Very good start please continue. I can't wait to see what Ryan will do to get Friday
Reviewer: foxyprime Signed
[Report This]Date: August 11 2012 12:23 am
wooohooooooo you can feel the electricity in the air lol
Reviewer: Mary P Signed [Report This]Date: August 11 2012 12:08 am
You are off to a fabulous start! I can't wait to see how Ryan wins her over! :)
Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2012 11:59 pm
luv it.... can't wait for the next update!!!!!!!!:)
Reviewer: queen89 Signed [Report This]Date: August 10 2012 11:43 pm
Well, well well what do we have here? I figured it was only a matter of time before someone wrote an IR fanfic about him. You captured his arrogance (not sure if he's really arrogant in real life) and *playa* ways in this first chapter but bam...Friday. So Friday is Michael's assistant AND girlfriend? This is going to get interesting....very interesting.
Author's Response:
Friday and Michael's relationship is a bit complicated but it what it is. Ryan is a fierce competitor and Friday is worth trying to win. Michael is a bit lazy until he realizes what he could lose. Thanks for the comment. CL
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed
[Report This]Date: August 10 2012 11:33 pm
Great Chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm loving Friday!! Lochte...ehhh not so much right now.
Author's Response:
He hot. Really hot but if you watch some of his interviews during the Olympics you'll see he's a real playboy and while he says he wants to settle down its all about have the right woman make him happy. It will take the right kind of woman to show him that he is not the center of the universe. Thanks for the review. CL
Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed [Report This]Date: August 10 2012 11:24 pm
Wow !!! What a great start. I have been waiting for someone to write a Ryan Lochte story . I think I'm gonna like Friday already , I hope she gives Ryan a run for his money . I can't wait to read more ! : )
Author's Response:
I didn't know that I stumbled into a Ryan Lochte fan club. He's definately going to have his hands full with Friday. And Phelps is going to have a real battle to keep Friday as his. [ I mentioned that I was going to write about him I think last week but the topic quickly morphed into a superhero challenge. ]
If I had more time I think we should have a challenge for our favorite US athlete. Thanks for the rate and comment. I hope to have the next chapter up soon. CL
Reviewer: Stacie77 Signed [Report This]Date: August 10 2012 11:22 pm
It sounds really good so far! Please continue...I've been waiting for a story with Ryan Lochte since the 400 IM haha
Author's Response:
Thanks! I didn't know that there was a Lochte fan club.
Reviewer: crazykeely429 Signed [Report This]Date: August 10 2012 10:43 pm
Wow. I am glad to read an Olympics fic. After what Ryan's mom said about one night stands, I doubt if she'll give him the time of day. LOL
Author's Response:
Brenda1257!!!! I am sorry that I didn't have time to write this earlier in the Games. His mom is so funny. She has no filter. Thanks for reading! CL
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: August 10 2012 10:27 pm
I love this!!!!!!! ryan lochte i am "lochked" in lol Friday and Ryan..i cant see Friday's pic so i will just picture K.Michelle and Ryan ;D
LOVING IT!! PLEASE DONT STOP
Author's Response:
I thought i put Dana Davis' picture up for Friday. I guess I will have to do it again. It's good to write about someone besides Mina. Thanks for the comments.
Reviewer: Naksj Anonymous Signed [Report This]Date: August 10 2012 10:05 pm
Another Winner Croucslady!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad you like it. :)
CL
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: August 10 2012 09:41 pm