This update was on the short side, but still aprreciated!! I am glad to see Nyla let her guard down and love Gavin as he deserves to be loved. Where is her sister the nasty ho Tina? I think that Tina was her name, it's been while.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: March 04 2013 04:04 am
I love update...please update soon
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: March 04 2013 03:32 am
Tina needs to go and Gavin needs to get on that for Nyla! Thats all I got!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: February 05 2013 11:05 pm
I do feel bad for Nyla but she knows her sister hasn't changed. She needs to toughen up and say no more. Gavin can only help so much.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed
[Report This]Date: February 05 2013 09:20 pm
Wow I feel for Gavin and Nyla. I had a miscarriage a few years ago and I still miss my baby and wonder what he would have looked like. It ttook me two years to get up the courage to try again. Even then I was scared as hell. I am currently pregnant agin and the fear never really goes away it doesn't even lessen. It makes me super diligent about my children. I couldn't imagine losing a child and my husband at the same time it has to be that much worse. I say that to say that she may never change her mind about children but it is possible. Gavin needs to decide if he can handle that and if not now is the time for him to move on. At the end of the dAy they both deserve happiness.
Reviewer: Carmel Beauty Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 05 2013 03:41 pm
I'm so glad she's being transparent with him. Please let her hurriedly put her scank sister in her place.
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: February 05 2013 03:11 pm
Great update.
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: February 05 2013 12:47 pm
Gavin invited a snake into his life named Tina. He better be weary of ever being alone in a room with her. I hope he doesn't allow Tina to hurt Nyla through him. I understand his impatience to an extent but I hope he doesn't turn to Tina because he can't wait. It a new relationship.
I hope Nyla gets stronger and more sure of herself. She deserves to be loved and Greg would want her to move on. She needs to realize that there is more than enough room in her heart to love Gavin and have children.
Reviewer: Eclectic Charms Signed [Report This]Date: February 05 2013 07:16 am
To move on completely you must be willing to not only love again but to marry and have more children. Greg wouldn't want you to shut down your heart but to love freely and to bring forth more children. Gavin deserves a woman that will love him enough to both marry him and give him children. Don't let your fear deny Gavin the chance at love, marriage and family. To do that would would be selfish!!! Nyla just beat Tina like she stole your last dollar!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 05 2013 06:35 am
i love this story........i hope her feelings change about not getting married again and having another baby!
Also she needs 2 watch her back with that sister of hers!
Reviewer: skip2641 Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 05 2013 05:28 am
Her sister needs to hurry up and leave already
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: February 05 2013 05:02 am
Horrible sister. Wonderful update, he meant well.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 10 2013 08:30 pm
That's it? Did I miss something?
Reviewer: Stories Signed [Report This]Date: January 09 2013 02:07 am
I hope she puts this heffa in her place... Good update
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: January 09 2013 01:49 am
Wow, her sister is a piece of work. I hope she gets what she deserves expecting a hand out, which is nothing.
Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]Date: January 09 2013 12:04 am
Woman please the errors don't take away from the story! When I read I automatically do the corrections in my head. Besides my grammer isn't perfect either is my typing! I am enjoying this story. Getting beta wouldn't be a bad idea.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 08 2013 01:55 pm
OMG Tina is awful. Ihope she doesn't cause too much trouble.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: January 08 2013 12:51 pm
His heart was in the right place, but his head was somewhere else all together. He's bitten off more than he can chew. He'll remember that he brought that viper into their sphere.
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 08 2013 12:01 pm
Colossal error in judgment here! To presume things over other peoples' family matters is a tricky thing. Assuming that whatever the problem was, it was Nyla's to get over was a mistake. And frankly, I'm kind of offended on Nyla's behalf. He implies she acts like some sort of flighty alarmist. Now, this money-grubbing heifer is in; and Gavin is the one who needs to get her out since he jumped the gun here. Let him deal with her. I also hope Nyla gives him a proper ass-chewing for his slightly haughty assumptions. Heavy-handedness indeed!
And I already see some kind of unholy alliance between Tina and Abbey in their one goal; which would be to get Nyla out. I could totally see Tina doing it for a big payday; since that's why she's there anyway. That, and to make life hell for a sister she's clearly jealous of. That's gravy for her.
However, I will give Gavin one small concession; Nyla could have given him a bitmore information about her family. Just enough so he had a better picture of what was going on with them.
The fur is about to fly now!!!
Nice!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: January 08 2013 06:04 am
I already hate Tina, I know her persuit of Gavin and his money will blow up in her face but will it cost him Nyla anyway. Gavin you really should have mineded your own business, not all families are close. It's always a reason why that is. Great update as usual!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 08 2013 05:47 am
Great update!!!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 08 2013 05:40 am
Great update.
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: January 08 2013 04:11 am
I'm really enjoying this story... Please update soon pleaseeeeeeee!
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: December 06 2012 04:49 am
Just finished reading the chapters. I think you should consider cleaning up the story so that more people can enjoy reading it.
Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed [Report This]Date: December 01 2012 09:41 pm