

 Reviewer: Ttee72 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2012 01:37 am
Title: Chapter 8

Let's hope Nia, dos not fall for the him. Horrible family he has.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2012 01:27 am
Title: Chapter 7

Surprise!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2012 01:16 am
Title: Chapter 7

More

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 26 2012 02:06 pm
Title: Chapter 7

I can't wait for the interaction between Mr. H and Yoshide!!'

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 26 2012 05:45 am
Title: Chapter 7

Good update . More please :)

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2012 05:11 am
Title: Chapter 7

TEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE LOL

 Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2012 04:20 am
Title: Chapter 7

WELL LET ME TELL U I WAS SUPER EXCITED FOR THIS SECOND UPLOAD SO KEEP THEM GOING

 Reviewer: esther Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 26 2012 02:38 am
Title: Chapter 7

You did say it was short but you left off at a pivotal moment. Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2012 02:04 am
Title: Chapter 6

Thanks for a great update. It is good that she did her presentation so well. It seems her new friend is smiiten. I wonder what Mr. H is going to mane if the turn of events. Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2012 02:02 am
Title: Chapter 7

Loving this story. We need MOREEEEE!!! :)

 Reviewer: CurlyQ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 26 2012 01:32 am
Title: Chapter 7

Short chapters are evil, but I loved it.  I can't wait to read about  Mr.H's reaction to seeing Yoshi.  So awesome!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2012 01:20 am
Title: Chapter 6

Mr H, will have to step up his game. I doubt his brother plays fair.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2012 12:27 am
Title: Chapter 6

Loved it. I want  to see their relationship develop! More please!

 Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 11:49 pm
Title: Chapter 6

This meeting should be interested since Nia has not idea who Yoshi really is.  This is s going to be such a good story.  I give ths cahpter two thumbs up!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 11:32 pm


Enter the security code shown below:
Note: You may submit either a rating or a review or both.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.