Reviews For A Year Without You
Title: Chapter 3: Broken Friendships

Laurence is a true friend even he's really pushy.  In the end he has Christophers back and I love that about him.  Allegra just got the chewing out that she deserved, Laurence I give you two thumbs up!!



Author's Response:

I agree. Laurence is a bit of a push-over, but he's loyal to his best friend and that is all that matters.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2012 04:14 am

Title: Chapter 3: Broken Friendships

I'm glad that Chris finally stepped up and started being a friend to Chris. She needed to know the truth. She wasn't solicitous of Chris's feelings so why should they continue to be so toward hers?



Author's Response:

Well said. She needed to know what Chris was feeling as Chris wasn't probably going to say anything himself.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 01:31 am

Title: Chapter 3: Broken Friendships

That was beautiful, Laurence you are the shit!!  I am glad that Laurence tells Allegra like it is becasue Giselle just pussy foots around.  He was right Allegra needs to ask Chris to give her another chance right after she explains why she treated him like a baldheaded step-child with bad teeth and leprosy.  I give up chapter two thumbs up, but Allegra is not nearly suffering enough.



Author's Response:

Chris is brutally honest. He knows that he probably hurt her feelings, but she kind of deserved it. I loved it when you said that she treated Chris like a baldheaded step-child with bad teeth and leprosy. That was totally new to me. I'll keep that expression in mind. Lol. What does she have to suffer in order for you to give her your approval? Any suggestions?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2012 11:54 pm

Title: Chapter 3: Broken Friendships

As a friend of hers for a long time, I feel like Laurence was to harsh on her. Yes she was wrong in how she treated Chris, but he knew about her husband and maybe he could have been a little more understanding of it.



Author's Response:

Laurence is caught in the middle. He's really mad at Allegra because he can't get past the fact that she broke Chris. He was so depressed and hopeless that he can't seem to forgive her for that. He's always been a great friend to her, being there for her when she needed help the most, but he is honest and tells her what he thinks instead of sugar-coating things for her. She needed a further reality check.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2012 11:12 pm



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