The spelling and grammar need to be reviewed I know you apologized but got back and read & correct. There are just too many errors and they are distracting to the events in the story.
Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed
[Report This]Date: December 01 2012 12:22 pm
Loved Gavin's family. I'm glad they were down to earth and cool like that.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: December 01 2012 04:56 am
Very good chapter. I like that Gavin's family loves Nyla!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: December 01 2012 12:16 am
Soo glad to see their relationship progressing! Love this story, can't wait to read more!!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 30 2012 06:33 pm
Loved it...Thank you for sharing.
Reviewer: Lindy Signed [Report This]Date: November 30 2012 08:33 am
very nice update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: November 30 2012 04:42 am
That sweet Nyla met Gavin's family and they loved her. Fabulous!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 30 2012 04:25 am
Aw! They made up!! Yay ;-) Love it
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: November 11 2012 05:58 pm
Perfect! Moving on from that loser!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: November 11 2012 09:34 am
Gavin is such a good guy, I hope that this is the last of Nyla hiding things and feelings from him. I am proud that she letting go of her fear and just loving Gavin like he deserves. Great update!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 11 2012 07:52 am
So, happy, he had the sense to talk to her. No more secrets!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 11 2012 05:25 am
glad they made up, but i can't but think that there will b more problems 4 them in the future!
Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed [Report This]Date: November 11 2012 05:22 am
Very short but sweet update. I am glad they sorted out the problems and misunderstanding.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: November 11 2012 05:17 am
Damn! I knew this would happen! I hate when people lie, some kinda shitty drama is always the result. But I'm really happy that Gavin finally knows and he kicked that no-good ass Trent out of his life, it's been a long time coming -- Bravo Gavin, Bravo! Anyway, great update :) Can't wait for the next.
Reviewer: Terri Day Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2012 03:31 pm
I'm loving this. I hope Gavin forgives her. I don't think that this is the last time we hear from Trent.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2012 12:16 pm
I hoping the characters can get past a simple mistake...nice update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2012 09:15 am
LOL...ok, I guess I see it a little differently cuz um, no ma'am, no breaking down in a pool of tears. She explained, and if he remembers, she told him they would discuss it later before he took off. No pleading and begging here. He knows the particulars now and she shouldn't allow him to use it as stick to beat her with. Its awkward enough. The rest of the stuff he has issues with her about is something else, but this one situation is weird and awkward. Anyone, including him, would have trouble with something like this. Its not exactly the norm, you know. It was during a devastating part of her life and things can happen in extreme grief. Gavin knows this so what else does he want from her on this matter.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2012 06:49 am
I'm happy with the direction of it. Happy Trent got his butt beat, the needed a little turmoil in the realtionship, but no more. Lets get them back on track now! lol
Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 26 2012 06:11 am
I'm glad that Gavin found out and I can't be mad at him for being angry. I also can understand Nyla's fear of getting hurt but she has to get over it sometime. The reality is that she did screw his best friend and that's a hard pill to swallow for anyone. He has a right to be upset but he was wrong for not speaking to her for days. The bottom line is they need to stop screaming at each other and talk.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 26 2012 05:28 am
I loved the direction you are going in. Not so happy about the Gavin & Nyla disagreement, but, things happen.
he needs to get over it or leave her alone.
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 26 2012 04:30 am
Please give us more Trent drama. Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: ShelbyD Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 26 2012 04:22 am
Love it! Please bring on the drama then the healing. I know Gavin loves her.
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2012 03:21 am
at least it's now out there...Thank for the update.
Reviewer: Lindy Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2012 03:19 am
She's going to therapy yet she's still stupid. Gavin, she's scared to love you which is making her doublely stupid. Gavin will need the patience of a saint to deal with Nyla, I just hope that this omission doesn't cost her your love. Great update.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2012 02:44 am