Reviews For Twice The Fool
Title: Chapter 13 Happy Endings

Love this story! Looking forward to the new story that you got brewing. The brother! 

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2012 01:35 am

Title: Chapter 13 Happy Endings

Great update,  good for the Uncle.

Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2012 01:32 am

Title: Chapter 13 Happy Endings

What a funny chapter. Gotta love Gretchen. She went after what she wanted!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2012 10:14 pm

Title: Chapter 13 Happy Endings

Interesting turn of events. Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2012 08:27 pm

Title: Chapter 12 Love Conquers All

Uncle Doulas needs to listen to others. He wasn't invited and showed up anyway. He sure is nervy. Glad Cara wasn't put off by Stephan's tastes. If fact she was turned on so uncle Douglas loses.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 08 2012 08:15 pm

Title: Chapter 13 Happy Endings

Will Julius and Gretchen get their own story?

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2012 07:27 pm

Title: Chapter 13 Happy Endings

Love, Gretchen. Age ain't nothing but a number.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2012 07:25 pm

Title: Chapter 13 Happy Endings

Lol....great story

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2012 06:44 pm

Title: Chapter 13 Happy Endings

Damn, what is it going to take to kill Douglas off?? Just kidding, not really! Poor Cara is going to be in a world of hurt when she is finally released to have sex! LOL! Stephan is not going to let her rest!  Is there a coming story for Julius and Gretchen?

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2012 06:43 pm

Title: Chapter 13 Happy Endings

I have really enjoyed this story!!!

Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2012 06:26 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

i love all your stories you are so talented i get excited whenever i see a story by you that i have not read yet

Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23 2012 01:18 am

Title: Chapter 12 Love Conquers All

Glad it was relatively smooth, the wedding.

Douglas, well, he just needs to go home.

Cara likes to get down like that, too! Stephan is going to love this!!

 

Good stuff!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2012 05:58 am

Title: Chapter 12 Love Conquers All

Loved the update! It was sweet! Glad they didn't let uncle Douglas stop them.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2012 04:44 am

Title: Chapter 12 Love Conquers All

Great update I'm so glad Cara and Stephan are married now.Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: meko1975 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2012 03:31 am

Title: Chapter 12 Love Conquers All

Stephan is my kind of man FREAKY in all the right ways *smile* and him and Cara are made for each other.

I know having twin and a c-section along with a 2yr old can make you tired but I hope that is all it is.  I hope there is no underlined illness we are not aware of or something is going on with the incision.  Plus a lot has been going on with the up coming wedding I hope that is all that is happening with Cara. *keeping fingers x*

Stephan was a lot calmer then I expected with his Uncle...then again it was his wedding day no need to wile out on the old man right now but he still needs his comeuppance for causing her to go into labor early I don't think she would be going thru this much if she hadn't gone into labor due to stress.

I like that Cara handled his news about what he wants intimately with her.

As always great job at updating.

Happy writing!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2012 02:54 am

Title: Chapter 12 Love Conquers All

LOL, what a transition, from getting  mind-blowing blowjob to sitting in front of a preacher!

Glad the wedding was short and sweet! Can't wait for the reception!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2012 02:21 am

Title: Chapter 1 Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

Great start!

Reviewer: Hikari Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2012 02:07 am

Title: Chapter 12 Love Conquers All

Cara is making me proud and she's growing up finally.  Loving how she's into being loved by her husband.  Has Uncle Douglass realized the error of his ways?  I sure hope I want to allow his nephew to be happy with his family.  Brenda you are so awesome.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2012 11:55 pm

Title: Chapter 12 Love Conquers All

Go Cara she is all for being freaky. Loved the update.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2012 06:36 pm

Title: Chapter 12 Love Conquers All

love it.  update soon

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 21 2012 05:42 pm

Title: Chapter 12 Love Conquers All

Yeah the wedding happened without a hitch, but will the reception??? I will wait and see how you finish this story. I have enjoyed reading every chapter and i will keep a look out for any other stories that you may write.

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2012 04:32 pm

Title: Chapter 12 Love Conquers All

Thanks for a great update.  I was surprised that Cara didn't freak out when her husband told her about the kinky sex. As for good old uncle D what a stubborn old man.  The wedding was nice.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2012 02:55 pm

Title: Chapter 12 Love Conquers All

Awww how sweet!!! They finally made it down the isle...

Great update!!

Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2012 02:32 pm

Title: Chapter 12 Love Conquers All

I love this story and hate to see it end but great update! I hope the final chapter does an epilogue. Great story!

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2012 01:23 pm

Title: Chapter 11 The Persistent Fool

Will Douglas have a change of heart about Cara? I doubt it! Too bad Stephan missed his daughters birth, I'm sure Cara will be pregnant again!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2012 08:04 am



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