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Title: Chapter 10

Glad she is going to finally confide in him...Don't know how he'll react to it though,hoping for the best for Nyla...

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2012 08:21 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Nyla better tell Gavin about Trent. If he's calling and harassing her now, his next step is to show up at her house. Let Gavin put him in check.

Reviewer: AP Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2012 11:53 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Uh oh!!!!!!!!! Please update I hope she tells him and he forgives Herod at least understands

Reviewer: xiaomei21 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2012 07:16 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Is she going to tell him about Trent? I hope so. The dinner with her parents went well. I like Gavin's dad a lot. HIs mom I'm not as sure about. I like that she is protect of her son. Good chapter.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 22 2012 05:22 pm

Title: Chapter 10

The best part of this chapter was Nyla talking about her daughter. That made me smile.

I'm so glad Nyla's going to tell Gavin about Trent because I would love to know why he's calling and harassing her like that. Is he crazy? It was a freaking one night stand! Who the hell harasses a one night stand anyway? Most people would want to keep that on the QT in this type of situation. Seriously, what is this dude's problem here. This isn't normal.

Nice!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2012 08:49 am

Title: Chapter 10

Aaaaaaahhhh! How could you just leave it there? Please, please please update soon. I want so badly for her to tell him what an asshole his friend has been. I think that it's time for Gavin to cut Trent loose. Apparently, they have never really been friends, because a friend would never harass and try to sleep with the woman you love. I cannot wait to see this burden lifted from Nyla's shoulders, and see Gavin kick Trent's ass.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2012 03:23 am

Title: Chapter 10

How could you stop right there?  She was about to tell him about her one night with Trent or that she loved him.  Possibly both, at least I hope so at any rate.  This update has made my day.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2012 02:31 am

Title: Chapter 10

Great update. Gosh, I hope Nyla tells Gavin about her and Trent's one night stand. Yes, it was before Gavin, but Trent is being an a-hole and is also Gavin's friend or so I thought. Please let her tell Gavin. Trent is going to try and use this against Nyla anyway he can and who is he fooling, he probably never got over Nyla.  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: oHH Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2012 02:28 am

Title: Chapter 10

Thank goodness she is gong to tell him, if not Trent will surely have opened his mouth first.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2012 02:21 am

Title: Chapter 10

Aww getting good!  I love this story and glad that she is being honest! I hope Gavin will stick it out. Nyla deserves happiness. Please update soon!

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2012 02:17 am

Title: Chapter 9-

Am I the only one that thinks Trent is a Grade-A asshole? Man, I can't stand his ass! Anyway, great update... I hope Nyla tells Gavin soon, I hate it when people lie & keep secrets that can cause issues that could have been avoided.

Reviewer: Terri Day Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18 2012 07:47 pm

Title: Chapter 9-

Nyla is going to fool aroung and lose Gavin.  Just tell the man because if he hears about it from Trent it won't be the truth and it will be ugly.  Trent is evil and disrepectful as hell.  Gavin is the man, and I want him to beat Trent senseless.  Nyla is still going to therapy but she's still afraid of her own shadow.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2012 10:21 pm

Title: Chapter 9-

Nyla just tell him. He's going to find out any way and it won't be good! They are so close to a great relationship I don't want Nyla to ruin it. Fab chapter!  

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 17 2012 08:47 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Tell him!!!

Reviewer: ShelbyD Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 17 2012 03:11 pm

Title: Chapter 9-

She should come clean and tell Gavin before Trent does.  Doesn't she know that Trent will run his mouth?

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 17 2012 12:31 pm

Title: Chapter 9-

I think this is the wrong way to go about this on Nyla's part. Tell him. It was a ONS; they are what they are. Everybody knows this. Is it Gavin's business, really, no. But the situation calls for full disclosure because not doing so just makes it worse. Is it awkward as hell running into your one and only ONS like that? Yes. Is it disconcerting to also discover that your ONS is the best friend of the man you are currently dating and in love with? Yes. But they are adults here. I seriously doubt Gavin is going to hold that against her or judge her on something that happened before they even met. Of course he isn't going to be pleased that his best friend has intimate knowledge of the woman he loves...literally, but there it is. It going to be uncomfortable more for Gavin and Trent than anyone else. Nyla barely remembered him and it was during a devastating time in her life. My concern is that this doesn't move her backwards in her therapy progress. I don't want all her hard work undone by that prick Trent.

Speaking of Trent, he is the one that puzzles me. The fact that he would suggest they hook up again now knowing what's going on says more about him than Nyla. He seems to think that he has her pegged, when in reality, he knows nothing about her or what happened to her in any great detail. He's showing a kind of hostility towards Nyla because of this ONS, for some reason. Again, they are all adults here so what's his problem?

Nice!


Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2012 10:57 am

Title: Chapter 9-

Please tell him, he would not be upset.This was at a bad time in your life, you didn't even remember him because you were drunk. Gavin knows waht you went through and would understand, but keeping it a secret will only fuel the fire.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2012 05:02 am

Title: Chapter 1

Good start to the story. Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2012 08:47 am

Title: Chapter 1

Wow Nyla is so strong and Gavin seems perfect for her.  Once she realizes that all will be well.  That pool scene though was amazing.  I am LOVIN it!  Trent and Abbey need to GET A LIFE.  I see problems ahead due to them both.  Jos needs to get more facts before she does something crazy and PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

Reviewer: Carmel Beauty Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2012 09:32 pm

Title: Chapter 7-Revelations

Sometimes things happen in life to show us that we're actually stronger than we realize and that we can overcome any obstacle with a little help ,preseverance, and faith...

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]
Date: October 02 2012 12:29 am

Title: Chapter 4-Too much too fast

Oh my gosh!!!This is so horrific,I can't even imagine the magnitude of grief one or I would experience after such a loss and the guilt.Poor Nyla,can Gavin also help heal her broke and strickened heart...Hoping so!

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2012 10:52 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Loved the update! Gavin is getting serious. Hope they can make it work.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2012 07:07 am

Title: Chapter 8

Wonderful story

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2012 02:54 am

Title: Chapter 1

Another great chapter.  Thank you!

Reviewer: ShelbyD Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 27 2012 03:15 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Excellent story.  I feel sorry for her friend though.

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2012 12:49 pm



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